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Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Love everything that happen in this chapter:) Can't wait to see how life plays out for them.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Was anyone else excited when Bella allowed Edward to lift her into the SUV? I know I was. Yes, I'm feeling hopeful. They have love and Esme on their side, so I know with time they will get there.
I think the last 3 chapters will be Bella setting a routine with Elizabeth and the gradual mending of the relationship between Edward and Bella. They need time to talk everything out. They need time to find their way back to each other. They need time to feel the love and the closeness again...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You're right about the intent, and two of the speakers for the last three chaps of the main story, but who is that third POV? It's next chapter, so you know...
Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I LOVE Esme, she's so sweet and loving and only wants what's best for everyone, which she knows is for Edward and Bella to be together. I was so touchged with how Esme vowed she would do everything in her power to fix things between Edward and Bella. I also thought it was wonderful how Esme offered to help Bella learn how to be a mom and relayed her own story of problems being a first time mom, that really helped Bella make her decision to stay at the Cullens. I cried happy tears when Bella said "No....I don't want him to go" referring to Edward, that in and of itself has to give everyone hope.
As for the last three chapters, I think there will be at least one, possibly the last one before the epilogue, that has Edward and Bella talking, really talking, about things between them and where they stand, where they're going. Not sure about the other two, perhaps another BPOV where she catches Edward with Elizabeth being the loving devoted dad saying how he will do whatever it takes to make up to her mom for what he did.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Well, you have two of three POV's right, although there is only one major "talk" about the past you see (and one about the present). Just wonder who that 3rd POV could be...
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Bella made the best decision, nobody better to enlighten her in motherhood chores than Esme! Having Edward around will be good to lay the proverbial bridges.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Oh Ellie, love, this chapter was phenominal. I love hearing Esme's POV, she's just so kind and thoughtful. She always has hope. Everyone needs an Esme in their life and I'm so glad that she's practically Bella's mother. B's going to need the help.
I'm thinking that we'll hear from Edward's POV at least one more chapter, as well as Bella's for another. The remaining one... well, deep down I still want to hear from Ben, but I know it's not going to happen. So I'll be thinking either Angela, Alice or Emmett. I think we only heard Emmy's POV once... Don't recall exactly, but I may be wrong (it's been known to happen once in a blue moon).
Anyways, love, I can't believe that this story is thisclose to being done with... feels just like yesterday that I found it.
I loved this chapter and am looking forward to seeing more hope bloom (And yes, I am feeling hopeful now).
I hope that you and the fam had fun at the Ren. Fair, you must share pics!
Oh! And I forgot to tell you, I've written a smut-shot... *nervously bites lips and toes ground sheepishly*
Anyways, see ya, sweets!
Author's Response: Esme is the bomb. The mother we all hope we have and that we turn into.
You are 2 out of 3 for the last 2 chapters. Hmmm... who did you miss that I love to write (knowing me, that should SCREAM one of two characters).
I cannot believe how close we are either! GAH! But there is still the epilogue to come.
There are Ren Fair pics on my Facebook! Let me know if I haven't added you yet. You know how to reach me.
SMUT SHOT? And why, pray tell, is that NOT in my inbox???? Hmmm... Get it in my BOX, sista!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Tyley1 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
ah and hope is re born. You did it well, not making it too quick, but giving us a glimmer. another great chapter. and BTW I LOVE CHUBWARD!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
We love Chubward too! Glad you're enjoying the stories!
Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Gawd I remember my terrified nights of new motherhood. My hats totally off to every single mom out there cuz I couldn't have done it without my mom and hubby. So happy to see some seeds of a resolution being planted. That last bit where he carried her in and the first part where he buckled the baby in, made me smile the most.
Sad to be seeing this ending but maybe that means more of Chubward, and IntrovertBella.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I agree with you on those first few nights. I had my man, but no one else as my family was hundreds of miles away and my son was early. It was TOUGH.
Yes, there will be LOTS more of Chubward and Brokella....
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
LOVED this chapter, feeling hope, love that she went home with the cullens, let edward help her in the car, and didn't want him to move to the cottage, so yeah loved it all :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! There is definitely hope here.
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
So sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I love Esme!!! And there is still hope, if Edward is really willing to fight and prove his love to Bella
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Esme's POV was great I really enjoyed seeing everything going on through the eyes of a mother.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
There were times reading this that I freaked out and wanted to pull my hair out with frustration...because I wanted to know more, to learn more about what was going on in everyone's minds...but this chapter was satisfying. Like a really good cheeseburger, fries and malt satisfying. I am so happy with how this is going. I love them so much, and as you already know, I adore Elizabeth and want her to have her fuckhot parents together to be the PILFs... :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
very good! i'm glad she's let him in a little more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Slow and steady....
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I love this story. I've always had hope, but it's nice to see it actually coming to light. I can't wait until the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Keep Hope Alive!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
PLEASE. SOME EPOV SOON!! MY HEART IS WRENCHED OVER HERE, WAITING FOR A HAPPY ENDING!! LOL...ESME'S POV WAS BEAUTIFUL. A MOTHERS LOVE IS WONDERFUL AND SAFE. EDWARDS LUCKY TO HAVE HER!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Edward is definitely in the last 3 POV's
Reviewer: Hev (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
awe I just love your story... I nearly burst with joy every time I log in and see you have updated. You should be proud of yourself xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Thank you so much for your amazing compliments!
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
esme is of course the ultimate mother! I do do love hearing her POV. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am glad you like Esme.
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
i really enjoyed this chpt, i hope the last chapters are bella and edward and there point of view on coming back together cant wait to read what the end has instore
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Well you guess 2 of 3 of the last chapters!
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Hopeful. YAY! I really did need that. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I truly appreciate your support through this whole process!
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Yay!!!! This story has come so far. You never disappoint!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: DazzledLamb (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I absolutely love how you write Esme.. Shes so wonder!! Not that she isn't already.. but the way you write her.. its just beautiful!
Yay for Bella choosing to let Edward stay :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Awwwww... that' was so wonderful. I'm glad that Bella made the decision that she did, while allowing Edward to stay in the house at the same time.
I really liked the fact that she allowed him to pick her up while at the hospital, she does still love him, her heart is just needing more time to repair itself.
Esme was wonderful in this chapter, just want Bella needed, a real mom, with real mom stories (had to giggle at Em's crying, my nephew did that). Bella's really lucky to have so many people who are there for her at this time.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I love Esme and I love her stories. Yes, Em's unfortunate problem comes from personal experience with my son!
Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Esme is such a good mom. She knew exactly what Bella needed to hear at the hospital and on the way back to their house. I loved that Alice bought six car seats. That is such an Alice thing to do :-) She is going to be one proud aunt. I also loved how you portrayed the bond between Edward and Bella (leaving the hospital and entering the Cullen's house). There are so many pov's that I think about when there is less than three chapters left. Each of your characters are so rich and full of life that it's honestly hard for me to choose. The obvious would be an EPOV but I would love to see Charlie's POV at visiting Bella at the Cullen's house. I don't fear what your HEA is. This story has been so realistic that a realistic HEA makes sense. I trust you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Well you are right one count for the last 3 chapters! We shall see about the other 2! Thanks for all of your support!
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
That was a fantastic chapter! Esme has so much to offer and she is often left out of many fics. I love her quiet assertivness!
I would love to hear Bella's POV when she let Edward lift her into the car. They haven't embraced in such a long time - it was too beautiful.
Oh, and I would love to have been a fly on the wall for Charlie and Jasper's ride in the car!
Sorry to hear that it is all coming to an end, but loving where it is heading!
xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad you appreciated Esme's POV!
Reviewer: rpattzgirl13 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
This has got to be my favorite fanfic yet.... bawling my eyes out. Cannot wait for the conclusion of the story. Is there going to be a sequel?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! There will be no sequel, but there is an 8 chapter epi set in the future coming at the end.
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