Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
wow, holy crap the way you ended i think my heart stopped! wow that was brilliant and paingul
Author's Response: Imagine if there was no next button!
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
ohh goodness edward is going to get a whole lot of news when he gets to seattle wow that was an intense chapter!
Author's Response: More news than he may be capable of dealing with....
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
ohhh my good lord damnnnn; i really hope she doesnt loose the baby this would be so devestating!
Author's Response: I promise, swear, I won't do anything to the baby.
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
wow i wonder how angry edward will be with the family when he finds out that they all knew that was definitely a wonderful chapter loved the interaction between edward and alice!
Author's Response: I think that his feelings about what is going on with Bella is going to eclipse his anger and disappointment with his family....
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
so the plan is set! cant wait to see what happens now@! especially with everyone ready to go back to seattle
Author's Response: Hang onto your hat! It's not exactly a smooth ride.
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
wow, that was just wow.... the talk the pain and everyone is hurting and everoyne is scared that was so sad and so bittersweeet :(
Author's Response: The tragedy is that every last one of these folks, save maybe Angela, made a horrible mistake. And now they have to fix it.
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
He really is the man of action that was an awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Emmett doesn't like the planning bits. He just wants to get it done.
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
oh thank god, oh thank god!! that was an amazing chapter and finally a connection has been made!
Author's Response: Something concrete to hold onto!
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
wow that was so sad and depressing i wanted to cry so much for them :(
Author's Response: They really wanted the same things. They just didn't go about it the right way.
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
ohh man the search is on! that was an excellent chapter
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
oh god, the contacts have been made that was definitely an awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Slowly but surely, they are pulling together.
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
ohhhh man, i really hope that emmett will be able to help angela when it comes to bella and edward back together!
Author's Response: Hopefully someone can drag them all back together!
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
wow :( they are all so sad :'(
Author's Response: It is one big circle of sad. This didn't work out well for anyone.
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
oh my goodness... i hope somehow that angela and alice get in touch :( that was so sad
Author's Response: Angela certainly needs some help with this....
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
oh i was crying again that was so sad and painful :(
Author's Response: Not a pretty picture, hunh?
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
ohh my god, i think i cried through the entire chapter when i was reading this, *sniffles*
Author's Response: It is a tough story to read a lot of the time - not going to lie....
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
ohhhh my goodness shes pregnant i wonder how edward will take that!
Author's Response: Um... if he finds out! (Although I know you know the answer by now!)
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Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
Love the chapter. Always love Jasper and his potty mouth. Alice messing with him is too cute. Love the name too.
Amber
Author's Response: Potty Mouth Jasper is certainly one of a kind:) Alice managed a nine month mind freak on him!
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Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
wow that was defintiely an awesome chapter!! I thought it was briliantly written
Author's Response: It was actually written after the rest of the story, so sorry if the A/N made little sense!
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Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
You've made up for all those chapters I hated way back when. (I probably just couldn't handle the 'angst'.)
Author's Response: I am glad I was able to redeem myself. The story is very angsty until the end, so I understand.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet
Well, I've only been reading this all day and while I don't agree (or maybe I should say like) all of the storyline (you know - the "let's all hate on Edward" part), I've cried like a baby for the last several chapters. This one was beautifully written. I'm sure I'm so tired by now that I will need to re-read it tomorrow though to fully appreciate it.
Author's Response: I hope that, in the end, you can appreciate the story and hope you enjoy the remainder of the epilogues.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 49 - The Vase
You can come out from behind the steel doors now. I did love the vase analogy... that was really good.
Author's Response:
*phew* I am glad.
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Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Maybe a 'little' hope...
Author's Response: There is always hope.
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Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Equals
I'm still not rating your chapters anymore because they make me angry but... I did love Charlie's quote at the end so I'll rate this one.
Author's Response: People are trying to calm down and think now. I know it's hard as the story has so many chapters, but remember these events happened in a short number of days, not the months it took to write the story. The characters, all of them, are all in shock, a complete mess, and not thinking straight.
But they will....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 45 - Here's to Hoping
I think Carlisle's proposal is bullshit. I agree with Esme. They shouls all be able to coexist in the main house. Or for that matter, Bella can live in the damn cottage and Esme, Alice & Rose can trade off shifts with her THERE. Why, oh why, does your story make Edward carry all the weight of this. Really? He's 17 fucking years old!
Author's Response: He simply doesn't. They all feel guilt and blame and they all were wrong. Remember, perceptions/emotions and reasons are vastly different things....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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