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Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
This story just gets better all the time!
I never have followed a story for this long, i usually give up after a few chapters but with this, i desperately need to know what will happen next!
I hope Bella will take Carlisle's offer but i doubt it, but then i think she will think of elizabteh and what she will need and how Bella and Charlie will need alot of help!
Cant wait to see what happens next!
x
Author's Response: Hmm… what will she decide? And what will Charlie tell her? Definitely food for thought!
I am so glad that you connected with this story and stuck with me for this long! It means the world.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
I loved it! I am hoping that Bella agrees to stay with the Cullens. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hmm… what will she decide? Definitely food for thought.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: 1twilightfan4ever (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
I like Carlisle's proposal...I think she should stay with them. She did say that she would never keep Elizabeth from him and hopefully she will see that Edward loves his daughter very much and with everything that has happened in the last little bit that it would be very hard for him to be apart from her.
I do think that if anyone can get her to stay at the Cullens it will be Charlie. He is just as stubburn as she is and maybe she will listen to him. I think he will also focus on what is best for Elizabeth...she would be surrounded by family members that truly love her. I think that will be the deciding factor in Bella's decision.
Author's Response: Great points!
I guess we will need to see how it all pans out!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
No fair keeping shirtless Daddyward all to yourself! You know you must share!!! That was a nice chapter. But I'm glad that Charlie said that Bella wouldn't want everyone making the decisions for her. That's why this got all messed up to begin with! But she should have Esme to help her. I think Esme's so loving in this fic. Bella needs her.
Great job. Can't wait for more but really, hand over Daddyward...he told us your hands were cold! :-)
Author's Response: Bella definitely needs to be allowed her own decisions from this point forward. Giving guidance is one thing, making up her mind is another.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
(PS- Shirtless Daddyward sends snuggles)
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
Very interesting...I can't wait to see how these arrangements progress. It'll sure be an interesting day in Forks when formerly missing Bella comes home, with a baby no one knew about, AND the Cullens return! The gossippers will have a field day.
Author's Response: Gosh, can you imagine what Lauren Mallory would say? GAH!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
I think Carlisle's proposal is a good one, and I think Charlie will encourage Bella to go and live with them--it would be for the best. And I think Charlie may go one step further and ask Bella to consider that Edward be allowed to be in the house too--but I could be wrong on that one. I hope Bella doen't ask him to stay in the guest cottage.
Author's Response: Hmm… what will she decide? And what will Charlie tell her? Definitely food for thought.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
Well, I'm HOPING Bella will agree to stay with the Cullens..
I have a bad feeling about Edward staying alone in the guesthouse..wallowing in his misery...
Author's Response: Well, no decision has been made yet. Edward has not been banished to the guest cottage and Bella hasn’t accepted the offer to stay…. We shall soon find out!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
Evil lil' chapter! Left wanting more (it will never be enough)!!!! :)
Author's Response: Alas, I don’t know if there is ever a good place to stop! That’s the glitch with WIP’s!
Thanks so much for all of your support!
Reviewer: jennspooningrob (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
Edward just listen to everything you've been telling yourseld. FIGHT! He really did a good job of letting Bella know how he felt before he ran out.
Love Jasper! And Carlisle's response listening to him. hehe
Author's Response: He did hold it together when it counted, and with his family's help, he can hold it together again.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
Yes Jasper is so spot on and I am glad Edward has him to make sense when everything else is up in the air.
Update soon.
Author's Response: Jasper is Edward's perfect foil. They balance each other out.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: cod46 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
My heart broke for Edward, but he knew it was coming. He still has to suffer to be able to get his love back
I love how you depict Jasper here, how strong and wise and selfless he is, in spite of having suffered big time in this story.
See you next chapter
Author's Response: Jasper is probably the strongest and most intuitive of them all... just a little unbalanced.
Thank you!
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
Loved the Mom's take of a four year old mainlining cookies. Had to do that myself last week. I don't mind the angst. Makes the making up even better eventually.
Author's Response: Hopefully, it will make the HEA sweeter...
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: pickeljuice (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
I just have to say how amazing your story is. I couldn't stop! Started at 7pm and read till the last chapter with determination to finish, which I did at midnight! Worth every overwhelming minute(Tears and All!). I love your writing and haven't read a twi fic so heart wrenching as this.
I need closure and that "Happy Ending". Please update soon and Thank You for pouring your heart and soul into this one.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for this! I am so glad you gave my story a try and have enjoyed it...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: locksofglory (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
first i love the story... secondly, i respect your right to design your characters... finally i just wish jasper would be a LITTLE less potty mouth. it is ok to ignore me, i just had to say it!
Author's Response: Alas, this is how he sounds to me...
Feel free to share your opinions anytime:)
Reviewer: pickeljuice (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No
OK! Tears, Tears and more Tears.... I am blown away with this story and must go on in search of that happy ending soon to come.
Author's Response: There will be an HEA, but it does hurt until we get there!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jacobsbestgirl (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
Go Jasper!!! I hope that got through to PussyWard (haha!!) That's now my official name for him! xx
Author's Response: I think a lot of folks have taken a liking to that nickname!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
squee Jasper was Hot!!! I mean even in front of Charlisle GD!!! Wow great come back for the last slap in the face chapter! LOL Post again soon!!!
Author's Response: I think Jasper is an equal opportunity potty mouth - he'll curse in front of anyone!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
bad bad bad person you!!!! Post again ASAP he has to make her see. She has to be stronger. I mean in New Moon I wished Bellas wasn't so easily forgiving but wow. Post Post Post again soon!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Damned if I do and damned if I don't! (just kidding). It is hard when you see her *not* forgiving him right away, hunh?
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Berasheth (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
I'm sorry, I really have been enjoying your story. I've had tears in my eyes at some point in every chapter. Yes, I'm a guy, I know I sound like a little girl saying these things but I can't help it, the Twilight universe is my guilty pleasure/weakness. What I'm about to say won't help my manhood any. Through this whole chapter, listening to Emmett's words I've had the image of the entire Cullen family standing in Bella's room giving her all their love so that she gets stronger, Edward won't be able to do it alone. That's right, I've imagined the Cullen's as Care Bears giving Bella a giant freaking Care Bear stare. I'm going to go look for my manhood now....or just read the next chapter. I truly do enjoy your writing, keep it up!
Author's Response: The Twilight universe is pretty much all of our guilty pleasure here! You're killing me with the Care Bear stare! Oh my stars, that's AWESOME! I love that visual!
If it helps any, my other half has read my work and it's made him all emotional as well! I so appreciate your comments and I am grateful that you found my story and connected to it!
Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
I like Potty Mouth Jasper, it takes away some of the moroseness of Emoward!
Author's Response: Jasper is a great character foil for Edward.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: kingsley (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
Thank you, Jasper!
Author's Response: Jasper definitely told it like it is...
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
Yeah!!!!!
Boy Jazz told 'em didn't he???
Author's Response: Jazz definitely has a singular way of getting his point across.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: samanthayh (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
FACEBOOK IS AWESOME!! EVERYONE SHOULD HAVE ONE!!!!!!
Author's Response: Facebook needed to be in the fic!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: brunettemama (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
*swoons* oh jasper... *swoons*
Author's Response: LOL! Jasper has his own fan club!
Reviewer: nobodysgirl8 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
wow.
Beautiful. That moment with Edward and his little girl....beautiful really. You're amazing really. So talented. The emotions you have put me through tonight.
So glad that Charlie listened in on that too....
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