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Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Oh, that was nice. And sweet. And hot.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Wow, nice, sweet and hot was exactly what I was going for!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Loved the picture you created of them hugging as a family unit. There is just something about a family hug. To this day they fill my heart with warmth and love.
I also liked the reality of school, home, family and "their" time. It is often hard to find the time to cover all the bases. It's all about balance.
Love you Pomme.
Sandra
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! It really is a balance and it's so hard to keep every ball in the air, so to speak.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Le sigh - Shirtless Damp Daddyward!
"Lather, rinse, repeat."- so true!
Cockblocked by the kid - been there, done that!!
I like slow and sweet - perfect way to end it!
Beautiful Ellie, just beautiful!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Yes, I am definitely more than aware of the "lather, rinse, repeat" and the kid-block... *sigh* But I wouldn't trade the tot for the world...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: newfiegirl (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
What an AMAZING story so far...LOVE IT..can't wait to see what happens !!!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Latour (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
great great story, one of the best fanfics i've read.
thank you
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I am honoured by your compliment...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Latour (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears
oh crying again....
Author's Response: *hands you kleenex*
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
OMG OMG!!! Perfect!!! Yay!!!
*sniff* thanks for this story--I loved it!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
I am so behind on reviewing. So, firstly, I must apologize for the delay. I loved Edward and Bella's first time. It was so good. I loved Edward's pov. He loves Bella so much and Bella trusts him so much. I absolutely loved how much he cares for her. I have a feeling that when they come together sexually in the future it's going to be even more passionate. I am so beyond excited for the next chapters. Thank you <3
Author's Response: No worries on reviewing, darlin! There is a "future" scene up now, so I hope that you feel as though you were right!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
I have to say "wow" - that was amazing! I laughed, cried, got really pissed, and frustrated. It was just all so good. Loved your Jasper - he had me laughing and snorting like crazy.
Thanks for sharing - it was definately worth the time it took to read.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Jasper is definitely his own man....
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
It was as sweet as I always pictured it would be with both being completely at the mercy of the other. What makes it nicer is that it was an expression of their love for each other rather than a "I'm horny, and I can't stop" kind of thing.
Author's Response: This was definitely about love first and teenaged hormones second.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Latour (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
loving it, though you keep making me cry :-(
Author's Response: There are definitely a lot of tears in this story...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: purplewaters (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
this is an amazing story! i love your characterizations, you really got to the heart of bella and edward.
an idea for an "epilouge"
edward, bella, and lizzie at the park with the little boys and their daddies :)
Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it! I tried very hard to give each character a very distinct voice and be consistent with them throughout the story.
Did you check out the chapter that went up last Tuesday night? It confused a lot of folks because the *newest* chapter is actually the Prologue, chapter *one*! When you click on the story, it is listed now as chapter one, Pretty and The Starlet. Enjoy!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
Ahh, when you say the scene is not exactly cronological...are you talking about when Lizzie was concieved???? I thought, just like Charlie, it was immaculate conception! lol
p.s: You melt me! Awwwwwwww! Gimme fluff! ;)
Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it!
The chapter of which you speak went up LAST Tuesday night. It confused a lot of folks because the *newest* chapter is actually the Prologue, chapter *one*! When you click on the story, it is listed now as chapter one, Pretty and The Starlet. Enjoy!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Oh my..... forever indeed. Beautiful, as usual. Can anyone say outtakes? Sequel? ;) *hint*
Author's Response: No sequel and no outtakes, but there are going to be multiple epilogue chapters, the first two of which aare up!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
Dang! Who knew Charlie had a way with the words????
This last phrase? I´m soooo gonna put it on my daily planner! ;)
Author's Response: Charlie may be a man of few words, but they are generally wise ones:)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
That was perfectly sweet.
Author's Response: Aw, shucks. Thanks:) Did you bring your toothbrush? LOL
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: ashboo713 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
such a good epi!! had me crying happy tears!!
Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Did you check out the chapter that went up last Tuesday night? It confused a lot of folks because the *newest* chapter is actually the Prologue, chapter *one*! When you click on the story, it is listed now as chapter one, Pretty and The Starlet. Enjoy!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Katrela (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
I loved it! It took me 2 days to get here but I though it ended beautifully. I loved all the characters, esp Jazz! And the story didn't drag with the jumping of POV's like some do. Sometimes you end up hearing the same thing 4 times before you can move on and it gets boring. You managed to avoid that! And I liked that it took them time, that Bella made him work for it! and something so simple as peeking in at 3am and just being a family was what it took to put that last piece in place. If it was missing anything at the end, I would say that I was looking forward to the 3 of them falling asleep together and having the POV change right at the end with the family all in the doorway in the morningseeing them so happy and loving. Looking forward to the epilogues!
Bethanne
Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it! I just couldn't see why the entire family would be up, realistically, at 3 am to check in on Bella, or I would've gone that route. I try to stick to the real as much as I can. But sweet idea!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Cullen10192 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
this story was sooo good one of the best ive read!!
Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it! What a compliment!
Did you check out the chapter that went up last week? It confused a lot of folks because the *newest* chapter is actually the Prologue, chapter *one*! When you click on the story, it is listed now as chapter one, Pretty and The Starlet. Enjoy!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Ellis (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 09:07 AM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
i meant lock them in the cottage - but a closet is ok aswell lol
Author's Response: LOL! Just lock 'em someplace:)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: aai0528 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
Beautiful! I just LOVED this story, so much. You did such a wonderful job. Thanks for putting so much of yourself into this!
Author's Response: I am so glad you have enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 08:33 PM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
*claps* I didn't know you had it in you to write fluff!!! Good job on that... This was a great journey to take! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it! I know the fluff may have given you pause but yes, I really wrote it...
Did you check out the chapter that went up Tuesday night? It confused a lot of folks because the *newest* chapter is actually the Prologue, chapter *one*! When you click on the story, it is listed now as chapter one, Pretty and The Starlet. Enjoy!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
this has to be one of the most beautifully written lemons i have read, the love between them was palpable!
Author's Response: Wow. That means a lot! I wanted a lemon, but one that spoke volumes. I hope I got that right:)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
My god this is the most harribly wonderful thing I've ever read. You could change peoples names and have your own best seller. After every chapter I text my friend abt how great this is. Thank you thank you!
Author's Response: Wow! No way??? That means the world to me:)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Ellis (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
loving the fluff - jesus we needed it!!! i thought we were'nt going to get our HEA. talk about angst ridden - i loved it ive spend the past 5 days reading it. wonderful - and REAL
hhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmm i wonder wht tht *one* scene was . . . . . .
meadow lovin?>> me thinks
you could maybe add in some loving in the condo, just like he promised in bellas dream
maybe a wedding - oh oh oh maybe their college graduation - and Elizabeth will be there - aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww
p.s. dnt forget to have edward as shirtless as possible please :D
Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Did you check out the chapter that went up Tuesday night? It confused a lot of folks because the *newest* chapter is actually the Prologue, chapter *one*! When you click on the story, it is listed now as chapter one, Pretty and The Starlet. Enjoy!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
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