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Reviewer: wearefanpires (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
OMG! OMG! YOU DID IT! YOU DID WHAT I ASKED AND HAD EMMETT CHECK HIS FACEBOOK! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY I AM!
YAY! KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!
~wearefanpires
Author's Response: Lol! Then you will love the next chapter! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: XodazzlezoX (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
i have been trying to review for the last few chapters but my ipod touch does not let me lol.
I'm absolutely hooked on this story. Everytime i read a chapter, I'm at the edge of my seat like its a movie lol.
hope you post soon!
Author's Response: What a lovely compliment! I am glad you are enjoy! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Yay emm and ang to the rescue... wait you have long sleeves on don;t you oh please update soon...i want more...thanks for the great story
Author's Response: There will be more soon! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Well I am so excited to see that this is going in such a good direction.. I can't wait till they call Angela!!!! Help is on the way for Poor Bella.
Update soon. Thanks for being so consistent with your updating. It is so awesome of you
Author's Response: I am trying to post often! I am also glad you like the direction of the story. There is more movement in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
OMG...getting so freakin good! Wish the chapters were longer.
Author's Response: Tha chapters are short because of the revolving POV, but there are a lot of them! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
CLIFFHANGER, MUCH!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY(AGAIN) THANKS!!!!
Author's Response: I will soon. My poor beta is in finals week, but I should be able to submit this weekend! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Canadian Ginger (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Another great chapter, you got me, I didn't expect it to be Emmett and Angela. Sooo, any hints on who is going to be in the next chapter? :D
C'mon, don't make us wait too long for Edward to find out about Bella's little problem! ;)
Author's Response: Well, technically it was Carlisle and Angela! But you will get some fun in the next chapter. Be patient with Edward finding out. It is coming! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
Lurve it! Keep going. I love how this is unfolding!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: IsabelleCullen829 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
WOW. That was an Amazing chapter. It made me squeal.
I LOVE this story. its sooo heartfelt and amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you. I chose to write it from a completely emotional perspective rather than as a narrative. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: culleniwish (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I came accross this story this evening and read the 9 posted chapters. It's really good so far. I'm so sad for Bella and Edward and well for everyone really. :0) I can't wait to read more, I'm so glad all of them are going to be in the search to find her. Hope Emmett checks his facebook account soon. :0)
Author's Response: I am glad you found us and have enjoyed it! There are snippets on my thread, if you want advanced notice!
There is MUCH more plot movement in the next chapter, which should be up soon.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Poor Bella and poor Edward. I hope more Angela's and Bella's life is coming up soon. I love your story! Thanks so much for writing it.
Author's Response: You will definitely like the next chapter.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: cheetahfalls (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Hmm...I think Angela is close to setting up the meeting with the Cullens. And I'm totally excited when Edward and Bella reunite and all the angsty goodness that comes with it! Well, I will be waiting!
Author's Response: The action is about to move forward quickly. I hope you enjoy it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
great chapter! i cant wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: It is submitted and should be out soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
i love this story! i cant wait for the search and i am happy that everyone is helping look for her in their own way. It makes me smile!
Author's Response: The search will kick up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Hot mama!! So glad you decided to post this girlie!! Love it!!
You are the best and such a great friend!! Thank you for everything and for holding my hand through my rough week!!
Love ya,
*hugs*
XOXOXOXOXO Jess
Author's Response: Anytime, girlie! You do the same for me! Thanks for making this story what it is!
Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Aw, I like it. : )
The way it should have been..... :D
Author's Response: Had they just followed their hearts. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Favorite parts of Bella's POV:
“I'm pregnant, sweet, not dead.”...lol.
"I was so incredibly grateful for that one moment with my Edward, even if it was just a dream, and, at the same time, completely heartbroken when I rolled over in my bed and found that I was alone."
Not one particular statement jumped out at me in Edward's POV, not that it wasn't good or that I didn't appreciate the insight into his thoughts right now, because it was and I did. The thought that stuck out to me while I was reading his version after hers is that even while they were so far apart, they were somehow still connecting, if only in their dreams. This chapter was bittersweet, and seems to belong. I'm glad you shared it with us, and can't wait til they get there. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding why I wrote it. The bond is still so strong. Bella was having a very cogent dream, while Edward is much much more abstract. But they want the same things. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
more please
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up soon! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Good chapter!! Please update soon =)
Author's Response: The next chapter is in queue. Thank you for the review
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Oh the sorrow. I love that E/B are so in tune with each other. It also seems that a baby would not be the end of the world for Edward. Still painful to read, but I was thrilled to see the update. Thanks for sharing your writing.
Author's Response: Quite the opposite. Edward wanted this. Not now, but he would have gladly accepted it. They are still so bonded. I truly appreciate your view.
Reviewer: August Babe (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Oh My God!! This is absolutely amazinggg :)
One of the best fics I have read on here...honestly I lovee it and I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying this! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
This chapter was so sweet! I almost cried! Poor Edward! Poor Bella! It was just so gorgeous!!! I can't wait for the next instalment!!! I hope the Cullen's find Bella soon cause then we can have Happy Edward which is MUCH better than Sad Emo Edward
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it! The action picks up in the next chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
They are both so lost without each other. Edward needs to find out she's pregnant and find her, like yesterday! Is Emmett ever going to find Angela's friend request? Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I haven't forgotten Facebook! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
I cant wait for them to find eachother!!!! Lets get to the goodness! I love it
Author's Response: There are miles to go before that, but I think you will like the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Loved it. Though it doesn't contribute to the actual plot, it does contribute to stronger character development and emotion. Great job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. That is why I chose to include it. Thank you for reviewing!
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