Reviewer: theladyingrey (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
This was beautiful. I personally can't imagine having sex without protection as a 17 year old. But their passion is pretty intense. And it would kind of kill the rest of the story if they'd been thinking clearly, wouldn't it?
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I completely agree with the "sex without protection" on a personal level but I did it for 2 reasons. One, the obvious - there wouldn't have been this story if they'd been more cautious! Two, these two were completely taken aback - Edward never thought she'd break his resolve and Bella never thought it could be broken, so they were wholly swept away and surprised by the other's actions...
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Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
That was great. I remember those moments when the kids, just toddlers would call at the most inopportune times. Really fun reading. Great story!! Great writing! :)
Joanie
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Yes, kiddos, particularly toddlers, are experts at Coitus Interruptus...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
awesome
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
And what delicious fluff it was!! MMMMmmmmmm Great writing. So much emotion in every word. Scrumptous reading. :)
Joanie
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! It was definitely fun to write a little fluff!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Loved it!!! :0)
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
most writters when they say they end dont realive that readers has thoughts of what if and then i wonder what became of them you extras are just what was need i could read a dozen more like this this story was so full of pain from the first chapter i glad you were able to add all the happies in now
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I felt that, after all I put the readers through, it was only fair to hear them out and let folks have a little of what they wanted, after the fact.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Oh poor Edward and Bella getting blocked but hey have learn to make it happen!
Author's Response: Yes, Coitus Interruptus is quite a common condition in a home with kids!
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Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Oh, how I remember those days (and nights.) With a toddler around, it's a wonder parents ever get time to make another baby. :o)
I love this chapter! It's sweet and sexy and very real.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I did try to stick with the "real" theme that was part of the whole story.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
great chapter! i love reading their domestic life! the interupting was very funny! good work; i'm gonna miss this story...
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! There are still a few more chapters left...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Miss_Beckie_Louise (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
aw cute.
Is this the end then?
I don't want it to be over!
xo Beckie
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! No, there will be several more epilogue chapters...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
OMG, I loved this latest epi/OT. Them getting interrupted, her falling asleep and them him coming back and they still got to be together *swoon*! I was one of the uber confused last week, so I did have two updates today which was quite nice :) Glad this one was voted on and can't wait to see what else you come up with!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I confused so many people last week and I'm sorry, but I'm glad you got a double dose this week!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
The bedroom scene was HOT!!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
awe - children are the most amazing cockblockers - they have a sixth sense I tell ya!!
But this was a sweet chapter all in all.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I think you are right about the sixth sense!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Hahaha! Oh I loved it, how do kids always know EXACTLY when to wake up?! Our 2 yr old did the same thing to us a few days ago! Awesome chapter, love seeing these two living the sweet & fluffy life.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I have a 2 year old as well, so I feel your pain!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Great chapter!!! I was laughing so hard when Elizabeth interrupted things!! LOL :)
Thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Elizabeth caused Daddyward Interruptus. *sigh*
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
bahahaha! I love that Elizabeth interupted the nookie! Cracks me up :) Awesome chapter bb!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Elizabeth definitely caused Daddyward Interruptus!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
there's a reason i never had children..............lol!
Author's Response: LOL! They are experts at Coitus Interruptus...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Awesome!!! I've loved this story from the begining, and this chapter was no different. Just as great as the rest. Great Job!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: cougellie (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Loved it as always Ellie! What a sweet look into their lives. I like how it's not perfect but that they are making it work. I guess I got confused with where they were going to go to college from the last epi, I reread the line about Harvard and now understand that it wasn't where they were accepted, but somewhere else, and now we know it was UW. Can't wait for more of the epis. ~Ellie
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, the Harvard thing was just Jasper's way of expressing that year off and GED or not, they could've gone wherever they chose...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Hate to break it to them that it ony gets harder with teenagers in the house! 2 year olds will believe you were just wrestling on the bed. Love Daddyward and I am so glad you gave us the bookends for this story.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Oh, the old "bed wrestling".....
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
naaaawwwwww.....i dont no whether to say aww cute or ugh...HOT! lol x
as per usual i completely loved it :D
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! If you have to wonder which adjective fits best, I did my job right!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Squee! I can't count how many times one of my 3 children have interupted us via the monitor grrr! LOL Loved the chap but wait is she on birth control ? Can she even have moire kids? They didn't use a condom?? Could this go on and on and on. LOL Elizabeth would love a sibling! LMAO! see I knew this could go all sequel. Post again soon I love these mini takes!
Author's Response: Kids are the ultimate block!
Is she on birth control? Good questions (I'd say yes at this point). Can she have more kids? May-be (although I'll answer that in another epi chapter). Did they use a condom? Nope.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
Man, I hate when that happens! Our private nicknames for our boys are CB & CB2!
Author's Response: That's hilarious! I think it's happened to all of us at one point or another!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: superfly99 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
loved it.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act
I just love Daddyward Ellie! What a great chap/epilogue
Author's Response: Daddyward is the best. I love him so.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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