Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Well I am so glad that Angela found Bella. I hope she can be there for her and help her get through this. I also hope she somehow, finds Edward too.
Kudos for her for comparing Bella's love for the baby to Charlies love for her. I hope Bella gets in touch with Charlie.
Another well written chapter, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Angela is soo good at realizing Bella's soft spots and using them to convince Bella to do the right thing. Sometimes, it seems manipulative but Angela does everything for Bella's sake from here on in. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Ahh sad and depressed bella/ marie only cares about her baby. I'm glad she has someone who knows who she really is even if she can't have alice or Edward. I really want alice to find her she really is going to flip then she is going to kick Edwards ass for leaving. haha. can't wait and thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Oh, the proverbial poop guys the proverbial fan as each of the Cullens funds out. No, they don't all get this information at once. Next update will be soon!
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I have not see many stories that are told through Angela's point of view... but I loved it... its nice to have someone with an outside perspective describe the relationship/love that Edward and Bella had/have for eachother.... Please update soon I want to be see how Alice plans to find Bella and how Angela plans to help Bella (AKA Marie Mason) and get her back with Edward and the Cullens... Great Job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Angela will be telling much of this story, often as a mouth piece for Bella. I appreciate you reading!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
awwwwwwwww...keep going please.......soon???
Author's Response: I have 22 chapters written and almost half beta'd, so the next one should be up soon!
Reviewer: Telly21182 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Wow, such a sad take on the New Moon debacle. Can't wait to read more and see how the Cullens react when they eventually find out what happened. Especially Edward - he'll really go all Emo knowing that when he "hurt" Bella at the birthday party she was preggars.
Author's Response: Trust me, all of the Cullens pay, especially Edward. I've already written the chapters in which Edward finds out the truth and a tissue warning is in effect. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I didn't expect it would be flowers and candy the way she has been living. I am so glad that Angela is there with her though... Please oh please update soon.
Author's Response: Oh, Bella is basically living in the worst environment imagineable, both physically and emotionally. But she believes in her child and her friend. Submitting the next chapter tonight.
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I love Angela she's so sweet, I can't wait for the news to break and hear how Bella's been faring so far. Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Angela is one cool chick in this story, and a darn good friend. I will submit chapter five today. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I'm so happy Bella now has someone that cares about her in her life. I couldn't imagine going through that with absolutely no one. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, Bella truly needed someone to trust, even a little. Angela is so important to the story from here on in. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
i am thoroughly enjoying this story. im usually not one for the new moon-esque stories (edward leaving is just cruel), but this one is so different -- i love it :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It is cruel, I know. I hope to make the angst all worth it though! Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
This is so SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I know, and there is so much more angst to come. Just trust I believe in happy endings. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
so sad I want Alice to find her now and get the family back together please update I am dying and I want to know what will happen next. Have I said I love this story yet?
Author's Response: Four is in the queue right now!
So glad you are liking it!
Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Ah so sad but I'm glad she wants to keep edwards baby even though she may never see him again. I don't get why she didn't just tell him she was pregnant though. love your story and can't wait for more chapters in the future.
Author's Response: I hope sincerely you understand a little more as the chapters progress. I don't necessarily agree with any of the decisions any of them make in this, but they make sense to *them* when they made them. Obviously, they will all regret some of those decisions later in the story.
Thank you for reading and the next chapter should be up soon!
Reviewer: numberedheartbeats17 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I love this story please update soon
Author's Response: The chapter is queue! Hopefully soon!
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
good story! but is it necessary to space out so far?
Author's Response: You mean the spaces between the paragraph? In text, they are not that wide. It is something about the way it copies here. I apologize if it detracts. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Wow! I can't wait to read more.. Please update soon..
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is in queue, so it'll be up soon!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Interesting... I really look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Author's Response: Thank you. I truly hope you follow along for the ride!
Reviewer: effward (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I am so loving this story. Great Job! Cannot wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: I am so glad you're enjoying the story.
Next chapter is in queue and shouold be up soon!
Reviewer: Emerald_Rosalie (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I love Alice!!! I love her hard!!!
And you too!!!
It still gets me, even after I've read it!
Heartbreaking and yet so addictive!
Love it!
Author's Response: Aw, me loves you too! Enough to make you a Carlisle!Bot with an ass on/off switch. Hot Damn:)
Seriously, thank you for all the love and support.
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
o my gosh! this edward is depressing. plz update soon. i love this story.
Author's Response: The whole story is kinda depressing. Definite angst warning. But that will make the resolution all the happier:)
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
hmmm
Author's Response: Hmm is interesting. Which part is hmmm?
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Well, yes! A very stunned, happy-with-the-chapter "oh my!"
Author's Response: Well I hope to cause that reaction many more times! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
keep gping please !!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter should be up soon.
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Oh, my!
Author's Response: I hope that is good!
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I am hooked! Update soon!
Author's Response: Yay! I am so glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I love it. Keep it coming......
Author's Response: Thank you! I plan to submit tonight. I appreciate the review.
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