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Reviewer: flormi (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
please please please dont kill the baby!!!!!!
i love your story!
Author's Response: The baby will be fine. I promise.
Reviewer: TwilightJemS (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Question: was the pregnancy because Bella & Edward were reckless since it was unplanned? It just doesn't seem like them. But then again, in the heat of the moment, it is really hard to think straight!
Author's Response: Very good question. They only had sex once when they got swept away in the meadow. They hadn't really expected to get that caught up and did not stop to think. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Bella is going to find out Angela contacted the Cullens and she's going to run again isn't she? Or maybe Edward will freak out and get to her before alice. I can't wait to find out what happens. There's not much time left before the babie comes. Oh no, what if it comes early!! You have to update soon!!!
Author's Response: Lol! So many ideas, so little time! The chapter will be up soon though! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: TwilightJemS (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
That is something that I can't seem to understand fully. I'm a very selfish person & if I had to make a decision on whether to be with the love of my life or live without him? I wouldn't be able to leave, no matter the circumstances... As I said, I'm selfish...
Author's Response: They aren't doing very well with living either. It is a good point, but that is the crux of the story. Decisions and their consequences. Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
An angsty plot-wrinkle??? Hmm. Bella runs or Edward find out too soon could be possible. Next chapter is possibly Bella's POV or Angela's POV or if next chapter is more of a Cullen chapter maybe Emmett or Edward POV. Love the story! I hope you post soon because I can't wait for the Code Red chapters. I love angst as long as there is a happy ending. And you believe in happy endings!!!
Loved this chapter. Alice was really kind to Edward while still getting the point across. I also liked seeing how the rest of the family acts.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying this! The Code Red is coming soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: TwilightJemS (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Now that I'm finished nursing my son, I can finally leave you a review!
Edward leaving in New Moon is such an over-done story but THIS story is so original! You've put such an interesting twist while still keeping to the same line but also straying from the norm. It's great!
Oh, I was also told to tell you that Burrberry Bugsy sent me! I usually don't read too much on this site because the background & font size bother me, but she said your story was worth it. She was right!
Author's Response: Been there on the feedings! Man, I am going to have to start paying Burberry for he PR work! I am glad you think it was worth it!
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
PLEASE UPDATE! i need to know what happens :] so intense! lol.
Author's Response: The chapter has already been submitted! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Considering Bella's poor personal health, I'm thinking that the wrinkle might come from a medical related complication. The only other idea that comes to mind is Bella finding out that Angela contacted the Cullens and running, but I don't see that happening because as guilty as Angela feels about breaking Bella's confidence, her concern/protectiveness is stronger.
I liked the way that Alice is handling Edward, how she is reaching him, preparing him for what is coming. The other thing that stood out was Rosalie's loyality to Jasper...I'm glad that she is staying back with him. Good chapter. :)
Author's Response: Great theories and you will find out soon if you are right! Some folks think Alice was too easy on Edward and in some ways, that is true. But her goal is to coax him back to being strong and convince him to follow her willingly so her approach is a little less all out chatisement. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Hmm I wonder what the wrinkle is. And I'm sure they are underestimating Edward's reaction to the news. Private jet or not he going to flip right out when he finds out.
And not sure they should be talking to Charlie the day after, they should make sure Bella is there first and ok with everything before bringing Charlie in.
K I'm just rambling here, these are my thoughts and I know I could ask a question and you wouldn't tell me anyway so I will just keep on guessing in my mind :)
Can't wait for more though I'm loving this still. Another well written chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You are missing one critical piece of information to develop theories, but you are about to get it! Again, many thanks for the review!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Man, Edward's going to go completely crazy when he finds out. I'm not sure how Bella is going to react. Hopefully in a positive way, but I have a sneaking feeling it won't be pretty.
Author's Response: None of it will be pretty from here on out. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Awww my Eddie left his prison for Alice :)
Oh Dear what is the wrinkle in the plan??? :O....Now I'm the one that is scared shitless.......support group time :(
Excited and yet scared for the next chapter :S
Author's Response: I submitted last night, so it should be up soon! I am excited and scared for the response! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Roosickle (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
I am dieing to find out what happens!!! Youa re keeping us in suspence !!! Inever thought I would get so caught up in in AU story like I have, I don't have any guesses just a sense of awe at your writing !!!
Author's Response: What an amazing review! You will get more quite soon. Thank you for r and r!
Reviewer: monokuroboo69 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Burrberry Bugsy recommended this on her latest chapter of her story and she promised it was soo worth it. she was definitely right! i can see why she is so in love with this story. read it all in one sitting and created an account just to review and its already got me in tears. most def lookin forward to edward finding out. i mean i love him and all but he is blind in this! update again soon pls! definitely loving BB for rec'ing this!
Author's Response: Wow! BB is rocking my world! I am so glad you came. The next chapter has already been submitted and should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Warning,my daughter just started reading this story so you will be getting reviews from her and I,both in my username.
I love this story,so glad to find it updated today!I shall go make a cheesecake I think I will need comfort food if this keeps going the way it is.Come on Edward,man up for us,come on Bella,dont bolt,or have the baby til they get there,come on Alice,you can be the saviour of the situation.How to survive until next update???Curse that Burberry Bugsy for sending me here before the whole story was complete,grr.(Actually I am so glad she did,I am loving it).
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am glad she sent you and that you and your daughter are enjoying the story! The next chapter has already been submitted and should be up soon!
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Ooog,angsty,just like I like em.
Author's Response: Oh, then you will love what is coming....
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: AliceWC24 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
finally!! chick needs to get her big bellied ass back home!!! carlisle is right enough is enough!
Author's Response: I know, right? Everyone just needs to get their head on straight. Alas, it is no longer that easy. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: AliceWC24 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
come on emmett!! don't u want 2 b angela's friend?
Author's Response: You know he does! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: AliceWC24 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
all i must say is he is a dork! but that's edward always taking shit to the extreme!
Author's Response: Yup! That's him. And he will have to get over himself in short order...
Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pretty please? ._.
Author's Response: It has been submitted and is awaiting validation. There's a clip up on the thread, as well as the title of the chapter.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
I'm so nervous about how this is all going to play out!
Great update!
-Alyx
Author's Response: Well, the next chapter is submitted and the sneak peak is up on the thread! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Can't wait to find out what "the wrinke" in the plan is going to be... the next pov maybe Angela, however, I would love to know what is going on in Jasper's mind (poor guy probably feels like he is to blame for everything) please update soon =)
Author's Response: Oh you will hear from Jasper in a big way, but it is a few chapters off. And be warned, he has a potty mouth. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
I cannot wait until Edward gets told the news of his impending fatherhood. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: He finds out in chapter 17! Just around the corner now. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: freckles9399 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
ok i have a feeling that Bella will find out before they get there and she ditches and runs again or Edward finds out before and leaves himself ,ok or Bella goes into labor before tehy get there and they find her at the hospital ready to have or has just had the baby,just my guesses lol,im lovin the story
Author's Response: Fun theories, but are any of them right?:) thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Gah, it's getting so close! I'm so anxious for the confrontation but so afraid at the same time! Guess I'd better stock up on kleenex this week ...
Author's Response: I will be submitting it in about an hour. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: AliceWC24 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
mmm chocolate cover edwards bots.... ok that one will be for later! LOL!! Geese this poor girl. She's silly to think no one would notice her. but atleast she has a friend to talk to. can't go through that alone.
Author's Response: No. And Angela really is a lifesaver. Lots of chocolate covered Cullens on the thread! Thanks for the review!
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