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Reviewer: twilightbookaddict (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I love this story so much but it always seems like just when the chapter is getting good, it just ends!!! And then I have to wait for a week or more. You're such a great writer and this story is fantabulous. I'm just so anxious to see what happens next. Thank you for writing
Author's Response: Aw! I submit the next chapter within 48 hrs of one going live, but sometimes validation takes time. I'm sorry, but I am so glad you are enjoying the story!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
God, I love Charlie! He just laid it all out there in the end. Brilliant!
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy! Cuts straight to the chase!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Sweet Jesus, Ellie a whipped cream covered Daddyward now that is what I am talking about, hehehehe.....Really, truly loved this chappie....I really love Charlie, his advice I feel will go along way with Bella, well I am hoping it will anyway....I love the last line he told her love was about putting someone on a pedestal and them falling and being there to catch them, that was truly beautiful....
Author's Response: I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me. She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her. I just thought it fit perfectly here.
And a whipped cream covered Daddyward is a thought I can think my teeth into!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
so good, I need some more edward time! :)
Author's Response: You'll get a little Daddyward in the next chapter... More soon after.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Charlie's the best, as are you, Ellie!
--Melanie
Author's Response: Aw, you're too good to me! Thanks, darlin!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Best advice Charlie ever gave. Love that last quote. Its true!
Author's Response: I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me. She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her. I just thought it fit perfectly here.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Charlie is as wise as Jasper, without the potty mouth...LOL
Author's Response: Great analogy! I love them both!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: luckymac (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
That's right Bella, you and Edward keep on calling her Elizabeth, it's YOUR baby, not anyone else's!! Yet another sign your meant to be. No offense to the Lizzies out there, but Lizzie is just too close to Lizard. I knew a poor girl who was called Lizzie the Lizard straight into high school, so I cringe whenever I hear it. Do people not understand the bullying potential and wish to spare their child that? Kids are cruel without your help! For once Charlie's right, dude, go live with the Cullens and be waited on hand and foot in the lap of luxury, with a doctor sleeping down the hall or stay with Charlie with Alice sleeping on the couch... hmm decisions, decisions. Damn girl, who cares how badly he hurt you, kick him out to the guest house temporarily and enjoy some pampering courtesy of Esme and company. Let him woo you back with some nice piano playing and flowers every day. I'll take care of Daddyward while you write the next chapter towards his happy ending.
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, neither she nor Edward is fond of Lizzie and they won't bend! Alas, Alice and Charlie have their own minds!
I am sure Daddyward could use some cuddles....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Oh, Pomme, I love Charlie. I love how he spoke to Bella. On the father/daughter level he let her know she was still his little girl and he would be there to help her and take care of her. On the parent/parent level he let her know he was still his little girl and he would be there to help her and take care of her. I guess the point I am trying to make here is that he laid her options out for her in a manner that she could accept and let her know that the choice is ultimately hers to make and he will support what ever decision she makes.
I did like that fact that she does not want to banish Edward from his home or family by placing him in the cottage. I would hope that means she realizes that he too needs the support of those that love him.
One thing for certain, I could not help but see her smile at the prospect of taking Elizabeth home. This bit of optimism has me feeling hopeful that she and Edward will become the family that Elizabeth needs.
Sandra
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy and definitely laid it out in a non-biased way to Bella. Now it is up to her.
And there is definitely hope!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
You know, nobody ever gives Charlie any credit. I mean, he's the strong silent type. I always see him as a rock, someone Bella can depend on even if she doesn't fully realize it. He's someone that doesn't always express his emotions, although, they are always simmering just under the surface. I really like your portrayal of Charlie and I think you've nailed his personality. Love the story and wish it would never have to end. I would especially love to see some Daddyward in the next chapter! I'll cross my fingers.
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy and I try to write him that way in any fic I write.
We'll see if Daddyward can make an appearance soon:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I'm really glad that Charlie talked to her and gave all the options. Plus she got upset when they suggested Edward move out of the house! Good, that's a good sign. Charlie was really good about it, as much as he wasn't 'pushing' her towards any one direction, he did give the pros & cons of the options she did have.
I honestly look forward to seeing what her decision is.
Author's Response: We shall see what she does with Charlie’s pearls of wisdom…
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
"Okay, remember Immaculate Conception. No one had seen her private parts."
That line reeks of awesomeness!!!!!! LOL
I also ADORED the final line. That is fantastic advice! Ranks up there with what he said in the movie; "Sometimes you've got to learn to love what's good for you."
Yeah Charlie!!! I think he may have planted the necessary seed for Bella's heart to blossom once more for Edward.
Author's Response: I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me. She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her. I just thought it fit perfectly here. Let's just hope Bella can move from here...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Gotta love Charlie!
Author's Response: Isn't he the bee's knees?
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Way to go Charlie! Give him the Dad of the year award!
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: PerennialAddict (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Just started reading, the first chapter pulled me right in. :D
Author's Response: I am so glad you gave my story a try!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I love Charlie in this chapter and I am glad that Bella was actually sticking up for Edward and not wanting him to get kicked out of his house. I really want to see what she decides and see some more interaction with Bella, Edward, and Lizzie.
Author's Response: Charlie did a great job in a tough spot. Bella still loves Edward despite being hurt. She doesn't want to hurt him further. She's just been protecting herself.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Wow, Charlie had some pretty profound words for Bella.
Ok I vote that Bella go stay w/ the Cullens, it's for the best for everyone. Besides, Charlie would be mortified handling the girl stuff!
Author's Response: Charlie can be a profound guy when he wants to! We shall see what Bella does with the info...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
loved charlie's last two quotes
would love to have EPOV with a little father-daughter snuggle time
Author's Response: I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me. She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her. I just thought it fit perfectly here.
We will definitely get more Daddyward shortly.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
So glad you referred to Charlie as a DILF. I always think Carlisle gets too much of the credit--I'd take Charlie with or without a porn stache over him any day! :)
Author's Response: LOL on the stache! I am a lover of Dr. Daddy, but I love Charlie too!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Patsy (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Awe, Charlie really hit the spot! He handled a very difficult conversation with master skills! Props to you!
Author's Response: Gotta love Charlie! He did his best in a truly uncomfortable spot.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twimom143 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I love this!!! Great way to bring Charlie's perspective into the story. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy and had a lot of wisdom to give his daughter. Let's just see what she does with it now...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Love Charlie with all my heart. Poor Bella and the two bad options.
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy! No option will be easy. There's no easy road from here.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Aw, I heart Charlie so hard. He is the greatest. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy! He did good by his kiddo.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I hope Bella moves in with the Cullens!! I loved Charlie in this chapter! :)
Thanks for updating.
xo
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy! Let's hope Bella makes the right choices based on his guidance.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I need a Team Charlie shirt....sigh..
Loved the honesty...and he really gave her a lot to think about! Loved it as always....and anxious for more.
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy! He told her the truth in a way she could understand and accept...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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