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Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Go Angela! She so rocks!
Author's Response: She does! Just the right mix of sweet and tenacious!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: loolupe (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
C'mon Emmett!
Author's Response: Tee hee! He's coming to the rescue soon.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Emmett!
Author's Response: I know! I'm so excited for him to make an appearance.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: loolupe (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Okay Edward, get over yourself. Damn, God complex indeed.
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
I'm so sorry for your loose. Thank you for taking the time to update during this time. Your story, as always, touches me deeply. I'm looking forward to your next chapter whenever you feel ready to share again.
Author's Response: Writing has actually helped me endlessly lately. I so appreciate your concern and caring. I am glad you have enjoyed this story and I've already submitted the next chapter.
Thank you again for your review!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Darn, I was hoping that Alice had Facebook, but Emmett is always a crowd pleaser and one to make you smile, so I can see him as "a great, white, dimpled hope"...lol. The only downside is Rosalie's influence over Emmett, I'm hoping that she doesn't shut this down before it can get anywhere as yet another bad decision with lasting consequences. I'm guessing that Emmett will be our next POV, or possibly Rosalie, though it would make sense to hear from Jasper, since he is definitely another important victim suffering from "the incident".
I'm loving Angela in this story...she is the perfect non-Cullen to be there for Bella during this difficult time and to serve as an ambassador between the estranged lovers desperately in need of being reunited. I'm also happy that she convinced Bella to contact Charlie. Besides being the right thing to do, it is also a step in the right direction. Thanks for posting! :)
Author's Response: What an awesome review! Thank you!
Yeah, Alice was my original idea, but for some reason, Emmett was what came out. That happens one other time in the story (so far), when I thought that one person was going to be pivotal to a scene and changed it at the last minute.
Emmett is definitely coming up. Jasper, who I hadn't intended to write, is also coming up in a later chapter and was a *so* much fun to write, he'll get another chapter at some point. I think you'll like his voice.
Angela is definitely amazing. She's doing so much for Bella both with and without her knowledge.
Thank you for your review! Next chapter is already in queue.
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Ellie!
Oh, how I love Emmett Cullen! He will be the savior...also, he is my guess for the next POV! I hope you're feeling better soon -- I'm sure the Edward!Bot will help relieve any tension. But back to the story, I love it and I can't wait to read more....one more thing, the Robotics story --- AWESOME!!!!!!!! *eyes Emmett up and down*** oh, I can think of a few things!
Great job, Girly!!!
XOXO - Whitney
Author's Response: Hey, Whitney!
Emmett is coming up in a few chapters. Next chapter will be more for Vicky, I'd wager. There's your hint!
Yes, I must have the Edward!Bot make me some tea and rub my shoulders gently until I feel well enough to... test him. LOL.
Glad you like Cullen Robotics. I haven't decided if I should post it, although I have a feeling it's gooing to be funny and fun to write. Not to mention, porn-tastic. You get a double shot, so to speak!
Thanks for the read and review!
Ellie
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
im guessing we will hear from the one... the only... EMMETT!! YAY!! I LOVE EMMETT!
Author's Response: You will, I assure you. And he is too much fun. But not right away. He'll be coming up pretty soon, though!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
I washold the review until I had read all chapter but wth I already know I will follow this story to the end.
Oh Bella, I wish she could have told him. I hate the thought of her going thru this alone and now take some comfort in knowing that Angela has found her and will be there for her as she moves forward with her pregnancy.
I have every faith that Alice will, indeed, find her.
Author's Response: You will be surprised at how they all reconnect, I'd wager!
Thank you so much for finding this story and thinking enough of it to keep reading and review! I appreciate it.
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
wow....more please
Author's Response: Your wish is my command. The new chapter was submitted today. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Found your story today and I love it. This is so real.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you found us!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
LOL.. Facebook... connecting the world ;)
Author's Response: I know, right? But I want this to be real and what better way to find someone!
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Maplestyle (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
This is a great story so far! Though it does make me cry. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: I put the next chapter in queue once this one went up. I'm glad you're liking this sad, little tale.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
I love your story even though it is so sad... keep up the good job!!... maybe will hear from Charlie or Alice (not sure though)... How far along is Bella in her pregnancy?
Author's Response: Thank you! I know it's sad and it gets even sadder, but there will be a good ending. I promise!
Actually, Charlie will be coming up in the next chapter. And Bella would be just over 7 months
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Loving this more and more. I know things are going slowly to establish the back story, but I can wait for the sparks to start flying when "Cullen Contact" is finally made. I just know it will be great. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Oh, we are definitely getting set to fly into the action of the story. A little more set up to go, but the plot even moves in those chapters.
I am glad you love the story and so grateful for your review.
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
So Angela is going to contact Emmett.... i think he can really put some light on this situation. I absolutely love this story and I am glad she let Charlie know she is okay. That email to him let us all know that she truly loves her Dad.
Well I am hoping that the update for the next chapter will be very soon.
One of my most favorites stories.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I am glad you love the story and I'm grateful that you took the time to let me know!
I put Chapter 7 in queue about 10 minutes ago. Hopefully, it will be up soon.
Again, many thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: despi1993 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Hey! I really love your story! I read the first six chapters at one and i cried at least three times! It's a really heartbreaking plot but i hope Edward and Bella will find their way back together...
Please update soon!!
Author's Response: I honestly do believe in Happy Endings. Just hang in there as it gets sadder before we get there!
Next chapter is in queue!
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: MyaLuv (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
I just found this story and I have to say it's the BEST (and I'm not joking I mean this) New Moon All Human story EVER written. And Emmet? Thank You! I LOVE Emmett. He's so fun! When Emmett finds out Bella's pregnant can you have him puch Edward? Please? Update Soon!
Author's Response: Alas, Edward won't know yet when Emmett finds out;) Don't worry, Edward gets punched once or twice!
Thank you for the amazing compliments! It means the world!
I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
This is truly heartbreaking!! I'll be watching for updates!
Author's Response: It is a tragic tale, I know. And it gets SO much harder as the chapters go on. But I promise I believe in Happy Endings!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: SJR888 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Oh man reading this story so far i'm already more than halfway through a tissue box. It really is important that you know that I went through so many because usually when I cry about a FF its just one or two tissues not half a box. So saying that is it to much to ask that you give a warning at the beggining of chapters about tissues lol. The first chapter I had one of those mini packs in the plastic. I went into my brothers room and grabbed the box and he gave me a weird look lol. I really really like this story even though it makes me cry. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Aw, hun! I will be sure to put in a blanket tissue alert and an extra alert for the really hard chapters (Edward finding out, anyone?).
Even though I am sad you cried half a tissue box, I'm actually grateful to hear it made you feel. This whole story is about emotions and points of view and choices. The fact that you feel it enough to cry lets me know I am doing something right.
The next chapter will be submitted tonight and should be up in the next few days. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: bandcampblonde (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
update, update, update!!
I love this story.
It always seems like Emmett is the one who saves the day, doesn't it?
Author's Response: LOL! Actually, Angela definitely saves the day in this fic, but Emmett is definitely going to help. I think you'll really like his chapter when it comes out.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Next chapter will get submitted tonight!
Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
emmett!:D update soon please:)
Author's Response: Who'd a thunk it'd be Emmett!?
He will have a chapter in the relatively near future, but next up are Charlie and Carlisle.
Thank you *so* much for the review!
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
oh my, i cried and cried, reading this story. i hope it is true that you belive in happy endings, cuz i do to.
Author's Response: I promise. I swear. I do believe in Happy Endings:) It's going to be a *long* road to that point, but I hope you will stick with me and enjoy it!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherilynn (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
I like the AH of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate you reviewing!
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Good update! I was so excited to see it and it did deliver. Angela is such a good friend and Bella needs some intervention. I'm glad she has Angela to move things along for her.
Thank you for having Bella realize how selfish it is to disappear and not let Charlie in on anything. She's a mom now, she's starting to understand unconditional love and the worry that goes along with it....that is very real.
Thanks for a sweet chapter and a light of hope that the Cullen's will get in on the action soon.
Author's Response: Edward made the most obvious bad choice in the story, but all of the characters made poor choices along the way. Bella has chosen to begin to rectify one of hers.
Angela truly is the hero of this tale. She makes hard calls and does amazing things from beginning to end. Well, I haven't written the end yet!
I am glad that you enjoyed the story and am so grateful for your review!
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