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Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Very hot dream ;) Great update!
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Ellie
OMG, rip my heart out!! Please fix this...I can't take it!
My guess: MY MAN EMMETT!!!!
Author's Response: Emmett is about to strap on the chaps and ride the white horse so be prepared! Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Oh gaw, I wanna cry. Poor Bella though, I know how it feels to be pregnant and alone. It's the saddest freakin experience ever!
Author's Response: That I cannot imagine, and my heart is with every person who has been there. I am a mum and do understand the fear and unknown, with or without someone. Thank you for sharing and for reviewing.
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Oh my goodness! This chapter was SOO sweet, so loving, and yet SOOO sad because it was all a dream. I don't know how much more sadness I can handle from these two lovers who never should have been separated (stupid Edward!) Please keep these amazing chapters coming as quickly as possible!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. All they want is to be together and there is no moving on. They just need to find their way back. His way back.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Lovin the story! Post soon please!
Author's Response: I'll submit the next chapter tonight or tomorrow:)
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
One of the joys of being pregnant, hormones. In some cases of course, in others you don't want to be touched...
They are both fantasizing about the other. I can't wait until they meet up again. It could be explosive.
Author's Response: LOL. They definitely go both ways, those darned hormones!
Yes, they still think of each other like there is no other - like they should always be together.
Alas, when they do finally "meet" again, it's explosive in a different way. But I do believe in happy endings!
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: teegee (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
can I say how HAPPY I am you wrote that lemon? seriously. I, for one, think pregnancy is beautiful. (and I think that Edward would as well).
I recently read a fav fic of mine where the author said Bella would not be getting pregnant because that would mean no more lemons. and I was like, what? why? I she said because it's not pretty or sexy and its kind of gross and that no one wants to read about pregnant sex. I was kinda insulted as a woman thats how she thought, tbh. pregnancy is beautiful and sexy and to think people would view it or sex as gross or unsexy? really pissed me off.
I found this chapter beautiful and really really lovely. thank you for it :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I agree. As a mum myself, I find it natural, normal and beautiful for people who have such a dramatic connection to still want each other in a physical manner. I am sorry that not everyone can see that, although I can respect if people don't want to read a chapter on it. I tried very hard to make the content clear so that people reading had a choice.
I am glad you liked the chapter and understood why I wrote it.
Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Oh, bravo, my dear friend. Bravo! Like I said, you've got nothing to worry about this chapter. Everyone has needs, and Bella can't help that she has them when she's preggs! I thought you did great though. It was sweet and gentle rather than rough and lust-filled. I'm excited for the next chapter, which I know is already waiting to be validated because you're awesome like that! I'm going to take a wild guess and say... Emmett or Rosalie. Thanks so much for putting this up as fast as you did, and keep up the great work! Heading over to the thread riiighhhht now :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the support with this! It was a tough choice, but I'm standing by it. It seems that most have understood why I wrote and posted it. There are needs, and a connection, that I thought needed to be explored.
I will be submitting 10 tonight, and I think you will be pleased:)
See ya at the thread!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Please have Angela coontact Emmett soon...
Author's Response: It is coming. I haven't forgotten...
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: jslpisces11 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Ahhh this brought me a little case of the sniffles.. poor bella. I hate that feeling when you wake up and realize it was a dream. Get these kids together soon- please please please.
Author's Response: They will find each other. That I can promise. Soon? Not so much!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
awwwwwwwwwww, it was so cute and sweet. I loved this chapter. They really need each other, and I love that Edward needs her so much, Bella seems to be in a better shape (due to her child of course). Keep writing, I'm really hooked on this story
Author's Response: 25 chapters are written, so I'm not giving up anytime soon! I am glad you liked this chapter and grateful for the review!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
I Just LOVE Emmett!!!!
Blushy Mc Clumsypants!!! lol
"New car for the first one to fins her?????!!!
That boy is so hilarious!!!
Author's Response: LOL! He has many more funny moments to come!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: STONERMOL68 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
you know- I was so confused when I read your author's note. When you said pregnant girl sex I thought you meant pregnant GIRL sex- which i didn't see how that would forward the story. It did become clearer as I read your chapter, but I did think it was funny.
Author's Response: LOL! Sorry for the misunderstanding! Nah. I just meant sex while pregnant from the girl's POV. Nothing that racy!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Kate17 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I really like it; can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I will submit the next chapter tonight or tomorrow.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
omg !!! I wonder if Emmett would accept my Facebook friend request???!!
hahahaha!
Author's Response: LOL! That would be fun!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
SO SWEET AND SO VERY SAD THAT THE PREGNANCY SEX IS ONLY A DREAM. IS THERE ANY WAY THAT YOU CAN GET THEM BACK TOGETHER BEFORE THE BABY IS BORN SO THEY CAN MAKE THEIR DREAMS A REALITY???? AND SO SWEET OF EDWARD TO THINK OF HER THAT WAY...
Author's Response: I can tell you that Edward will see her again before she has the baby. Beyond that, I can't promise anything. I answer as much as I can on the thread, if you want to stop by.
Edward wants the same things as Bella. He would have been fine if he hadn't felt the need to leave and if she had told him. Alas, so many poor decisions got in the way.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: dihenydd (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I am not sure I agree that this was unnecessary. It feels right to have them feel what they have lost and yet have a taste of it. A moment of grace.
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: This means a lot to me. I don't know that it was necessary to the advancement of the plot, but I do think it was necessary to the advancement of the characters. I am so glad you understood my motivations.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: BonneOri (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Sweet and yet heartbreaking. The dream was fantastic. It showed what the both wanted and then it ended leaving them shattered. You are writing Edward perfectly. I like how you have balanced his complete and utter devotion to Bella with his self hatred. I look forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response: Wow. That is a compliment of the highest order. Thank you. I am glad that you understood why I wrote the chapter. I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Ok, Emmett needs to check his facebook or whatever NOW!!! They so have to find her before the baby is born!
Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Author's Response: I know! Who takes that long to read their Facebook! Don't worry. It is coming! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I think this chapter was important for us as readers because it gave us insight as to how much they miss each other.
As for what comes next ... I think it is Emmett receiving a message from Angela. Lets hope!
Update soon please
Author's Response: Thanks for understanding the reasons for chapter 9! You should be pleased with the next chapter!
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I really liked this chapter. It shows just how much the subconcious of these two still believes in them together. I look forward to the next chapter!
<3 Manda
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. The next should be up soon!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I know how you were worried about this...but I don't wanna hear it missy! I totally can see why you did this...even though they are apart...they still feel each other and miss each other big time...but with each passing day...those hearts are breaking more and more! Made sense to me! :)
I think you know I loved it...but I can gush about it as much you need...let me know!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your support here and on the thread is invaluable! Your gushing has made my day! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
i love this story...but it's like each chapter is just a little teaser....stop teasing and get to the climax...hehehe....
Author's Response: I'm not teasing, I am building suspense! Lol! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
please update soon i wanna know how every one will respond to emmett finding out angila is with bella and how edward reacts to her being gone and pregnant
Author's Response: The next chapter moves the plot forward, I promise. Still a way to go before Edward finds out anything. But Emmett is coming soon. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I really liked this chapter it was heartbreaking but really good ud soon.
Author's Response: I know it was sad, but important. I will submit the next chapter tonight or tomorrow. Thank you for reviewing.
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