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Reviewer: Ellis (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

elizabeth baby - bad timing!!!! lol



Author's Response:

Do toddlers ever have *good* timing?

 

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Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

You=my freaking hero.

I love this story and the epi's (the double treat I got) was freaking amazing.

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE.

Please just keep writing epi's until I die :D



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  LOL!  I can't write it until you die, darlin', but I do have a few more to go!

 

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Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

loved it! i need me an edward... lol



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  We all need an Edward, methinks!

 

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Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 04:08 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Aww!

How sweet!

I had a review for my o/s where right when the reader was getting to the good part, her kid came up and she had to switch windows. Lol!

I thought it kind of related.

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  LOL on the one shot comment!  I know once Tater Tot can read, I'll have to be MUCH more careful.

 

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Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

AAAHHHHHHHH

LOVED IT AS ALWAYS!!!!

IS THERE GUNNA BE ANYMORE PLLZZZZZ

(A) PLZZ PLZZ (A) 

THAT WAS AMAZING BUT... GRR SHE INTURUPTEDD... lol

XXXXXXXXXXX LOVE IT 

P.S- the film is being put off until a friend of mine gets back from united states hes there for anuva 6months... :/ sorry x 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  There will be several more epilogue chapters.  I'm thinking about (maybe) five.  I'll definitely let you know when it's the last one when I get there...

I appreciate the movie update!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Poor Edward... I feel his pain, I have 2 of the age that can do that, and one of them isn't in a cot anymore and can open all the doors in our house...



Author's Response:

Mine can climb out of his own crib (time for the big boy bed) and open every door in the house, so I feel the pain as well...

 

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Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet

Ha! You really confused me last week! I missed what you'd done entirely!

Lovely lemon, Bella the seductress, ironic in a way.



Author's Response:

*sigh*  Go me trying to get all fancy and chronological....

 

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Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Aaaaahhhh, poor babies!  That is so real life!!!  Love Daddyward.  He's such a sweetie.  You did a really nice job with that.  These two deserve their HEA!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  I wanted to stay real, but real doesn't mean unhappy:)  Just a little harder than the fairytale...

 

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Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Ah Shirtless Daddyward, I get why Elizabeth is Daddy's girl. 

This really is a dream come true, I'm so happy these 3 got their happy ending



Author's Response:

LOL!  I think we all are Shirtless Daddyward's girls:)

 

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Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Her little arms opened, one wrapping around Edward’s neck, the other around mine.  I closed my eyes, smelling her baby scent and his clean, showered, woodsy smell. .......This is so sweet...

The interruption? We used to call it "baby radar" when our son was little



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  The family time is definitely worth it, despite the Coitus Interruptus.

 

 

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Reviewer: SeanEmma4Evr (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Oh Elizabeth! She's just adorable. I wanna hug her to pieces. Though I imagine, based on this chapter, she doesn't take to people quite like she takes to her mommy and daddy.

So cute.

I heart the rest of this chapter. It was sweet, endearing, and we got a little bit of lemon action! Always nice for this couple. They deserve it after the hell they went through trying to get Elizabeth.

They've got quite the system. Glad to see you putting in how difficult caring for a baby is. I think babies have been glamorized, and though they truly are a blessing, I don't think girls need to read and see more about how easy it is to take care of one. It's not. It's hard work, expensive, and time consuming. It appears our couple here still struggle and that's with the aid of many behind them. Hell, grandma babysits nearly everyday! Now THAT'S lucky.

Good to see Shirtless Daddyward back. I've missed him.

Sigh. I'm not sure what other chapters are coming. I can't wait for the rest - well done, my dear.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  You are so right - babies are complicated even in the best of circumstances.  Other than their ages, these two have everything they need in the way of help and it's still a strain.  I truly wanted to stick with keeping the story real, even in the happy times...

 

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Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet

I am so happy that their first time was so beautiful



Author's Response:

I wish that we all could have such pleasant first experiences....

 

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Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

So sweet...so deserved after so much angst.  Thank you...very nice chapter.  Lovely story (well, the ending anyway...the rest was kinda stressful - but good).

 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

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Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Aww, I love them all happy smiley and family! Sigh! Little Elizabeth...just adorable! Though she did interrupt...you gotta love her calling for her daddy! So freaking cute!

LOOOOVEDD it!



Author's Response:

Isn't she a cute little blocker?  LOL!  What a daddy's girl!?

 

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Reviewer: Kyramy (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Aww!! I read both :D
I am actually so gutted though that I didn't realise that it was the prologue that was new last week.. I could have read it a week sooner.. on the upside it meant that I got 2 chappies this week :D
Love this story.. Here's to hoping there are many more to come (+ the other epilogue's.. can't forget the epilogue's XD)
Kyra xx *glomp*



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  There are a few more epilogue chapters to come and one other story already out there:)

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

They are so cute. :) <3 



Author's Response:

Aren't they?  You just want to kiss 'em all:)

 

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Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Great job loved it a lot

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Great job loved it a lot



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

always perfect!! thanks for clarify the last update.. that too was perfect!!

 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Hopefully, you'll now get to read both updates!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Shirtless wet Daddyward was hot! Damn hot! Too bad that he got cockblocked by his own daughter later, but it was so sweet. I love Edward moments with his daughter, especially when she said please. I like that he was rewarded in the end with his quality time with his gal.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Yes, Elizabeth is a daddy's girl and he's very deserving of it:)

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

aw, that was so sweet! i love that she's a daddy's girl. good job! can't wait to read the meadow scene

 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  The meadow scene is up and listed now as the Prologue:)  Enjoy:)

 

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Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet

completely awesome



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

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Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

Daddyward Interruptus - how funny!  That was a pretty honest depiction of family for those two with all the activities they are involved in. 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  I wanted to stay "real" even within the HEA.  And from my own experience, this is real:)

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Epilogue the Second - The Juggling Act

This story has been great! I loved the "DADDYYY PWEEEZEEE!!!!!" it was so spot on! I remember those days & now w/ another baby I'll be doing it all over again.

 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Babies are so good at Coitus Interruptus!  Congrats on the new baby!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet

If only everyone's first time could be like that.  :)



Author's Response:

I wish they could!

 

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