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Reviewer: kikalee (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Sniff Sniff....another stunningly simple and moving chapter. I think this was the perftect way to end the story. I'm happy and sad all at once.
Author's Response: Have a wonderful holiday!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Oh Ellie...my heart is in my throat and the smile is wide upon my face. That was so far beyond what I could have ever expected! Just perfect...
Author's Response: I am so grateful for all of your support, dearheart!
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Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Wow, I think you ended this absolutely perfect. It goes so well with the entire story, and it captures everything so well. I couldn't have asked for a better way to end this.
This was one of the very first fan fics I ever started reading (and the very first AH one) and this is one of the stories that really got me in to this whole universe that is fanfiction.
I'm excited about a fluffy epilogue, but the main story ended absolutely perfect.
Author's Response: Wow. You just made me tear up again! Your support through this journey has not gone unnoticed...
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Reviewer: zpower21 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
I know some people will be upset wtih where this story ends right now, but I like it! I saw your vision and where you wanted to go with it through this chapter. I think it was perfect and sweet. Anything more should be saved for an epi just as you did!
~Z~
Author's Response: Thank you so much for understanding...
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Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
You definitely brought me to a blubbering mess. I'm so glad I read this after I got off work instead of before I headed there. I would have had to reapply my makeup.
What a beautiful ending to a story filled with pain and hurt. They really deserved such a simple night as a family. Skin on skin is a true healer of physical and emotional pain.
smb.
xo
Author's Response: Well, I hope they are good tears. Healing was what these two need...
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Reviewer: Cora (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
*sniff*
At least there are epilogues left...
But I think this is the perfect end for the story - thank you for sharing it!
Lots of love,
Cora (who has to go breastfeeding her 4month old son before it's a world of ouch :-))
Author's Response: Have a wonderful holiday!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
PS - I remember those days! That bit was definitely me talking:)
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Itwas perfect! cant wait for the epi. You are amazing!
Author's Response: Have a wonderful holiday!
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Reviewer: cougellie (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
That was beautiful Ellie! It was a great way to end it, just perfect! I think it matched the tone of your whole story, if you had rainbows and bunnies, etc, it wouldn't seem to fit, you can save that for the epilogue and outtakes etc. Of course I (along with everyone else) am looking forward to the epilogue, can't wait to see what you have in store for Daddyward :) ~Ellie
Author's Response: I am so glad that you enjoyed the ending! It was just how I saw it in my head...
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Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
awe that was amazing...can't wait for the epilogues...
Author's Response: Have a wonderful holiday!
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Reviewer: Beth818 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Your penname means potato.
Loved the chapter, great happy ending!
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, I know. I chose my penname on purpose....
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Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Oh, so beautiful...thank you
Author's Response: Have a wonderful holiday!
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Reviewer: jonjessie (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
It was perfect. Bravo!
Author's Response: Have a wonderful holiday!
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Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
This was such a great end to the story. More realistic than an instantaneous re-match. I'm sad that this story is over but also happy that it is. (Does that make sense?)
Author's Response: It makes perfect sense. I feel much the same way....
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Reviewer: kels16 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
I'm guessing because of the long epilogues, there is no hope for a sequel.... That's sad, because I would really like to see how they cope with being together and being new parents. Great story anyway!
Author's Response: Alas, this story is not about their whole lives together but just a specific event. I don't think the style and format really lend itself to a sequel and I am sorry for that. The epis will give you insight into their lives and I hope that helps.
Have a wonderful holiday!
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Reviewer: Bella Landaeta (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
AHHH I love it.
Author's Response: Have a wonderful holiday!
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Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
that is so sweet..what a perfect family picture..cant wait for the epilogue.
Author's Response: Have a wonderful holiday!
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Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
This was perfection...plain and simple! A beautiful ending...gah! Just made me all kinds of smiley!
Can't wait for the epilogues! :)
Author's Response: I am so glad you approve, darlin! You've been with me forever!
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Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
All I can say is it was beautiful
Author's Response: Have a wonderful holiday!
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Reviewer: arra584 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Aw, Ellie! It was so beautiful! I cried too! I love that Bella made the first move in kissing him! And Daddyward giving her a massage was so unbelievably sweet and sexy! It was a perfect way to end the story that you wrote for these two. They're just so darn cute as parents! I wish I was more eloquent right now, but I'm still sobbing, so forgive me. I agree with you; I don't think the puppies and rainbows route would have been appropriate in this case. Just like in BTS, there was a lot of damage to heal and that takes time. Again, it was a gorgeous way to end the story you wrote and while I will enjoy the happy, lemony times when they come, you definitely did not disappoint with this ending. It was realistic, true, and raw. Loved it! Your words are golden, woman! *kisses and hugs*
Author's Response: Wow, your kind words mean the world to me...
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Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Man, I'm gonna miss this!
Author's Response: Aw! Well, there's still Chubward!
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Reviewer: dana_1779 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
I loved it! You didn't need smut. It was perfect for your Edward and Bella! Although.....a smutty future outtake would be very welcome! LOL!
Author's Response: There will be smut in the future, no worries!
Have a wonderful holiday!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
I'm so happy these two ended up where they are now, even if it was a filled with sadness and heartache along the way. Nothing worth having is ever handed to you,it holds more meaning, I think, when you have to work for it. Great job, amazing story and if I haven't told you lately, I am so proud of you,bb.
Btw I love the Angel reference.
xoxo
Amber
Author's Response: Your support and love alway mean the world to me...
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Reviewer: DazzledLamb (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Aww perfect ending.. I agree with you about the no rainbows and unicorns and fireworks ending.. this story definately did not need that
Author's Response: It just seemed to me that it wouldn't have fit. So this was how I saw this chapter ending.
Have a wonderful holiday!
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Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Unbeiliveable. I started out thinking Bella was insane for not taking Edward back immediatly, but you have shown me the error of my ways. It all worked out in the end. They are making strides and healing. I loved it and can't wait for the epilogues.
Author's Response: Bella just needed time and I think it's better she took it. Now they have a real chance, not constantly staring at the pink elephant in the room...
Have a wonderful holiday!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
*sniffles*
You might need to scoot over and let me cuddle with Daddyward too.
Author's Response: He's got lots of cuddling to do at the moment!
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