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Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

i love it

 



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Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

Great chapter. Loved hearing from Carlisle. What a sweetie! Thanks for sharing with us!



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I love writing Carlisle.  He is so perceptive and compassionate.

 

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Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

aww cute!! i cant wait till bella is better! ,, loved the chapter and cant wait for the next one!



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Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

I have been alternating happy and sad tears through at least the last 20 chapters.  Jasper doesn't fit with the idea in my head, but I like how you  characterize him.  Edward is well written.  The whole AU-Human thing is a little hard for me, probably because I'm new to Twilight fanfic, but I absolutely adore this story.  I look forward to reading more of this as soon as you post it!



Author's Response:

Jasper doesn't really have a voice in the books/movies so I gave him my own.  It's different, I know.  I'm glad you gave the story a shot and have enjoyed it!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: DeeZ750 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

I want them back together



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It’ll work out.  Have faith I can pull it off!

 

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Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

awwww Carlisle is just the best! he is such a saint.

I'd take hot Daddyward anyday, anyhow!  And he's so sweet when he's all concerned about Bella.



Author's Response:

Daddyward.  *sigh*

 

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Reviewer: dsfq (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

LOVE it!!  More, more, more please!!!



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Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

awww did i say sweet like a red headed sweet potato yet????



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I love that one!

 

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Reviewer: littlelarinda (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

Ah. They need a hea here please ??

Author's Response:

It’ll work out.  Have faith I can pull it off!

 

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Reviewer: dingbatannie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

YOu've gotta update this story! I check every day! This is soooo good!



Author's Response:

I'll put the next chapter in tonight!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

*Squees at daddyward*

 

it was such a good chapter honey. I'm sorry I'm so behind .. I'll email you later .. I stayed in bed other then a few hours for like 2 days

 

I can't think of whos pov is next .. Edward .. or Bella? or even Alice maybe

 

can't wait .. love you!



Author's Response:

Are you okay?  *hugs to you*  Feel better, sweet!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

A little more light at the end of the tunnel.  Great job!  I can't believe Bella is still holding strong, I'd have caved as soon as he held the baby and called me 'love'.  LOL



Author's Response:

LOL!  Daddyward has that effect on folks...

 

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Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

I think it will be B & E pov's next!

I just dont know how this will work out though, i cannot wait to find out!!

This story is truly amazing and is the only one i have stuck with for this long, i would have given up way before if it was any other story, but this is truly PERFECTION!



Author's Response:

Wow!  I so appreciate your comments!

And you are right.  The last two POV's are B/E

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

i know bella is heart broken and she is almost doing what i might have done, if a few  things were different, like for one they were never actually in love, and two he had known about the baby before he left.  But that wasnt the case. Bella really needs to get over herself a bit. its obvious that from the moment he found out about the baby he has been right there and anyone will tell her that and they have. so, she doesnt want to be hurt agian. ok guard your heart a bit. make sure he loves you then you can decide if you want to start loving him. but also talk to him, ask him. men are simple creatures, even edward. she just needs to let go a little and let him in. give it a try. she has the power to say no and change the arrangments anytime she wants to. i cant believe she is acting this way, when they keep telling her its all up to her and what ever she wants. so decide already. stop fighting with yourself and go with your gut. if it doenst work then look back and say, i loved and gained the most wonderful addition to my life from it. and she needs to see that if she cant give her love too edward directly she can and has been giving it to thier daugher... that doesnt ever have to change.

PS - update soon i wanna see how this one plays out... i cant wait!



Author's Response:

I think it's much more complicated than that.  We're not talking about mature, stable adults.  We're talking about scared kids - and ones that are extremely insecure with distorted self-images as it is.  Plus, love was never the issue.  Bella told him she loved him.  It's about trust.  A lot of trust was lost...

 

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Reviewer: enthusiast_23 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

I just love this story... Daddyward is so cute...



Author's Response:

Daddyward.  *sigh*

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lui1313 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

Great chapter! I love Carlisle's mind - he's so pure and compassionate! And I don't really have to write about Edward - I don't think I've ever read about more loving and sweet Dadward than this. And I love the fact that everything is better and better. Thank you for this chapter and update soon, please!

Have a great time!
Lui :)



Author's Response:

Daddyward.  *sigh*

And Carlisle?  Love him.  It's like DILF and DILF, Jr.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

These two belong together, they'll find a way to make it work somehow.



Author's Response:

They will be okay.  Hang in there.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: peculiar1 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

i think Edward should just kiss her and that is that! hahah come on he is suffering so much it makes me suffer! plus he is such a good dad! kiss kiss kiss! hahah great chapter!



Author's Response:

Daddyward.  *sigh*

Alas, a kiss isn't going to fix it...  But there may be one in store.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

Edward's going to make an excellent father. Although, I pity Elizabeth when she's old enough to date. If you think Edward's over-protective now...

I think Bella's warming up to Edward a little more. Now that she's seen how good he is with the baby, she's not going to be able to stop dreaming about raising her together with Edward (even if she tells herself it's not going to happen).

Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Daddyward.  *sigh*  A sight to behold.  And yes, maybe there needs to be an epilogue chapter on Elizabeth's first date...

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

he's doing what is right, for that i am proud.

metamorphasis arward goes to edward =]



Author's Response:

He has definitely made huge changes.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

awww I loved it! it felt like the beginning of something new for Edward and Bella.



Author's Response:

It is definitely a new beginning.

 

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Reviewer: cec (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

I love Daddyward's reaction, I'd love a daddyward of my own thanks!!! great story, keep up the great writing



Author's Response:

Daddyward.  *sigh*

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: loulouau (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

Great Story a lot of angst but loved it well deseved top 10



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Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

AWW,WHAT A HEART WARMING CHAPTER !

Hmm ,would love a little Edward/Bella/Elizabeth time ,maybe Bellas first walk outside with a pram..Edward there in case of ????

Thoroughly enjoying this story 



Author's Response:

You're actuallly kinda close....

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See

lovely chapter.



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