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Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

I love your writing! This story is very intriguing and I look forward to following along. One question - is she still pregnant?



Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback! I know I have a bit of an odd style, so I am glad to hear it is working for you. Alas, I cannot answe that question as it is pivotal to the story. Eventually, you will find out! :::ducks::: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gee3195 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

At first I was confused but then I read it again and it made sense. :)

 

Loved it and I can't wait for more. xx.



Author's Response: You should have seen the first draft without the dates and time cues! I'm glad you enjoyed it after the re-read! Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

oh this is heartbreaking but i can't wait for more.



Author's Response: Trust me, we have not even begun to ramp up the angst! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: RiRi (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

I like how you do flashbacks and how a teenager would actually react when she finds out her eggo is preggo...



Author's Response: Thanks! The whole story will be past and present juxtaposed because I thought it more representative of the way a mind works. We remember selectively and for a reason. Thankfully, my awesome beta added time cues to avoid confusion! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Very nice, definitely kept my attention and I sped through it!  

 

Well done.

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is my first fic in this fandom and you are my first review! Your words are gold! I hope you appreciate where the story goes from here! So many thanks!

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