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Reviewer: Mi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
It's so nice that you decided to write all this epilogues, cause it feels like it didn't end... which I love cause once the epilogues are done I'm so gonna miss this!! =D
Author's Response: Only three more left to post! It's sad for me that we're almost done with these folks!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Great, I remember feeling like a whale with my second, with the hormones driving me mad. My own personal Baby-daddy wasn't as useful as Edward though... shame!
Author's Response: LOL! Mine is pretty darned good, but I don't know if any man can live up to the high standards of Daddyward.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
sweet, sexy, hot and oh so truthful
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
That was amazing. When I was pregnant I had moments of feeling like Bella. Thankfully hubby always did something to show me how much he still loved me. Granted it was nothing like Bella got but we can't all be like Bella now can we... LOL
I love that they were able to give Elizabeth a little brother or sister. It is so nice to see them enjoying what they were not able to the first time around. I cannot wait to see what's next.
Author's Response: I wish we all had a Daddyward around for just those moments! OR even any moment where we needed a boost:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: vikki_22 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
it may be a happy thing but you have me crying like a baby so congrats for that coz its not often someone can make me cry lovin the story tho u have me hooked.
Author's Response: I am so sorry for making you cry, although I'm happy you're connecting with the characters....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Nice....oh to have such a thoughtful and romantic husband....he's gone a few days and he writes letters and calls and sends flowers....wow! Edward is just too perfect...of course he always is...! Thanks again...for an excellent story.
Author's Response: Daddyward takes nothing at all for granted. I think he learned his lesson almost too well!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Rowzy (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
I read most of the chapter and just skiped the lemon. I really want to see more when the kids are older. I want to see Elizabeths first boyfriend and stuff like that.
Author's Response: Well, there are only 3 more epi's left, so there is a limit to what you will see. But you will definitely see their future - including, if not particularly, Elizabeth's.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: obsessivebehaviors (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Perfect! You got it so right. Loved Edward's response - and Bella must have been "out" for a while?
You know, this was my most sexually appealing time of life - my husband could not get enough of the feel of our growing child - and the hormones! Wow!
If possible I would have remaining in a family way for years, but alas, there is the product - child (children) to care for and who has the stamina to care for an army?
Author's Response: LOL! And I was the opposite. Even though the hormones were nice, I couldn't WAIT to be done being pregnant. It was NOT a good time for me! Everyone is different, though!
We all, however, deserve a Daddyward:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
That was beautiful! I can't wait to see what they name it! Haha, I'm always excited about that part! It might help to put how old Elizabeth is in the authors note. But maybe I'm the only one that took 5 minutes to figure it out. Great chapter, very well done!
Author's Response: Just remember, she was born in 2009, so subtract 9 from whatever the date at the top of the chapter is and you have a ballpark of her age:)
You'll get pulled up to date with ages in the next chapter....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: treeclimber (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
OMG... every pregnant woman should read this chapter. I'm not pregnant now, but would have loved to read it when I felt fat and unattractive. And my guess.... twins! Even tho keep in mind just b/c Edward is a twin has no scientific bearing on her having twins.....
Author's Response: Hmmm... Well you'll know by the next chapter!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Great chapter! I can't even explain what I thought about it :)! Lol!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
absolute perfection!!!!!!!!!! thank you so much for these glimpses into their lives after everything they went through.
Author's Response: I am so glad you have been enjoying them!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lizzierichards (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
WOW! That was hot! Well done! Sweet Edward! Are they having a boy this time?
Author's Response: You will know by the very next chapter:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
i want this edward sooooooooooooooooooooooooo bad......it almost hurts...especially when i realise he's your creation.........but i STILL want him
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo bad.......lol....
Author's Response: LOL! I wish I could write him into being. I really do:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
I HAVE BEEN IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY SINCE THE FIRST CHAPTER GOING TO THE MEADOW I HOPE YOU WILL CONSIDER DOING A BIRTH SCENE WITH THIS BABY SINCE THE OTHER BIRTH WAS SO TRAGIC AND THEY WERE ROBBBED OF ANY BIRTH CONNECTION HER LABOR AND BIRTH AND A SCENE WHEN HE MEETS THE NEW BABY I STILL CRY WHEN I THINK OF THE FIRST TIME HE SAW ELIZEBETH THEY NEED CLOSURE GIVE THEM A BEAUTIFUL BIRTH WITH LIMITED TRAMA AND LOVING FAMILY AROUND I CANT WAIT YOUR A BEAUTIFUL STORY TELLER DO THIS FOR YOUR BIGGEST FAN ME
Author's Response:
Alas, the rest of the epilogues are written and have been, save for the last few paragraphs of the last chapter, for a while. Perhaps I can write it for an author auction or outtake in the future....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jacndaniel (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
you did a fantastic job with it! that moment is inevitable in every pregnancy, and what Daddyward did is the ONLY acceptable remedy. not everyone is lucky enough to have that remedy, but it's nice to read that Bella did. makes me love Edward even more than i already do! i absolutely adore these epilogues! they make me so happy, to see that our fave Cullen's are still happy is ever!
Author's Response: I am surprised no one has had a stroke finding that I can write fluff and not just angst:) LOL!
Yes, I thik the vast majority of us do have these moments during pregnancy. One can only wish there were enough Daddywards for us all!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Gotta love a Edward that has to get his point across!!! Loved it. Still can't believe this story is basically finished! Will definitely have to go back and reread! Great job!
Author's Response: Yup - only 3 more epis to go. It's so sad to me - the story is almost a year in the making!
Hope you enjoy it if you re-read!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Unfortunately not. When I was pregnant I felt fat like most women do at one point or another and asked hubby if I looked fat. His response? YES! I could have killed him. I said "Gee thanks!" He replied with "But babe, your pregnant! You're supposed to look fat!" Yeah not helping!
Author's Response: Oh no he DIDN'T!!! Oh that is so frustrating!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: alice is awesome like that (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
i love a good lemon =)
how many more epis are you planning on doing?
Author's Response: There should be three more to post. All in chronological order from here.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Chocoholic-Vampire0419 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan
This was just OMFG funny and sweet, and all kinds of nice and sweet. Your Jasper may have had some screws loose but he definitely keeps you entertained. I love him and him as a daddy is just too sweet. Great job I absolutely love this story!
Author's Response: I think our dear Jasper has his own fan club!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
That was perfect! Edward is the man. I love Daddyward.
Author's Response: I wish there were enough Daddywards for all....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EmiMills (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
I like this story, good job.
Author's Response: I am so glad you have enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
Fantastic job writing Edward's dialog describing his love, lust, and protection of Bella. Especially the paragraph of:
“And this,” he whispered, his voice still husky, but taking on an undercurrent of reverence. His index finger traced my navel in slowly expanding circles, “the thought that we made this together, that we made love and we created this, God.” He wrapped one arm around my ribs and the other around my hips, framing my belly between his arms. “This is beautiful. You, swollen with my child. My claim to you and yours to me. The irrefutable symbol of who we belong to, where we belong. The more it grows, the more people will know that we belong to each other,” he paused, licking the sensitive area behind my ear,” and that we did sexy, unspeakable things to get you in this condition.”
What woman wouldn't love a man who could put that into words?
Author's Response: *sigh* Don't we all deserve a Daddyward?
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
“I called the chief resident and explained my pregnant wife had a fainting spell and we couldn’t make it. Granted, I left out the part about fucking her into said fainting spell.”....LOL!
Author's Response: Oh, Daddyward....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lisambb (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Epilogue the Fifth - Playing with a Picasso
You know, every time I see this pop up I am alwaysa thrilled because I know it will be lovely. I truly think you hit the nail on the head with the pregnancy whack job stuff. It's hard to go from skinny to whale like within a couple of days and it's especially nice when someone appreciates it and reminds you that it is beautiful and not yukky. There's lots of yukky to come with that stuff! Can't wait to see if another epilogue comes my way. Thanks!
Author's Response: Now if only all of us could have a Daddyward to remind us!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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