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Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

Well, I'm glad they're trying to find Bella. 

Author's Response: As Carlisle said, enough. It is time to make it right. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JohannaL (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

I love your story, I don't remember have I said it before, but I just have to say it again.

What is best in this story is that it is from different person POVs. And Angela is so great, I loved her in the Twilight books and also in your story. She is special, a girl with a heart of gold.

Can't wait the next chapter :)

Author's Response: This was kind of an expriment for me. To create a unique voice for each character and let them tell the tale as they see it. I am glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

Charlie, I feel so bad for him, losing your only daughter and having not idea where she is, no way, I could survive that!  Carlisle needs to tell Edward, he'll move heaven and earth to find her.

Author's Response: Ah, but the whole story is about choices and consequences. We will have to see which way Carlisle goes. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Canadian Ginger (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

I love how you portray Carlisle! He is always the sensible one out of the Cullens and I'm glad to see that hasn't changed.


I have to disagree about reviews being better than brownies and cool whip though, I could really go for some of that right now! Yuuuummm.


Anyways, I'm still here waiting for your next update!

Author's Response: Lol! It is a tough call but I will take these great reviews! I love writing Carlisle in this so he shows up more than I planned. Only voice that was more fun for me is Jasper who we haven't heard from yet. Thank to for the review!

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

And so the chase begins... Poor Bella, she's not gonna know what hit her. Can't wait to see who finds her first. Can you imagine being in her condition and frame of mind and having the FBI come down on you? How utterly terrifying.

Author's Response: There are so many things that can go wrong here. She is already scared and contact may trigger her fight or flight. Hopefully, she will be spared the worst of it. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: ABH (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

LOVE this story.  It can be really scary being pregnant under good circumstances.  This has to be killer.

Author's Response: This must be terrifying to Bella. And it is not as though she can afford top dollar med care. Poor girl. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

They will find her, they have to.  Loved the reference about Bella being the glue to hold the Cullen family together.  Loved the fathers POV's.  And Edward.  What will you ever do about Edward?  Despite the heavy angst of this story I am enjoying it immensly.

Author's Response: They will find her, of that much I am sure. I know this is angsty, but I am grateful for your readership and your reviews!

Reviewer: FutureVampChic (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

are you going to introduce James in this story??? I think you should.

Author's Response: Alas, no James or any of his crew, nor Jacob and company. Sorry! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: XodazzlezoX (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

i love the different point-of-views.

it makes the story so much more mysterious.

I hope you keep posting! I'm starting to get obsessed. lol

Author's Response: I am glad you like it! I am trying to explore this from all angles and emotional points of view. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough


I do love how you write Carlisle woman! And HOLY HELL is all I have to say for him in Cullen Robotics...HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. You'll see what I mean by that later tonight!!

I better get my butt betaing some more chapters before you catch me up!! LOL

Love you...thank you so much for all the props..I love this story so much and you rock all kinds of hard!!

Love ya!!


Author's Response: God, I love me some Carlisle in this story. I have a feeling I will lust him even more after Cullen Robotics! Cannot wait!!! Thank you again for all you do! Hugs! Ellie

Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

I am angry at Bella for doing this to Charlie.  Running away is never the right thing to do and it seems selfish.  I know she doesn't see it that way, but as  parent, I do. 

And yes, I loved Carlisle, too.  I also loved Charlie's pov.

Very interested to see how they will find her!!

Good update!

Author's Response: Bella made her share of poor choices as well. I am glad you liked the dads. You will hear from them again. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

I love it, love it, love it! please update soon!!

Author's Response: Next chapter should be up soon! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

Update soon!

Author's Response: I plan to submit tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

well I am glad someone else in the family knows!

Author's Response: But they don't know the half of it, yet! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

Thank you for the quick update.  It was nice to be able to read their POV's.  I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Next one should not be long.

Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

I'm glad Charlie and Carlisle have connected. Now let's see where it goes from there. I wonder what Edward will do when he finds out Bella is gone. And for gosh sakes, let Emmett hurry up and read his email!!! :-P

Author's Response: Patience, my friend. The big guy cometh! Edward is not going to like this, I assure you. He asked for it though. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

It's about time those guys talked! Yay for parental interference. LOL.

Author's Response: Not to mention that Charlie should not have to carry this weight alone. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

It never came to mind when I was thinking of who would come next, but a joint Charlie/Charlisle POV chapter was the perfect next step. My only complaint is again Edward is being kept in the dark about the consequences of his stupid decision. He needs a good kick in the butt not being handled with kid least in my Anyway...*grin*...hmmm, who's up next? I'm thinking that Esme is a likely candidate, since Carlisle is planning to share this with her. Is Renee a part of this story? I can't remember hearing her mentioned. Although I'm not sure what she would have to add. *shrugs* Good chapter...thanks for posting so regularly! :)

Author's Response: I love the guesses! So many good ideas! Yes, *everyone* makes questionable decisions in this story, including the dads. It will all work out in the end. Renee is only mentioned in passing, alas. Thank YOU for reviewing so regularly!

Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

Not enough!!!!!  I can't wait for Edward to find out what has happened.  That will be the chapter worth waiting for.  Hopefully it will be soon, because I want his ass back there looking for her.  The discovery will also be a priceless moment, Bella and child......  Update soon please.

Author's Response: Edward will find out, but we have a way to go yet! Lots more tale to tell. It is a heartwenching chapter though (already wrote it)! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

Amazing Chapter......

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing it!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

UD UD UD UD...that was really sad but really good. I can't wait till Edward fins out...

Author's Response: I will try to submit tonight or tomorrow, I promise. Still a bit before Edward finds out! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

The poor dads!  I felt so heartbroken after reading this........I want them to find her!  Ellie you are killing me! *bangs head repeatedly on desk*

I can't wait for more of this wonderful fic!


Author's Response: Aw, thank you girlie! The poor daddies are not doing well. Hopefully Carlisle can succeed where the police have not... Poor Charlie! Thank you for reviewing, girlie!

Reviewer: SJR888 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

Wow I need Xanax after this one. At least I didn't cry this chapter. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Lol! I know, we should order it in bulk with the tissues. I am glad you liked the chapter and that you reviewed.

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

Boy is Bella ever going to be surprised when she realizes just how many people miss her.....

Author's Response: They all love her desperately and they will do whatever it takes. Thank you for your reviews!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

hmm i was thinking maybe bella and angela again...or well actually i have no clue but i cant wait to find out!!! This is such a great story and i love it!

Author's Response: I love all the guesses! You guys are getting good, but how good, we shall see! Thank you for reviewing!

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