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Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
AWWW.... warm fuzzies have multiplied in my heart, I think I'm going to cry I'm so happy... What a wonderful roller coaster! THANKS!
Author's Response: So many thanks for reading and reviewing this story!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No
As long as there is HEA, I will survive anything...
Author's Response: Just hang in there!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Although I know that Bella needs Edward, I can't help but understand how Charlie must feel. It's tearing his heart out to see his daughter in the physical condition she's in...
Author's Response: Charlie handled it really well, all things considered...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
CONTACT!!!!!! I am seriously jumping around in my room right now in excitement! This is awesome... I think I see a light... Very faint, but still a light.... :D THANK YOU FOR WRITING!
Author's Response: You are cracking me up! I'm so glad you're enjoying this!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
i can't wait till the next chapter. love it.
Author's Response: I'll be submitting to the queue tonight!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Can he please grow a brain and realize that she's just as miserable without him as he is? Please? With sugar on top? LOVE THIS STORY! Will be much happier though when Edward's not being such an idiot (but then again what kind of a story would it be if he wasn't like that... Not very interesting that's for sure!) KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
Author's Response: Don't you want to kick him, knowing what you know? LOL!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: nannagud (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
you write the best Jasper ever! loltastic!
kudos on an amaaaazing story, you've kept me up for hours! and I have a psych midterm to study for! im on chapter.. 38 i think, and i love it thus far.
will give you a proper review once i'm done - i know how you love them reviews!
respect!
Author's Response: I love Potty!Mouth!Jasper. He plays a big role in this story!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
Aw... I love Emmett... and even bitchy Rose... And of course, Alice, Jasper, Carlisle, and Esme. But I think Edward needs a shoe thrown at him... Please? Or have Rosalie smack him! Love this story!
Author's Response: LOL! I think a lot of folks felt that way at that point in the story!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
You never fail on awesome chapters.
Pretty much all to say is I LOVE this story and I'm waiting for more! :)
Author's Response: Aw! Thank you so much for your kind words and review!
Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
OMG! I love this story, but seriously, I can't read it at work, I started crying my eyes out! This is such a good story. I love it!
Author's Response: LOL! I should put a do not read at work warning on the story!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jenn32 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
I love how Angela spilled it out for Edward. I do believe that Edward will stick to his word and try to earn her trust back. I think that Esme will help Bella to see this and do little things to help Edward prove he can be trusted. Especially since you believe in HEA. This was a great chapter.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Hey Mrs P
Call me a sadistic bitch but I think Angela could have turned the knife a little bit more. I'm not sure that Edward really understands how bad it was for Bella.
I loved Esme. I think she made some really valid points that Bella needed to hear. That she shouldn't throw their love away too quickly.
Now, I just hope you don't make us wait quite as long for the next chappie.
Love
Annette
Author's Response: Alas, I submit them within 48 hours (I'll be submitting it tonight) but sometimes validation gets backed up! I'm sorry love! Thanks so much for all of your support and reviews!
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
This is the first read through for me on this story and I love it!! It's captured my attention and held it. My best friend says there's too much angst (she's still reading) but I think, so far, it's just the right amount.
So far as I know there is a happy ending. I've read too many stories on Twilighted that start out great and end up devastating me for days. I can't handle those.
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE "Grace". I named my oldest daughter "Alyson Grace" and my youngest "Alaina Faith". I almost wish I would have named Alyson's first name as Grace. I fall inlove with it more and more every time I hear it.
Can't wait to read more. I'm sure I will review again. Take care.
Author's Response: It is an angsty tale, but there is a happy ending. Not to mention a multichapter epilogue which will all be roses and lemons:) I am so glad you gave the story a try!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Love it!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lydchil (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
LOVE this story. I haven't been able to stop reading since I started. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I will be dropping it in queue tonight!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
okay - i am ALWAYS honest with you so here it comes....
I'm slightly disappointed. It feels like you are dragging this story out for the purpose of more chapter and not character progression.
I hope that you're plan is to end this the right way....and i'll be here reading until then.
Author's Response: I am glad you are honest with me. I honestly am not dragging it out on purpose. I'm trying just to tell the story from all perspectives because perception and reality are so different. Each character's perception brings a piece of truth. I am sorry if I disappointed you.
I am not quite sure what to say about the right way. I think the ending is right. It feels right to me. I can only hope that it feels right to you.
Thank you for your comments.
Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
o.o
loved it
XDXDXD
WOWOWOWOWOW
LOVED IT
i think shell tell him. that she loves him but cannot trust him until she is ready and he can see the baby. then a year later she'll finally allow him back or somehting. i dunno but id like them to be together XDXD
LOVED IT
Author's Response: LOL! Well you'll find out what she tells him *next chapter*!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
wow
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
WTF???????????????...
what is happening here?? what happened to edward and bella having a conversation??????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i do apprecriate an author's desire to raise the tension and tease the reader into reading on but the cliffies are getting way old.....thats about the 5th one in a row???
Author's Response: Honestly, they are not meant to be cliffies. It's just where that person's perspective on that event stops. It is not intentional. Bella and Edward will be having a conversation quite soon actually. Just hang in there.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
my dogs fine luckily :) she just has a bad allergic reaction to fleas. wich she been getting from the baad foxes that have been killing our rabbits. i hate those damn foxes. anyways, sorry about goin on lol :)
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
my dogs fine luckily :) she just has a bad allergic reaction to fleas. wich she been getting from the baad foxes that have been killing our rabbits. i hate those damn foxes. anyways, sorry about goin on lol :)
Author's Response: LOL! I am glad she is okay! Thanks for letting me know!
Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Hi, Shirtless Daddyward oh how you have been missed..... you are still loved here and you are forgiven for all the spontaneous ovulation incidents...LOL!!! Ellie this chappie was definitely needed and she really needed a mother's advice.....Edward really needed Angela's input also because she was on the inside when Bella was at her worst and granted she still is but she can give him some insight of what it was like with Bella....I am glad that Esme was the one that told Bella what Edward was like when they were gone because she needed to hear that he was just existing also...Yeah he did f*** up and Bella really needs for him to work for his forgiveness and I know that he will work until his last breath to make it right.....Esme was true that true love is rare and not everyone finds their true loves or they find them and someone screws it up and ends up regretting the rest of their lives....They will get there it just takes time with all the hurt that has been done....I know this is a long review but Ellie you wrote this chappie so beautifully and I just had to let you know that you have taken a very hard subject and made it your own and something that your readers just have feel in love with....Thank you so much for this story!!!!
Author's Response: Wow. You have me between blushing and tears with this review. Thank you so very much for your kind words and all of your support!
Reviewer: Cora (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Can I have Shirtless Daddyward for some time? I've got a very cute 2-months-old baby boy here who needs some cuddling :-)
(and his mother too...)
Thanks for the fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Congrats on the baby! I'll see if he's free for house calls:)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Oh, the angst of it all.
I think for the sake of her daughter, Bella needs to at least give Edward a chance to prove himself again. Otherwise, she is simply giving up.
Author's Response: Let's hope she can.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Trust and Faith
Gah, so heartwrenchingly bittersweet!!!! As always, I can't wait for the next chapter...and I do hope we'll get some more Dadward, because I love him something fierce ;-) Great update.
Author's Response: Edward definitely makes an appearance in the next chapter...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
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