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Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
I loved this chapter! So glad for Bella's epiphany... now she and Edward can go forward and continue to fix things...
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: pinktortise (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
aw, beautiful...excuse me while i go cry :)
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it! I hope they were good tears.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
I like the analogy. It's true that it took just one thing to break them up, but with time, patience and understanding, it can be fixed bit by bit. Lovely! Really. Thanks for sharing. Yeah, I'm going to miss this family so much. Probably foul mouthed Jasper. He's been so much fun! But I think these two will end up with their HEA! And they will be better for having been through it all! Bleassing to you for a wonderful holiday season!
Author's Response: I am glad you thought the vase analogy worked!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Have a lovely holiday as well!
Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
AAAAWWWWEEEE!!!!!
Queue the waterworks!!!
Author's Response: Good tears, I hope!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! I love it - as always!
Poor Jasper - he's facing hard times :D
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Jasper does have some rough times ahead:)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Wow!...I gotta say I love the whole Broken vase analogy in regards to Bella's heart. It's amazing, the imagery that it creates, and the feeling of little pieces of her heart being fixed into place again over simple things that Edward does.
now I'm all weepy :') Good weepy, cause this is almost over, and because, things are getting back on track :)
Slowly but surely.
I LOVE how Edward is with Elizabeth :D
and the way he automatically responded to Esme's qt about coffee to bells! The Dude wasn't even paying attention, he was engrossed in another convo and it just came out like it was the most natural thing ever. *huge Grin*
And he cut up her pancake for her *swoon* My heart is full lol.
LMAO @ Jasper! he SO can't not go without cursing for even a minute much less 10 *rofl*
They walked , they talked and Bella is letting him in :D
She's giving him a chance, and I like that you put it in her POV, I wanna see her be made whole again, and Edward :)
Loved it BB :)
You're almost at the end *hugs*
Lee <3
Author's Response: I am glad you liked the vase analogy. It just felt right.
I cannot believe that we are almost done with this tale. It's almost surreal to me.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LikeToRead (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
I really liked the analogy with the vase. Nicely done. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: I am so glad the vase analogy works for you.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Graet chapter! Gotta love Jasper! THX
Author's Response: Jasper is a hoot.
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Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Ah the simple things - like being able to get your own breakfast - quite empowering considering what Bella's been through.
"...series of small things..." Yes, that can do it.
Jazz is still funny - comic relief.
Wow - Bella apologized to Edward - that's how they can move forward - both taking responsibility for their actions.
"...because you took all that time to fix it, so it means even more to you." oh, this is so true - great analogy.
I understand why you ended there, but I can't help wanting more!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! It had to end there, for now. You will definitely see why in the next chapter.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: cutter58 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
wow cant wait for them to forgive each other and be happpy.
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Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 48 - No Other Eyes Should See
Of Course we HAD to hear from big daddy C!
That right there is a given lol.
I LOVED Daddyward's reaction! *nods head in COMPLETE agreement*
I think I may have died a little at that little interaction and it was something that only certain eyes should see.
The way Daddyward shielded her *thud*XD
ProtectorWard lol, he's an amazing dad and if given the chance again, an amzing husband *happy tear*
Also when he lifted her up, jeez, Daddyward's sweetness and fierceness in protecting his girls, leave me all warm and tingly :D
LOL @ The stinky diaper, props to the man there XD XD
and also for getting his little love into a princess dress! loved it!
Aw he's trying to teach her to read?..such cuteness!
Loved it bb :D
Lee <3
Author's Response: You gotta give mad props to a guy who will not only change a rancid diaper but wriggle an infant into a princess dress. Not an easy task:)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Twilight_Girl_Ox (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! i loved the chapter.
im getting all teary aswell. thank you for creating this story.
update soon.
xx
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Yeah!
They are talking and making good steps! I'm so proud of Bella!
Author's Response: They have come a long way.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Oh Ellie... I love this chapter. That was just beautifully done. Bella is getting there. She just might actually be there!
Author's Response: She is definitely well on her way:)
I appreciate all of your support!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Oh Ellie :') *happy tears*
You said to keep the faith and you didn't let down..omg I am totally freaking out here and smiling like a big idiot and how sweet this chap was!
Gosh I love Esme, and the way she cares for Edward and Bella :D
OMFG Sweet Daddyward leaning into the SUV to buckle in his little love *DEAD ON FLOOR* that must have been a NICE view ;)
and the way he lifted bella into the seat, and how she unconsiously wound her fingers into his amazing hair (i put in the amazing bit lol)
and AGAIN he got to hold her! and she snuggled into his chest! and she DOESN'T want Edward to go! W00t w00t!! Loves it!!
LMAO @ Emmett and his farting issues :P
Bella will certainly never be bored or alone in that house hahah.
Loved it bb :D
Lee <3
Author's Response: Aw, I missed you! Welcome back!
Daddyward makes me tingly. He's so sweet and loving and there are LOTS more scenes with Elizabeth to come. I know there is not much left, but I needed to bring him back a bit:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Loved the vase analogy. Huge strides between Edward and Bella were made in this chapter. I hope this will end in Edward and Bella go to college together with their daughter in tow. Similar to the dream sequence you wrote early on that Bella had of them living off campus in a condo as a family. I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Besides, they're too in love to stay away from each other. Also, imagine Bella, irrevocably tied to the Cullen family through Elizabeth, could she and Edward really stand to see each other involved with other people? You're tale has had them both suffer through enough trama. They deserve some joy and happiness.
Author's Response: I am glad you thought the vase analogy worked!
Hmm... we will see what we can do as far as what happens in the future. The first of the epi chapters is written.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Sophie_2003 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Loved it. It was a very slowburn but well worth it. I am going to continue my campaign of asking for a meadow outtake...pretty pplease?
Author's Response: I am fairly certain I will write the meadow scene as part of the epilogue (although it is more of a prologue).
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Bella is brilliant and the analogy she used with Edward was right on track. It's all about the gradual build in all relationships.
Thanks again for sharing your story.
Author's Response: I am glad you thought the vase analogy worked!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Awww. I'm glad you got that cuddle. *giggle* I love it! Love love love love love it!
Author's Response: Daddyward gives great cuddles....
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Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
That was a really nice analogy that Bella used. I really enjoyed her epiphany in this chapter. I'm sure everything won't be tied up in a bow during the next chapter, but I'd be happy if they are on their way to a HEA. ;)
Author's Response: I am glad you thought the vase analogy worked! And I think you will approve of the next chapter....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Aww, I love this chapter. It's so sweet!! Bella's going to give him a chance and everyone's going to be happy damnit!! :)
Author's Response: LOL! You tell 'em!
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Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
FINALLY!
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Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
yaaaaaaayyyy
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Reviewer: NotTooOldForThis (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Oh, thank goodness! It's time for a HEA.
Author's Response:
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Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Awe!!!!
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