I say it every time, but I so love this story! I hope Bella can forgive Edward and that they get their chance as a family.

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*cross your fingers*

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Ohhh! I love this chapter and your metaphorical vase. Bella is FINALLY back. I mean, her old self. And Edward's sparkling eyes! (I really, and I mean really really wish I had a chance to see them. but no. life's sooo unfair) I'm a bit sad that this story is coming to end, but it's a good news! Edward and Bella will be together forever! (I know, I know, I'm such a pathetic romantic). I definitely adore your style of writing and I'll be waiting for next chapter :).

Have a great time and thank you so much for such an amazing story :).
Lui.

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I am so glad you enjoyed it!

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I've got one thing to say. AWWWWWW.......

Author's Response:

LOL!  And there are not too many "awww" moments in this fiction!

 

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wonderful. simply wonderful.  i'm sad that its drawing to a close, but i'm happy to see it all play out.  its bittersweet ya know? update soon soon please, as much as i dont want it to be over.  i've definitely fallen in love with with shirtless daddyward :)

Author's Response:

I will so miss Shirtless Daddyward.  At least I still have Chubward....

 

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Oh, I love you so much right now. And I didn't have to suck down a Fioricet to read through the chapter.  Well, I started late reading the story but like you I just don't want to let it go.

Oh God, I must be a masochist. Do I even make sense?

Inés

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LOL!  You make sense.

 

 

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Aww, super sweet!! And so true.  It is definitely all of the little pieces that put a relationship back together after such a major blow-out.

Author's Response:

Isn’t it odd how something as small as cutting her food for her brings her to this realization?  It’s the small things.

 

I am glad you thought the vase analogy worked!

 

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Jasper still rocks my world.

 

Thank you for sharing this beautiful story w/ us!!!

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It has been my pleasure. 

 

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I love the vase imagery. It works perfectly. :)

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I am glad you thought the vase analogy worked!

 

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mooore! that was short..i mean not literally because the chapter was quite long..but i was sooo into it that i did not realize it was the end already..:(

Author's Response:

They do go fast sometimes!

 

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I love the feeling in this chapter.  You could really feel the hope and happiness throughout the chapter.  I love your family scenes,  especially the breakfast.  It makes me want to be a part of that family.  I am sad that this story is ending, but know it is time.  I enjoy your writing and will have to read your other stories. 

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Your comments mean the world to me.  I'm sad too, but at least there's still Chubward (...Becomes the Swan).  Still, I'll miss this tale.

 

 

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now thats more like it so glad i found this story and was able to more forward with you i hope that your end is just as powerful as your begininf and i did read becomes th eswan nad I was in love with it from the first page

Author's Response:

It's just taking time.  It's so much easier to look at it from an outside POV and know what the best course of action is.  But getting inside these kids heads... they're so lost and damaged... it just was a slightly more winding road to get there.

 

 

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come on here you kinna left his backbone out of this chapter didnt ya  make him work for it sure but lets help her get her head out of her ass  first never say never it will come back around and bite you on the butt   sure she may need time but they  need to put the baby first   unwed teenage mom helpless right now no money no way to feed and house the baby they should of go into real life first before worring about the  love bull  shit    she knows he loves her and the baby   she need to let him help her by letting him be the dad first  then try to work out the love stuff later

Author's Response:

Wow, you're putting a lot onto a 17 year old who just came out of a coma.  Give her a bit of a break, if you can.  I'm not saying that, rationally, you do not have a point, but this story isn't a rational narrative.  It's a story written from a completely emotional perspective about an extremely difficult situation.  She's not helpless without him.  She has options (Charlie), not to say that that should be the way she goes, but either way, she's not out on the street. 

Again, I'm not disagreeing with you or disrespecting your opinion, but we all do and say things when we are teenagers, especially completely distraught teenagers, that seem so dramatic and aren't always the wisest things to say.