Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No
you hide. every chapter at the eend you hidew. why? we will obviously not harm you in any way, and to anyone that does well they can die. i appriciate you. don't hide
Author's Response: I am so grateful for your comments! Not everyone is so kind...
Thank you for reading for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
ignorance is bliss. some one once told me that. to me, being ignorant is exaactly like being a child. the reason i say this to you is because i cant help but feel bad for the parents, the adults in this situation. what i have come to realize is that there are no children here, only adults and parents
Author's Response: Honestly, you are correct. Overnight, they all grew up.
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
sometimes i feel alice took they leaving the hardest. in new moon i felt for her the most. lost her love, best friend/ sister, and her brother. it's just too much
Author's Response: Alice definitely lost so much...
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
and so it beings. the confrontation of the century
Author's Response: There is a lot of confrontation, although most is gentle...
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
what do you do when some one lays EVERYTHING out on the table for you?
Author's Response: I suppose you try to listen to your heart without totally ignoring your mind.
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
this is what i've been waiting for and i have to say i'm am very pleased with it's outcome. cha[ter 22... always my favorite
Author's Response: So, you like Jasper, eh?
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
facung your mistakes is a difficult task. especially for a stubborn person. he can do this. if anyone it's him.
Author's Response: I am glad you still have faith in him.
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
a boy, a girl? does it/did it matter. yes.no. as long as they are okay.
Author's Response: It doesn't matter to either of them.
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
fight. a broken cat turns into a firece lion
Author's Response: Which often happens in times of distress...
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
childhood. that was very poetic.
Author's Response: I am glad you feel I did it justice.
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
tears. angry tears, frustrating tears. i don't cry. only when there frustrated.
Author's Response: Much frustration. One should want to punch Edward and comfort him at the same time....
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
brick by birck. it's how you build something, build support.
Author's Response: Agreed. There is no easy nor fast solution to this...
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
deminshed. all of it. gone. dust blowing in the wind...
Author's Response: Definitely a truly difficult chapter that almost destroyed it all...
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Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
It's hard to believe we're almost at the end. I love this story hard, Ellie, you've done such an amazing job.
Emse's POV is always one of my fave's. It's always nice to see things as she sees them. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more.
xoxo
Amber
Author's Response: *hugs you*
I am so grateful for all of your support.
Thank you for reading for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
personally rosalie is my least favorite cullen but in all honesty i think she is the absolute truest. hands down. all my devotion is shed upon her.
Author's Response: Rosalie isn't so bad in this story. You will hear more from her shortly.
Thank you for reading for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
adrenaline rushes only come in time of great need. i wonder why a certain alice cullen is the only one who abides to that rule
Author's Response: Hmm... Maybe because the rest of them haven't had that rush yet...
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
i wonder if there was ever a pixie superhero...
Author's Response: I wonder what that costume might look like...
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
stil have the feeling of 'what goes up most come down'
Author's Response: Isn't that the truth?
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
allusion :: something you read in a story that has refrence to the bible.
this single facebook chat reminds me of the day the dove came back to noah on his arch with a twig, indicating that there was inded land.
hope. it gives me hope.
Author's Response: I am so glad this gave you hope. Although I, myself, am not particularly religious, there are quite a few biblical references, particularly in Edward's POV's.
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
bliss. it sounds like somthing sweet, perfect, like... chocolate? but nothing ever is. not completely anyway.
Author's Response: This was their thought of perfection. Alas, it wasn't meant to be... at least not then.
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
a lone needle can never be found in a haystack
Author's Response: Not without a magnet...
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
all a paremt ever loves is their child. all of them. no matter what.
it's time when you bring up things like this that makes me ask myself
who this effects wose of all
Author's Response: That would be a hard call to make...
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Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
emmett, a savior. who would have known. it brings hope thoug. maybe something. maybe
Author's Response: Emmett is such a big bear. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
numbness. it's the absolute worse feeling in the world. pain is a welcomed emotion. it reminds you your alive
Author's Response: Numbness is the only thing allowing these folks to survive. However, if they *felt*, they may *act*
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
angel. angela. i wonder if that was always intended....
Author's Response: If what was always intended?
Angela is such an angel in this story.
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