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Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Damn I love Charlie. Perfect!!
And, with that, I'm all caught up! Yay!!
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy!
YAY for catching up!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Oh wow - you have nailed Charlie. A man of few words, but he comes through when it counts. Bella certainly has a lot to consider and Charlie will support her either way.
Author's Response: I am so glad you think I did justice to Charlie's character...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: JEM1979 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I always loved Charlie. And his words, especially there at the end, are just priceless. That's one of the most accurate descriptions of love I think I've ever heard. Wonderful job.
Author's Response: I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me. She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her. I just thought it fit perfectly here.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Sporks (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I love charlie... so so much, this chapter was brilliant you write so well from so many perspectives!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I try to make sure each character has their own voice...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
I like the proposal...
They'll be close. That's a start.
Author's Response: And, to be frank, it is the best situation medically for Bella and Elizabeth to be in....
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Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
I do love your Jasper!!
Author's Response: I think he's getting his own fan club!
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Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
It's good that they are finally letting Bella make the choice's in her life. She's got all the information and just needs to make the right one now. I'm hoping that she chooses to go live with the Cullens and lets Edward stay but just has to try and keep out of her way. It's the best option both health wise for her and Elizabeth but also for Bella and Edward's relationship.
Author's Response: Charlie gave her the options in an unbiased way and left it fully in her court. It's up to her now to make the call.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
I'm finally catching up.
ouch
Author's Response: Welcome back! I hope you're enjoying it, even if it is a bit ouchy!
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Reviewer: lowbatterysound (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
GREAT Charlie chapter! Love that quote at the end.
Author's Response: I wish I could take credit for that gem, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me. She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her. I just thought it fit perfectly here.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
That's one smart Dad. Really well written and 100% in character. Well done!
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy! I'm really glad you think I got him right.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Charlie is a wise, wise man
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy!
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Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Another amazing chapter!
Charlie is an awesome father. I knew he would probably tell her that staying with the Cullens would be her best options, but also telling her that true loves takes work and is worth the risk is something she needed to hear.
Bella's pov is next? I bet she'll need to talk to her girls to get their input.
Author's Response: I wish I could take credit for that last line, but my lovely venomousgal shared that with me. She’d heard it long ago and it stuck with her. I just thought it fit perfectly here.
Charlie definitely laid the options out there in an unbiased way Bella could not ignore...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
love it.
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Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
I just love Emmett's voice!
Author's Response: Emmett is such a big bear, but he's incredibly intuitive as well.
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Reviewer: GracieGracie (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Charlie is much much wiser here than in the movie. I like that.
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy! I find him pretty wise in the books, at least:) In his way...
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Reviewer: JenelleCullen (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Rosalie's POV! Come on Rose! She's fiercely protective of her family. Everyone else has said their two cents it's her time. Come on Rose, be in your brother's corner....it's lonely over here
Author's Response: Trust me, the corners are disappearing... Really no need anymore...
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Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Yay!
Author's Response:
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Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I love this chapter. Charlie has some good advice for her. I can't wait for more and for her decision. Great work as always...fucking brilliant!
Author's Response: Charlie is such a DILF (in both stories)! And I've had to clarify in a million reviews that you spoon fed me that last line! Too perfect!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Can I just say, how awesome is Charlie? I really hope she takes the time to digest all that he's shared with her. And maybe, hopefully she'll move in with the Cullens. I mean I can't emagine him helping her with bandages and showers and such.....I Love This Story.
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy! He laid down the truth exactly how she needed to hear it...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Oh my God!! *tears down my face*
Author's Response: Aw! But there is tons of hope here!
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Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Awwwwww Charlie!
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I love me some Charlie! You did good by him.
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy! I am glad you felt I did him justice.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Whipcream covered daddyward!!! Oh, I like the sound of that..
So I would like to hear Rose's POV. I want to know what is running through her mind with all of this. If anyone is really going to knock some sense into Bella it's going to be her.
Author's Response: Ah, the wonders of Whipped Cream Covered Daddyward....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: 1twilightfan4ever (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Good Ole' Charlie...I knew he would give her all the options and not make them for her. Who would have know that all of the actions that he made as a young man with her mom would help him state his case to his own daughter later in life. I really do hope that she stays with the Cullens and that she allows Edward to see Elizabeth. Still not sure that is what she will do though....she could very easily say she wants to stay with Charlie.
I do know that her deciding factor will be what is best for Elizabeth...atleast what is best for her in her mind.
I think that next up will be Edward/Carlisle. I think that Carlisle will discuss with him his conversation about Bella and Elizabeth.
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy! He definitely laid the options out in an unbiased way that Bella couldn't help but understand...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I LOVE CHARLIE!!!! I actually found myself clapping at the end!!! For a man of few words...he's so wise! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this chapter!!! You need to update more often! This once a week business is making me insane! =)
Author's Response: Charlie is such an amazing guy! I generally submit the next chapter w/in 48 hours of the last one going live, but sometimes validation takes time.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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