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Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
awww happy at last. nice one.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: JaJiTaXx (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
OMG.... the entire story i was crying so hard!!!... i can barely see.....
i loved it!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
It's been a while since I've said anything - I usually read your chapters in between classes or something. So I'm glad I'm out of school for the semester and have time to tell you how much I still love this story!!
I can always tell that you put so much thought and feeling into the story and I love that. It's a fantastic story that took a LOT of tears to get through. ;)
Really, this is just a wonderful, and wonderfully different, story. Great job!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Your comments mean so much to me!
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Reviewer: justjenn (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
They have come full circuit and I believe you wrote the ending beautifully and brilliantly. If they had done anymore, then it would have been too much and not true to the character that you've created.
I can't wait for the epilogues!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: gstout (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Just found your story this afternoon and read it the whole way through. I'm sorry I didn't review the previous chapters but I have a real hard time commenting on really angsty stuff. I'm afraid it would not come across nicely. Anyway, I love the story and this chapter was so great! Looking forward to the epilogues.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Oh, Ellie--who needs rainbows when your HEA here is perfect?! Just loved it! I think this is more beautiful and real than seeing them get married etc. as an ending. Now that it's done, I'm hoping to re-read it from the beginning to get the whole feel of it.
I was LMAO at Edward's questions about breastfeeding and Bella muttering 'hungry, hungry hippo'. I so have BTDT.
Congratulations on completing such a wonderful story. Can't wait for the epilogue chaps!
--melanie
Author's Response: Edward was so trying to understand and I really think it's a "you have to have gone through it" thing. Poor kid. Truly nothing is sacred...
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Reviewer: NotTooOldForThis (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
What an absolutely delightful story! I am so glad you gave them a HEA after all that drama. Thank you.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: Dragonflygrl (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
This is a perfect ending to a great story. I knew they would end up together, but for it to finally happen is wonderful. Loved it when she said vampires are sexy! So so true. **chuckles**
I hope you continue to write after the epilogue. You are very talented.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
I already have another story out there that's only about a quarter of the way in, so go check out Chubward:)
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Reviewer: laurand (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
i'm so ashamed because i've been reading this story for quite a while now but never really got around to reviewing (probably because you already had thousands of reviews..), i'm sorry about that. just thought i should say something while i still have time.
what a wonderful ending. i'm not even sure if an epilogue is necessary, the last chapter was so perfect. symbolic, beautiful and peaceful, i would love if my "last chapter" was like this. it's just.. uhh.
that kiss, edward's massage and bella falling asleep in his arms was so sensual and private, i'm glad that you didn't feel the need to include any lemons - it would've ruined it.
anyway. this is probably the most badly-worded review ever and the fact that i just got back from a 9 hour shift at work doesn't help my language skills.
reading this story has been a pure pleasure, like listening to good music or eating excellent food. i can just sigh in contentment. :) and while i read way more than it is considered to be healthy, just a few fanfictions stick in my head and make me think about them. this is/was one of them. I think your writing is beautiful and, even though I'm sad to see the story end, i can't imagine it getting any better than this.
waiting for the epilogue now:)
thank you for writing this,
Laura.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it and your words were not at all poorly worded. They mean so much to me.
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Reviewer: canthelpit (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
I've loved, loved, loved your story. Each time you've updated (which is very quickly, thank you :) ) I've fallen a little more in love with Daddyward. The many POVs was nice to get each character's perspective. I could really tell a difference in each character's tone, which many other ff writers fail to capture. Can't wait to see what's coming in the Epi's!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! It means a lot to me to hear that I got the character's separate voices right.
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Reviewer: Mi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Awww... I would love to snuggle in Daddyward's chest... where can I get one of those??? pleaseeee???? lol
It was one of the best chapters, you did an amazing job... but everything comes to an end, right? at least we still have the epilogues... =D
Author's Response: Ah, Daddyward. We all need one of those:)
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Reviewer: kimmyg (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Beautiful story! :)
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Great ending to a great story! Thanks for sharing your talent with us!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Sniff
That was a perfect, sweet and gentle ending to a beautifully written story.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: bemily (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Perfect ending to a wonderful story.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: rpattzgirl13 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Thank you for sharing your beautiful story. Can't wait to read the epilogues!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: c_tap77 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Beautiful. I couldn't have hoped for a better ending.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
you were right, i think this is a very fitting ending. i would love to have taken a picture of them in that moment. so poignant and tender..i'm so glad for the progress they have made. i can't believe this is the end. after looking out for the updates for this for so long, i can't believe i am only waiting now for the epilogue/s. but thank you so much for sharing this story. it's one of my faves when it comes to this sort of plot/allusion to what happened in NM. i hope to read the epilogue soon. thanks again. mwah!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I hope to have the epilogues going starting next week.
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
lovely story. Thanks so much for writing.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Bravo.
You could end it now, because it was a perfect ending. For Bella to fall asleep in Edward's arms, after having fed Elizabeth was so full of meaning.
She nourished their daughter. She was trusting enough of Edward to know that even if she fell asleep, he would put their daughter in her bassinett. For a mother to trust someone with their own child's safety is the epitome of trust. More than anything else, you protect your children. And, this showed that she trusted Edward enough to take that last step with Elizabeth.
And, to fall asleep with her hed nestled on Edward's heart? Well, that certainly sybolized her enduring love for him.
When he massaged her back where it hurt from her breastfeeding, he was providing for her needs, without asking anything in return.
To end the story with the two of them in bed, without any sexuality, but with the peace of sleep and the presence of lunconditional love is a perfect happily ever after.
Thank you for sharing your fic. It's been an entertaining ride.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I really felt this was the "right" place for this to end. I'm glad you felt it was a good place as well.
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Reviewer: CkKollman (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
:'( That was a very very good end :')
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: mustaintiffany (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
you know i love you. you know i love this story. i cant thank you enough for sharing it with us all. you are a truly gifted and talented woman. love you lots! muah!
Author's Response: *hugs you*
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Reviewer: ChrisR (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Yep, I was teary eyed reading this chapter. Excellent job and an amazing story!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Sweet:) Things are getting better for Edward and Bella slow but sure. Love the story.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: froggydee (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
A very sweet way to end :).
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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