Reviewer: RiRi(Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
I like how you do flashbacks and how a teenager would actually react when she finds out her eggo is preggo...
Author's Response: Thanks! The whole story will be past and present juxtaposed because I thought it more representative of the way a mind works. We remember selectively and for a reason. Thankfully, my awesome beta added time cues to avoid confusion! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: just me(Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Very nice, definitely kept my attention and I sped through it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is my first fic in this fandom and you are my first review! Your words are gold! I hope you appreciate where the story goes from here! So many thanks!
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