Reviewer: dreamsatnight (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
I normally lurk here but I had to come out of hiding to comment on this:
"Don't you love Aunt Rose?"
Et tu, kiddo?
Hahahah. Emmett's hilarious!
Author's Response: LOL! Emmett is definitely one of a kind! I appreciate you coming out of hiding!
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Reviewer: knmezzo15 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
i wanna see all of them in walt disney world!!!
Author's Response: I wanna go with them!
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Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
Hey Mrs P
I loved that chapter. I wasn't sure I was going to at first, but the further I read the more I liked it. Emmett is always fun and I loved his slant on everything. When's he going to grow a pair and ask Rose though?
Thanks for being so good to us and posting these.
Annette
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Em finally grew the pair toward the end. I so appreciate all of your support.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
god, loooooved emmett's pov... but i wished we'd have seen him proposing... oh well, no reason to complain though because the chapter was perfect.
Yours is the best characterisation of Jasper ever! Even without one line of dialogue he manages to crack us up so hard! I can only imagine his speech... Gosh! Pure bliss!
thanks for the update :)
Author's Response:
Hey! Jasper had one line! LOL! More like one word. But if you like Jasper, you should *love* the next chapter...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: missy85 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
Oh, I loved this chapter. Such a great perspective to put it in, and I love that you didn't make Emmett stupid because i've never thought he was. I just see him as a bit of a goof, who's a straight talker.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Emmett is not at all stupid. He's very perceptive and sensitive, he just chooses to look at the light side of lift!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: bbbluez (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
Lovely chapter! I was hysterical when imagining Elizabeth at the ceremony throwing rose petals!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! LOL! I've seen toddlers do that before. Quite funny.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
Beautiful....loved it. Thanks.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: edwardftw85 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
AWWWW.... Emmetts noticing he's been domesticated lol good chapter very cute
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:43 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
i absolutely LOVED that it was from emmett's pov and listening to him love rose but be scared of marriage...
my favorite part "Alice’s toast which was kinda like watching a Chihuahua barking while running in a circle trying to catch her tail."
followed by "my dumb-ass emo-tard of a brother"
good job! :D
Author's Response: LOL! A lot of folks liked those lines:) I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
I think this just might be my favorite epilogue yet. They just keep getting better! i think Emmett was the perfect choice to narrate this part of the tale. The part with him and Lizzie made my heart smile. And watching him agonize over proposing to Rose made me giggle. Can't wait to see what your next flash forward will reaveal. :)
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it and that I made your heart smile:) Emmett just wanted to tell this part of the story, so I let him!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
Life through Emmett's eyes is always a bowl of cherries with whip cream on top. He is the eternal optimist, telling it like it is and with great wisdom and humor. I am so glad you did this from his pov. I can't even say what I liked best. Whether from his humorous place of his tender hearted viewpoint, it was the perfect telling of the story.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Emmett just was the one who wanted to talk when I sat down to write....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
Ohhh, I loved the chapter from Emmett's POV but I wish you'd kept his proposal in it! :)
Author's Response: Alas, these are just brief glimpses into their lives. We're not quite done yet. You'll know what happened to everyone by the end...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
HOORAY!! I'm so glad that Bella finally married him!! I'm sure he's relieved, and now convinced that she finally, fully forgives him. :) And Emmet's POV is always a hoot! Now if only he'd get his shit together and pop the Q to Rose before he accidentally throws that diamond into the wash with his pants!
Bella's dress sounds perfect....pretty and feminine and simple. I'm with her - no big wedding for me - too much drama and BS and stress and pressure! Keep it simple, or elope! :)
Author's Response: She forgave him long ago, but I do know what you mean. I think Bella was just trying to do *something* in her order (college, marriage, baby). But they've tied the knot now so all is well.
I agree whole heartedly about keeping it simple. No fuss.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
I love Emmett and you write him so funny. I loved the Einstein and Curie comment. I have enjoyed this and will follow anything you write. Good Luck and thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Emmett is so fun to write:)
If you aren't reading Becomes the Swan yet, give it a try!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
The wedding was perfect. Your description of Alice walking down the aisle was so funny! I loved Emmett's POV. Wished the proposal would have been in there...hint
Author's Response: Alas, I'm only showing glimpses into the future and we won't see that proposal, but that does not mean that we won't see what happens....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kikalee (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
"Alice’s toast which was kinda like watching a Chihuahua barking while running in a circle trying to catch her tail." Best line ever!!!! Another great chapter, You can write angst, fluff AND humor....whoo!
Author's Response: LOL! A lot of folks liked that line:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
I am so glad to have hearty doses of fluff in this story. I loved it without the epilogues, but I think it's a bit more balanced this way. Beautifully done, as always.
Author's Response: Well, these kids deserved a bit of happy....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
cool
Author's Response:
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Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
Loved it...It was much cooler from Emmett's point of view. Loved his conversation with Elizabeth...SOOO Cute!
Author's Response:
I am so glad you enjoyed it! Emmett just wanted to be the one to tell the tale.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
I loved Emmetts POV (When is he going to pop the question to Rose?) Loved the wedding a the simplicity of it made it more than beautiful. You have painted such a brilliant picture in my mind with this story and the epiloges and I am so glad you have given us all these extras!
Author's Response:
I am so glad you enjoyed it and that you are able to visualize the scenes I give you.
I'm pretty sure Emmett took care of business not long after the wedding:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: semistar175 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
*sigh*
Fantastic. Just...perfect.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
this was great....a welome relief from the angst of the earlier chapters...i'm surprised that Emmett didn't suggest that he be the one to marry E & B by getting ordained online...i can really see him doing that....Disney for the second week of their honeymoon sounds great in theory with a three year old...travelling with a young child is very draining...but fun still...
Author's Response: LOL! Em being the one to marry them would have been hilarious. But alas, no.
Trust me, I have been to Disney with a year old, so I know what that's like! But it'll be 8 adults and just one kid, so they'll probably be able to handle her... hopefully.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
I do love Emmett!!!! He is like the big brother I never had!
Author's Response: He is a bit of the quintessential big bro, isn't he?
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
I loved Em's POV! He always is the life of the party.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Emmett is a fun guy (if a nervous one, in this chapter).
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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