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Reviewer: Kyramy (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
I don't know when the last time I reviewed this story was.. if I ever did.. I tend to forget to review in the excitement of reading a new chapter!!
Anyways.. i love this story.. and I'm really glsd that there are epilogues (plural!! :D) to come :)
You dont so much well in this story.. but listing things isn't usually a great review XD So I'll just say the thing I loved most.. the thing I loved most is how your story is real. Bella doesn't forgive Edward straight away and go back to the way they were.. she makes him work to prove that he loves her and you show how it takes time to forgive someone when they have betrayed you in that way.. I absolutely loved your metaphor of the broken vase!! So perfect and so true!! Anyways.. can't wait for the Epilogues :D
Loved it. Kyra xx :D
Author's Response: I really wanted the story to remain real... I'm glad I accomplished that.
Happy New Year!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Love it. :-) The permanence is quite profound. :-)
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
That was a very sweet chapter. Thank you.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Sniffles sniffles....this was so... Tender, gentle, beautiful! Just like you wrote... Sometimes there are no words... It's just that deep and pure...
This was totally different... This was classic romance! You deserve a Hotward massage from your long hours over a keyboard!!
Author's Response: Aw! I'd love the Hotward massage!!!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
Aww, Bella misses Edward and wants him bad... She won't admit, I wouldn't... Lol
it was a good conversation... And no emo Edward to depress us... Just man up Edward
Author's Response: She does miss him....
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: 1twilightfan4ever (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
What a perfect ending to a wonderful story...I don't think that there could have been a better HEA for this story. They must take small baby steps to rebuild their relationship...you have showed us that they are building a strong foundation to a forever HEA!
I really have loved this story from the beginning...thank you so much for sharing this Edward and Bella with us!
Author's Response: Wow, you've made me teary. I'm so glad that you feel that I did this story, and the ending, justice.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
with poms poms shouting " Go Team Jasper!"
Author's Response: Jasper so rocks:)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Great! Don't spoil us! Take us through the ringer! We know true love can't be destroyed!!! (laughing like a maniac)
Author's Response: Lol! Just keep believing!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
She should let him suffer.....major kissing licking tata to ass type begging for forgiveness...
Author's Response: Oh, he definitely suffers.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
We need more Jasper's in the world! Can't wait for Em's turn.
I'd probably have Alice buy me a leather suit- that dominitrix attire- I'm sure Emmett would appreciate a woman in control... here's to whipping Em in submission...Whack baby!..aren't alternate universes fun, especially when real life is so lame? Lol
Author's Response: LOL! AU's are the best. We all need an escape.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Don't Give Up
Carlisle is awesomeness!!! Can he be my daddy?
As for epilogue idea--- maybe each character reflecting on these hard moments and how it changed them, what they took away from such an experience, how it benefitted their own relationships- trust, communication, forgiveness, unconditional love, treasuring family and friends despite all the dysfunction....oh oh oh, how about Charlie and grandaughter moment, feeling he has been given a second chance
Author's Response: Dr Daddy is my second favourite Cullen man and by far the easiest for me to write. I know, weird, right?
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth
Pounding chest "me want Edward!" yeah, I could be pissed all I want but let me see his face and sex hair no matter how thin and I'll want more than just a hug and apology....yeah yeah, I know, she's got emo stuff to figure out... I need a friend like Angela...
Author's Response: They both have stuff to figure out. This kind of damage is not solved overnight...
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dsfq (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
This has been a wonderful story!! THANK YOU!!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
This made me tear up just a little, and I almost never cry.
Once again, excellent job. :)
Author's Response: I hope they were good tears. We're on the road back to where we should be... finally.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing
Doin the happy dance the happy dance~^~^~^~
Author's Response: She's coming back!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Thank you!!! The name is perfect.... A classic.... I was holding my breath cuz renesmee is what the hell!?
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Thank you!!! The name is perfect.... A classic.... I was holding my breath cuz renesmee is what the hell!?
Author's Response: LOL! I hated that name. Bella would have never gone that route, IMHO.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light
Amoxcilln! That really eased up the moment there....needed that...hmmmm... What would he name her? Renesme?
Author's Response: Oh heavens no. Not Reneesme....
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
**sniffle sniffle** no words... Too choked up....
... I realized this is your parrallel to Bella being torn , broken when her baby was being born in breaking dawn...you know I hate that book... Your version is better anytime! Her daddy is there at least....Ok I'm strong enough to read the next chapter now...
Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't happy that there was zero bonding between Edward and Nessie in BD. I hope this working better for you.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Ok... I had to read the next chapter... My kids are eating popcorn to hold them off... Yay!!!!! For baby Bella!!! I'm calming down now, kids are back looking at the tv... I think I'm freaking them out but I'm good now...
Author's Response: Oh, don't scare the wee ones! It'll be okay!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
I need to take intermission before I go to the next chapter... This is feeling too real.... My kids are looking at me if I've done lost it.., how do I explain to them I'm crying over fictional characters?! You are good....
Author's Response: I need to post more warnings, methinks!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No
I need a Valium! Something to calm my racing heart.., I swear you are torturing us(I love it)..,story is so angsty I can't even stop reading to feed my kids!!! I trust you to not kill Bella off.....here I go to the next chapter
Author's Response: Make sure to feed the tots! The story will still be there when you are done!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
I finally cried! Poor Charlie! Having to see his little girl like that...thank goodness he left his gun behind...ohhh stop the pain!
Author's Response: Charlie - gosh did he have a lot to swallow in a short time...
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
He should have been slapped a few times! Ben should have punched him... But since it's sexy Edward, one is ok. What a depressing chapter. He is sooo emo!
Author's Response: He's definitely an emo kid. He has a lot of growing up to do in a very short time.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kateyes1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Ahhhh!
Author's Response:
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