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Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing
So happy Bella is awake. I do hope she can forgive Edward soon, but I know it will take time. I can't wait to read when she meets her daughter. Thanks!
Author's Response: It's all coming! And the main part of the story is now over, so you can read straight through instead of having to wait!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
I absolutely loved having a chapter with Emmet's thoughts! The wedding was wonderful. I really liked it when Emmet thought, "Charlie finally got her to us ...", For some reason I really liked how you had him so involved in the process. Emmet's character is always so enjoyable, but I especially enjoyed him they way you wrote this chapter!
Thank you!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! I really like Emmett and find him to be very perceptive and kind, not as the dense meathead he is often portrayed. He just wanted to tell this part of the story.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Aww Jasper has a little girl! I like that he got emotional about it and that Alice knew she was gonna name her Victoria and just wanted to fuck with him. I may have to use that. Well, maybe on my boy. I already have my girl figured out. Brooke Lynn Kay.
Author's Response: Aw! How cute:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Yes! Absolutely loving these epi's! Alice getting him all riled up about the name, cute!
Author's Response: Alice definitely pulled a nine month mind freak on our Dadsper! It all worked out though!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
WHY SO MANY EPILOGUEs? WHY NOT HAVE IT BEEN JUST CHAPTER AFTER CHAPTER WITH LIKE TITLES LIKE 3 YEARS LATER, 5 YEARS LATER, JASPER & ALICE... ect ect.?
love it anyways-continue
Author's Response: The title epilogue is denoting that it is not part of the story. It is happening after the story itself has ended. My story ended with the first epi, however, I am doing the rest from request (they are not part of the originally written tale).
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
You know how I love your pouty mouth Jasper! And he's a dad now! Loved it, I like seeing how they have a grown and what became of them. You are amazing, Thank you for keeping this going! And for keeping the quality of writing so wonderful.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! What amazing compliments! I appreciate all your kind words.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
nice
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 08:04 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
What can I say? I just LOVED this! Jasper is going to be the perfect dad! I just hope she doesn't adopt his colorful vocabulary!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! He's going to have to be careful with his language, but he got some definite practice with Lizzie!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Jenn32 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
AWWW.. I loved this chapter. So sweet!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kikalee (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
That was awesome! I laughed my ass off....cocknuggets????? I need to use that one in my daily commute!
Author's Response: I have a blast coming up with new descriptive names for Jasper to use:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: nitrogirl313 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
This chapter was great. I love Alice/Jasper. Would you maybe do a chapter about them getting together. That would be a great back story. Anyway, love it as usual.
Author's Response: Alas, there aren't many chapters left and they are all going forward from here. I wish I could write everything I ever thought of in regard to these characters, but that would probably take the rest of my life!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
He is the funniest character on Twilighted.net! Deserves his own show I reckon!
Author's Response: I honestly think more people like Jasper in this story than any of the rest of the characters! LOL! I'm glad folks have bonded with my Potty Mouth Boy.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Boy, Alice really kept him sweating! Loved the male bonding. Dadsper - finally!
Lovely Ellie!
Liz
Author's Response: I know, right? We finally have Dadsper to go with Popmet and Daddyward! LOL! It's a trifecta!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sochain is solas (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
i've said it before, but it's definately worth repeating after this wonderful chapter- i effing love jasper in all of his foulmouthed glory! loved the tricky pixie name game too. absolutely adorable- can't wait for the next update! and yeah, the epi's are a lovely change of pace after all of the heartfail. you rock!
Author's Response: Jasper definitely has his own fanclub! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Hey Mrs P
Alice was just cruel to Jasper, but that was so funny. I love baby chapters and I love Jasper's potty mouth.
Thanks for the update and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Annette
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Alice was a little cruel, but gave him a great surprise in the end, so I think it was probably worth it:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Awe, Jasper's a Dad!!!
My guess, next Epi.... something like Chapter 9: Like this.... a little Bella preggers smexing?!?! :)
-Kari :)
Author's Response: Yup! We now have Dadsper!
And hmmm... you might be on to something with your guess. MAYBE:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
I absolutely love, Love, LOVE Jasper. The nervousness he felt at Alice giving birth to their daughter was so endearing. Yes, I said endearing. That is the only way I could envision Jasper waiting for his new love. I found myself laughing through most of the chapter. Jasper shock at the name of his and Alice's daughter was priceless. So Emmett and Rose have twins :-) This brings me much, much joy. Even if you don't write it, I can imagine how he would react to his girls turning into teenagers and starting to date ;-) I also love how Edward and Bella's reaction to Jasper's panic. It was hilarious.
So we have a bit of steamy time in the next chapter. Hmmm. Maybe it might be Edward and Bella making love for the first time after Elizabeth was born. Even if that's not it, I can't wait to read the rest of the prologue's you have planned.
Thank you so much for the update!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Rose and Em's kids are stairsteps rather than twins - a boy and a girl. But yes, Em will definitely have a hard time when she starts to date (especially since he works at the High School)!
Poor Jasper! Alice pulled quite the mind freak on him. BUt it all turned out well in the end:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Yaaaaaaaayyyyy! Love it!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
wow! this was so sweet... poor jasper...he went through a lot of shit too.. he deserves his happy ending with his girls and some well deserving right to cuss..
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! He's getting his HEA just as the rest of them:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: GracieGracie (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Can we have some Emmet and Rose loving? I love this chapter and Alice was incredible!
Author's Response: Alas, I don't think that's in the cards. There are only a few chapters left and I'm fairly certain what will go in each (at least one is already written).
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dingbatannie (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
cute and hilarious!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
I love that Alice opted for Victoria! That's what I named my first daughter.
I got a kick out of making Jasper sweat it out & especially Edward & Bella's reaction.
Author's Response: At least Bella was in on Alice's ploy (methinks Edward as well). SO glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twi-sessed (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
That was so awesome!!!! They made me laugh and cry at the same time. I really have loved your story from the very beginning, and I can't wait to see what's next for the Cullen clan. By the way, I love Jasper's expressive and colorful vocabulary. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it and appreciate you sticking with me this whole time! Jasper definitely is a colourful guy and a complete blast to write!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Awww daddysper. How sweet. I love the banter. I'm guessing Em got up the balls to propose to Rose. Three little Cullens and a Hale. What more could you ask for. Oooh some steamy time. Can't wait!
Author's Response: Dadsper - the last to fall. Yes, Em did propose, and marry, Rose, immediately starting to produce their own football team. Steamy times are up next, so hang in there!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Hon...you know much I puffy heart your Jasper...I think it's the potty mouth! :) I love him freaking out over having a kid named Paris Hale...but then once he met her and knew the name did but didn't matter...and woo hoo Alice! LOVE her at the end...that was cute!
Author's Response: Aw! It's Dadsper! How cute! And Alice did a right proper mind freak on her poor hubs.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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