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Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Great chapter!
Esme definitely is a perfect mother, telling Bella about the uglier parts of motherhood and comforting her.
And there is hope for the little family! Yeah!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Esme's wisdom was definitely needed!
Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Awesome chapter Ellie! I loved it!! I can't wait for the next one!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! *hugs you tight*
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Aww, they are hurting and yet so sweet to each other. I'm definitely feeling some hope in this story now. I can't believe the story ends in 3 chapters and then the epilogue! It just doesn't seem possible! I remember when this story had less than 10 chapters to it! We have come a long way, that's for sure!
I think we need an Edward POV and a Bella POV. As for the last one..hmm, maybe Carlisle or Charlie. Or Jasper is always a good one. I like him. Okay, my vote is Jasper. So Edward, Bella and Jasper. Not necessarily in that order. Haha
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You definitely got 2 of the last POV's but your final answer on the 3rd is incorrect (you did mention the third, which is the next chapter, tho)
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I loved Esme's POV. Glad Bella didn't kick Edward out. I think E and B have a lot more talking to do, but I'd like to see them enjoy some happy baby milestones - and a bit of sleep-deprived; poop cleaning ;baby projectile vomit - yeah, bring out all the good stuff to give us a scenerio that will make them just... frown, twitch and the...LAUGH... together, uncontrollably! it would be such a relief from all this heavy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You'll definitely get some baby interaction in the next few chapters.
Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
oh, emmett...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Emmett is wonderful.
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
awww...even in her sleep she still reacts to him...they Are going to get back together aren't they...? coz if not, as wonderful as this fic is, ii may have to scream.
Esme is just so sweet!!!! And Edward and Bella together...wow....
So goddamn amazing....
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Of course they will make it back to each other...
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
*tear*
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Thanks so much for the great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: karajgil (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
i wish esme was my mom. but then again i wouldnt have my oh so loveable neurocis. haha thank god bella seems to be getting over this whole thing. okay well not getting over but moving forward. i love daddyward. so hop to it! next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! LOL on the neurosis! To that I can relate:)
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Loved that chapter and Esmes POV. Written beautifully as usual! Liked how she readily stepped up to be Bella's mom and help her with the baby but also how she silently hoped for happiness for her son! The passion between these two is still there from the way the touch and talk silently! Amazing!
I love this story so much it doesn't matter who's POV but I am silently hoping for shirtless daddyward! I am missing him right about now!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Don't worry - Daddyward is in all 3 of the last chapters and Shirtless Daddyward will be back in full effect:)
Reviewer: Andi (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
DILF in order: edward, carlisle, charlie!!! lol sigh on the loving glances and unspoken conversations, and swoon on head kisses and tenderness by daddyward!!! loved esme's pov...cant help but love it!!! ready for some happy family times and all.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I concur with your DILF list!
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Yay! Definitely some hope!! ::
I'm glad she is letting Edward stay..at the very least, he deserves to be near his daughter...and this gives him a better chance of proving himself and winning her back!
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Edward can do it! Just believe!
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
i love how you keep this following and still have it tug at the heart strings.. I love how you had the drive home fro Esme's pov... I look forward to your next update about how Bella and Edward are doing and how the rest of the family is dealing. great work hun
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad that you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: jimmy7660 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
That was beautiful!!! I think that telling this part of their story was best told thru Esme's eyes. I loved it and I am hoping for more Edward/Bella/Elizabeth moments, which with them living together should make easier.
Again, great chapter and great story!!!! Also, I love "Becoming The Swan" You ROCK!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad you are enjoying BOTH stories!
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I feel like the broken pieces are finally coming back together. :) Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
OH MY GOD!! *happy tears fall* I am so overcome with this warm happy feeling I don't even know if I have words other than Esme is just the best!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Esme definitely is wonderful!
Reviewer: calemzoe (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I just lurv your Esme....and well, just Esme in general. When I grow up, I want to be just like her. But don't tell my kids that...lol! Nice chapter. Bella and Ed are just so young, and it's just going to take time, I think. As long as they are open and honest to themselves and to each other, LOVE will bring them back together. And not just for Lizzie's sake either.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I feel these two are on the right road now as well.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I love Esme! She is the picture perfect mom, we should all want to be. Not that I'll ever be that good, after all this is a story! LOL This chapter definantly gives me hope! I was worried Bella was going to banish Edward to the guest cottage, glad she wants him to stay!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I wish I were as good a mum as Esme, but it's so hard!!!!
Reviewer: mtgirl (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I love Esme. Very sweet chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
i think bella's doing so well. edward, too.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Esme just makes me feel so warm inside!!! She really is the perfect mother!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I'm so happy. I didn't need tissues or Prozac (even though I really like it) and I didn't want to scream at anyone.
Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Just wonderfully written, and truly believable. Why put angst just for the sake of it? And, knowing Bella, she would be reacting exactly the way you wrote her this chapter. Edward, too.
I'm sure it was a lot of things that led to Bella's decision to move into the Cullen's home, and also, subconciously give Edward a fair shot. But, I think the pivotol moment was when Bella saw Edward with Elizabeth.
Thanks for knowing when to wrap up the story, and thanks for promising the epi and the sequel.
Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I truly appreciate your support.
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
nice.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Izzy Grace (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
I was lucky enough to catch the Tweet that lead me to this chapter early, but I read it again. Nice. I love that she chose to stay with them and the silent conversation btwn her and Eddie. How sweet that he carried her in asleep. *gushes*
Can't wait to see how you mend this Ellie. You are a master of making me awww and "that's so sweet" when you aren't breaking my heart with poor Eddie being an ass.
Update soon my dear. You are doing great.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I so appreciate all of your support! Wow, reading it twice! Thanks, bb!
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