Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Thanks for the update. You're to easy on Edward. But Bella is always easy on Edward. It's her personality. I'd move out asap and make him beg for years. I'm definately no Bella!
Author's Response: LOL! I know so many are split. Some think she's too easy. Some think she's too hard on him. Me - I'm just going with as close to her core character as I can...
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Reviewer: Cora (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Aaaawwwww, one has to love Daddyward *sigh*
What is it with men and babies? Every time I look at my husband caring for our little son I'm falling in love all over again :-D
I'm really looking forward to the next chapters!! Thanks for this wonderful story!
Love, Cora
Author's Response: Daddyward. *sigh*
It is so sweet! My other half is a stay at home dad so I get lots of moments with them:)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Dragonflygrl (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
I LOVE Daddyward!!!
Author's Response: Daddyward. *sigh*
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Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
My guess is you'll end it with them agreeing to be friends and reveal a fast forward reuinion in the epilogue. Great story by the way. I abandoned it for a while but eventually returned.
Author's Response: Nope. No "just friends".
So glad you came back to the story!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Daddyward is just a doll.
I enjoy Carlisle's perspective on this portion of the story. He's a good observer, with a sharp wit and enormous compassion. Perfect.
Two more chapters, huh? Wow. To make this right? I can see Bella agreeing to eventually take on the college gig, hopefully accompanied by Edward, locally. Tentative, but together in a wary manner.
I am looking forward to your epilogue, I confess!
Author's Response: Daddyward. *sigh*
And Carlisle... the original DILF who spawned a DILF son. So much yumminess.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
I sure do love Daddyward. He makes me all warm and wiggly too! I love that he "might" have been trying to teach her to read...very cute!
And I saw how he snuck in calling Bella "love" haha
And I live Alice and her schedule! Haha
Greay chapter!
Author's Response: Daddyward. *sigh* He loves his girls.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
I love Daddyward. So sweet, really. :) I think when things finally are right with these two, I'll squeal like a fangirl.
Author's Response: Daddyward. *sigh*
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Reviewer: Sporks (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
I cannot wait for the sunshine adn rainbows to blast the end of the story to pieces, I love what you are doing with it. Everything is so honest and emotional but at the same time every chapter that they stay apart totally kills me. I am so so so sad to see this one coming to an end. You are incredibly talented I hope to see much more of your writing in the future!
I can't wait for Bella Edward and Lizzie to be alone together and just hash it out and tell eachother they need to be together....ugh Update soon please!
Sporks
Author's Response: I am so glad you have enjoyed the story! I already have another story out there (a collab with Venomousgal) so if you haven't given it a try, go take a look!
I am sad as well that we're winding down, but I'm so glad that the story is still on track and that so many people have read and enjoyed it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
edWARD SOUNDS LIKE AGREAT DAD ANDHIS ACTIONS SHOWS HOW MUCH HE LOVES BELLA .
Author's Response: He does love her and his daughter so much...
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Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
They are still breaking my heart. So close yet so far away. I most definitly love all the daddyward moments.
Author's Response: Daddyward. *sigh*
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Reviewer: InesCullen (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
I want to cry. They're so cute. I love them. Please happy ending for this story. It doesn't have to be fairy tale like, just a happy ending where people fight together to accomplish what they want in life. That's all I ask.
Author's Response: I assure you, the ending is happy. I save the cookie-filled unicorns and frilly dresses for the epilogue, but the ending is happy.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
No wait........... I got it! During the evening when Emmett has the walkie talkie Elizabeth starts crying. Surprise, surprise Emmett doesn't hear Bella's call for help and Edward (after waking as soon as his daughter first stirs) must answer her call.
It takes a while to settle Elizabeth and Bella (after seeing how tired he is and not being able to resist him for much longer) invites Edward to lay with Lizzie in her bed. What do you think? Am I close?
Author's Response: Strangely, parts of that are close.... But only parts:)
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Reviewer: Twilight_Girl_Ox (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Oh man.. I'm really going to miss this story! It was the first fanfic I read in Twilighted.
Anyways.. amazing chapter. I adore daddyward!
Update soon.
xx
Author's Response: No way?! Your first! I feel so special!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Cute chapter - there has to be some pivitol point where Bella is in no doubt of Edward's devotion to her - I just can't think what. I am hoping for some mummy and daddy time without Elizabeth!
Perhaps in 2 weeks Edward could make his move - he proven his love to his daughter, now it's time to romance Bella! Bring it on!
xxx
Author's Response: Actually, it's quite the opposite of one pivotal moment. But you'll understand soon...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
:)Mmmm....Daddyward
Author's Response: Daddyward. *sigh*
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Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Great chapter. Carlisle is such a kind, nurturing man. Thanks so much for writing.
Author's Response: I love writing Carlisle. He is so perceptive and compassionate.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
If she Edward the chance she will she how much he has changed!
Author's Response: I think she sees a lot...
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: melbourne-cullen (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
love love love this chapter
the timing is nice- they aren't reconciling too quickly that makes it seem unrealistic and they aren't travelling at a snails pace that makes you scream in aggravation
elizabeth sounds like such a beautiful child and i am loving the other characters POV's- it gives something else to the story- a really nice outside look at e&b
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story and the manner in which I am telling it!
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Ah, sweetie...this warm and fuzzy update was much needed! I must say that the sight of Daddyward being there for Bella...and that crazy intense bond that Carlisle could easily see between them...and then the adorable moment of him changing a stinky diaper and putting her in her frilly girly dress...be still my heart! Daddyward for the win! :)
And speaking of yummy Daddys(Hey, I loooove me some Carlisle)....that whole moment with him and Bella...telling her that she can do anything she wants...and that she has all the support in the world...sigh! Made me love him even more. :)
A beautiful update sweetie! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter already! :)
Author's Response: I love writing Carlisle. He is so perceptive and compassionate. And younger Cullen Daddyward? *sigh*
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Lovely chapter! Getting Carlisle's take on the unspoken words between these two was sweet. Great update, and I can't wait for the rest!
Author's Response: I love writing Carlisle. He is so perceptive and compassionate.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Things seem to be moving along for the happy side of things between Edward and Bella:) Can't wait. Loving this story. Update soon.
Author's Response:
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Reviewer: Mi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Awww... I could totally see Edward with Elizabeth, it's just so cute!!!
can't wait for them to be together again!!! =D
Author's Response: Daddyward. *sigh*
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Awwwww, I loved it. I just wanna hug Daddyward and tell him everything will be okay soon enough. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Daddyward. *sigh* . He needs cuddles
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
I love daddyward. He's so sweet. And I think that Carlisle should've been honest about how Edward is when he's not around Bella or Elizabeth. Grrr. But, that's okay. only two more chapters... I can be patient.
Author's Response: Daddyward. *sigh*
Maybe Carlisle should have. I think he sometimes tries to hard to protect his children...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
awwwwwwwwwww as always loved it can't wait 4 more!!!!!!
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