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Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
Except for the drinking, I really liked it! I just howled with inner laughter at Bella exposing herself a bit to control Eddie. Sigh.... Still glad they're hot for each other after 20 years. :) REALLY REALLY REALLY appreciate these epilogues - they are AWESOME!!!! Great job!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I should clarify that Elizabeth is hardly an avid partier - she is basically a good girl, but she also is no angel so a nip out of a flask at a Homecoming game is not out of character. She has a bit of Uncle Coach in her:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
So Elizabeth is a bit of a bad girl! Drinking w/ her friends. I guess you can't blame the girl too much after having to deal w/ all her friends swooning over all the adult males in her family! Too funny!
I so was not expecting Jake to make an appearance as Elizabeth's beau. Poor Edward, being ganged up on by all the women in his life!
I have thoroughly enjoyed the journey (even if I did cry my eyes out through several chapters!). It's hard to believe the journey is nearly over.
Author's Response: I finished the last chapter on Saturday. It's so hard to let these kids go....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
I love the cougar pen! And its good to hear from angela again!
Author's Response: She's been there the whole time, alas, it's hard to include everyone in every chapter! I'm glad I had the chance to bring her back in!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
LOL.. i love it!! edward really didn't stand a chance! but i'm glad he still tried.. hehe.. :) and bella is super cool!
Author's Response: Daddyward was doomed from the start on this one....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
Aww, poor Daddyward, I knew someone was going to pull the 'second chances' card, just thought it would be Bella.
Elizabeth is mostly as I suspected her to be, still daddy's girl but I am surprised she's drinking, guess it's a teenager on homecoming night thing.
*Sigh* So sad to see this ending, I have really loved this story. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us.
Author's Response: I wouldn't say she's a mad partier by any stretch, but she's not such an angel that she's beyond sneaking a nip at the Homecoming game!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
Oh Pomme. I think what I love most about the epi's is that they have been so light and fun to read. This one was so typical of teenage girls. Elizabeth's friends talking about her father was so much fun. A while back I saw an age enhanced picture of R Patz and I can see where the teenagers of tomarrow will be as enamored as the girls of today. But beyond the crushes on the dad I laughed at what Edward thought of Jacob. Putting him in there as you did was perfect.
And it will be okay to finish the last couple of paragraphs. I can only imagine how hard this will be for you when it is over. I guess the flip side is all of the readers you have met along the way. A part of your heart will live within each and every one of us.
Sandra
Author's Response: Wow. You just made me teary again! What a thoughtful thing to say to me. It means a lot.
I finished the last epilogue on Saturday and will likely put it in queue tonight. I cried on and off. It's so hard to let these kids go....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
Cougar pen. That's funny.
Author's Response: Tee hee. Either way, he wasn't coming out alive....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
Well I'm really sad that this is coming to an end, but this was another excellent update. I thought you did a great job with Elizabeth. I love Daddyward though. He is my favorite. I can't wait to read the final epi! Good luck with it. I know it's gonna be sad for you. It will be for all of us readers as well. I'm sure it will be great though.
Author's Response: I finished it Saturday and cried on and off all day. It's hard to let these kids go....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
Loved the whole chapter!!! Even the part about masen...
So sad to see the end comeing
Author's Response: You will see a little more of Masen in the final chapter. Alas, the story isn't about him. I wish I had more time to develop that character....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
I think that was the cutest chapter yet. I loved Captain Overprotective! I don't want this to be over - I think you have at least 30 more epilogues you can write, right?
Author's Response: I could, but I don't want this story, as much as it means to me, to devolve into the beating of a dead horse. SO the next one is the last, and it is now completed.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
She is turning into the exact person I thought she would! You've written her character extremely well, sweets!
*cries*
So cute!
I love!
Author's Response:
*hugs* She is basically a good girl, but she has her little rebellions:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Samolly (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
I loved the cougar pen! Go Bella! Work the cleavage!
Author's Response: LOL! She, like her daughter, knows how to get what she wants:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Anson Longbottom (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
I LOVE how Elizabeth turned out! I hadn't envisioned anything at all, so didn't know what to expect! She has just the right combination of confidence, goody-two-shoes for daddy, and fight in her. Wonderful!
Aww, we love this story. I hate to see it end as well. Maybe you can still tack on a few more epilogues as you feel so inclined? : )
Author's Response: I am so glad you like Elizabeth. She's basically a good girl, but has a little of her uncles in her:)
Alas, the next one is last. I need to end the timeline before I start having to deal with the death of any member of this family, and, as we all know, that's the natural progression of these things. I gave you enough angst in the main story! Still, I cried finishing the last epi on Saturday.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
awesome
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
Uh-oh, Elizabeth being a little naughty with the Baileys...
Goodness those teenage girls can be wild. I never lusted after teachers, though there was one football coach who wasyoung & good looking, but he was blond, and I prefer brunettes.
Elizabeth seems like a normal teenage girl, with hopes and dreams and a boyfriend that dad doesn't immediately approve of, but with two young, good looking parents (ok, we can't all have Dr. McDreamy for out dad - LOL!). I think it's safe to say the family is doing just fine.
Can't believe this story is almost done. What a journey!
Author's Response: Elizabeth is no angel, but she's generally a good girl. OK, so she snuck a little Bailey's at homecoming, but she's definitely *not* a trouble-making youth, all told. She just has a little of Uncle Coach in her:)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
That was so good! I smiled through the entire thing! I can't believe that it is actually coming to an end Ellie. I know it will be a tear filled read no matter what.
Hugs -
teddi
Author's Response: I finished it Saturday and cried on and off most of the day. It's hard letting these kids go....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Kyramy (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
I can't believe it's nearly over
*holds you very very tightly and rocks with you*
Author's Response: I finished it Saturday and cried most of the day. It was hard to let these characters go....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
Aw, hon....this update made me all kinds of smiley!!!
I loooooved Elizabeth with her friends. They were hilarious talking about all the hotties in her family. Those names for all the guys were priceless and oh so perfect!!
Love how you brought Jake into it...once again...perfect!
Daddyward...poor guy didn't stand a chance with all those women ganging up on him. He was all kinds of adorable there. Love the proud face when she said she had pepper spray from Grandpa Charlie...haha! I puffy heart love me some Daddyward.
Is it strange to tell you that knowing there is only chapter left makes me all kinds of sad too???? I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this story...I think you know! I want the chapter but I don't because I don't want this to be over. :(
Just wait until you post it....I'm sure I'll babble and talk your ear off about my love for it in the review....lol!
Author's Response: I finished the final epilogue on Saturday and cried most of the day, so trust me, I feel it. It's been almost a year since I started and letting these kids go was hard.
Thank goodness for Chubward!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
:D LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!
And I refuse to acknowledge the last epilogue. It's not really the last. It's just...a break before a ton more epilogues.
*stubborn weepy face*
Author's Response: I finished it on Saturday after much rocking and crying. So I am with you having trouble letting go.
Alas, everything, eventually, must end....
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Epilogue the Sixth - World of Magic
Elizabeth has turned into a lovely young lady. i think those great negotiation skills will come in handy down the road, especially if Edward stays so over protective. I love how many kids everyone has and that the Cullen clan has grown so large. That was one thing that i missed about in the books. i cannot wait to see what adventures come next and if we get to see Elizabeth's first date, and if so, what Edward's reaction will be.
Author's Response: Well, you won't necessarily see her first date, per se, but you're on the right track!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
I will miss this story. Such a great progression. Such a terrific little family. Love Daddyward. Frankly, don't blame him about Jake. Don't like him. Ever. Period. And with Lizzie. Yuk. Sorry. Everything else is terrific. I gues I'll just have to hold my nose. Could you have at least given us Edward kicking the crap out of him to scare him off (LOL).
Author's Response: LMAO! *hugs you*. At least he's only in 2 chapters of this story;)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
Daddyward is so great! This was terrific. You don't really have to stop, you know......
Elizabeth is fine, but I don't love her like I do the rest of the Cullens! I have spent so much more time with them, i guess!
I guess there was no Jake in the main story, but I didn't remember that! At least he got to make an appearance!
Great job! Keep up the good work, potato!
Author's Response: Nope. No Jake in the main story. The LAST thing this angst-fest needed was the extra complication of a love triangle!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
wait i confused on the whole Jackie thing i know he was a little in twilight but is this a whole new jake or is he related to the orgianal Jacob Black??? - beside that i love Elizabeth Pov cant wait for more - love your story
Author's Response: This is the Jacob Black. He has not appeared in this story until this point and his story line in this plot has nothing to do with Bella. He's just a kid the same age as Elizabeth.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Epilogue the Seventh - And the Lion was Felled by the Lamb...s
I really liked this...hope to see some Edward and bella in the last part...I'd be intersted to see them in this time period now...I like elizabeth
Author's Response: You will definitely see both Edward and Bella in the last epilogue - it's mostly about them.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
A box of tissues...THE WHOLE BOX...just on this chapter...my cheeks are drenched and my heart is so heavy...you need to bring on some joy..otherwise I will not be able to fall asleep...GAH! I heart u xo
Author's Response: There will be joy, alas, you've a ways to go before you get there...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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