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Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Ellie,
Great chapter. I'm willing to put myself through whatever ensues next because I know in the end it will be worth it and as always, I love this story.
*hugs and much love*
Amber
Author's Response: You are my sweet savior! Thanks for helping me through this and believing in me!
Reviewer: goldsnitch0118 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Oh dear God, that was not fair. I don't care who's POV the next chapter is, as long as it resolves some of this! Update soonnnnnnnn
Author's Response: Well it will move things ahead. Resolve, I don't know. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
REALLY unkind to leave us there!! Can't wait for next chapter! It'll be Alice or Carlisle, right?
Author's Response: I promise not to leave you there long! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Oh dear god WHAT HAVE YOU DONE???? There are tears running down my face!!!! I'm so upset!!!!! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS!!!!!! There better be another chapter coming up soon or so help me...
Author's Response: Support group on the thread. I am also going to post some reassurances tonight. It will be okay!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
This chapter was good...in a way. The writing was good and this was probably needed for the plot, but of course Bella in a hopspital is never good (unless there's a chance of running into some hot doctor Edward there...;) -- yeah, dont' think that's gonna happen in this story...) But pffh, I'm so glad that you believe in happy endings...which means (unless you have something against babies, which I highly doubt) you probably won't kill the baby, or Bella for the matter. Poor Edward though! Not only does he have to deal with knowing he's about to become a father (once he's told there is), but that his unborn child nearly died without his knowledge! (I refuse to believe anything beyond what can be fixed will happen to the baby!) With that said, I hope you'll hurry to post more!! I mean leaving us with B&B (Bella and the baby) in the hospital without knowing if they're okay for too long is just cruel! Can't wait to read more!! :D:D
Author's Response: The baby is fine. I promise. But things just got a whole lot more complicated! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
i have no comment except to demand the next chapter...if you're so far ahead, don't leave us hanging!
Author's Response: As soon as one is validated, I submit the next! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! You're KILLING me here!!!!! I HAVE to hear from Edward PLEASE!!!!!!!! I am DYING!!!!!! PLEASE let the baby live! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! UPDATESOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Ok, I will give you a break. The baby will be fine and Edward finds out in 17. That's all I'm saying! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mayian2 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
OMG! No you didn't end it there! Argh! I am going to have to go run on the treadmill to calm down! Whew! Thanks for that! *SMILES...with a pleading look attached and hands folded together* Just glad you update fast!!
Author's Response: Lol! Have a nice run! I am sure the next chapter will be up soon! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: lollipopstick28 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
OMG i will never forgive you if something bad's happened to the baby!!!!
lol, jst kidding, but seriously you might have to mail me kleenex!!!
Louise x
Author's Response: I assure you, the baby is fine! Stock up on the tissues tho! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
I don't think you can hide well enough......
Ugh...I can't take the freaking suspense anymore...Whre the hell is Edward? Damnit all!
Author's Response: Edward will find out everything in Chapter 17 and 18. Not too far now! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sharona (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY BUT NOT TOO THRILLED AT THE MOMENT HOWEVER I HAVE FAITH! :D THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WITH US!
Author's Response: Just hang in there! I promise you all will be well! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: lovely_e (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Yeah you better be in hiding until you post the next chapter ... LOL! But seriously, update ASAP bc I wanna know what's wrong with Bella!!! And Edward better find out soon bc he's been acting like a douche for too long...
Author's Response: He will find out in 17. It is a bit longer before we fins out what happened to Bella! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Oh my goodness!! WHAT!!! I can't believe you left us hanging like that! Please post another chapter tonight! Screw your work where you can't get twilighted, take the week off and keep posting!!! I am going crazy! Please please tell me the baby is okay, that Bella is okay....Angela is right, she won't survive if something happens to the baby!! ARGHHHH!! hurry, hurry, hurry!!!!
Author's Response: I will say the baby is fine! I promise. As for everyone else, it is going to be a hell of a ride! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: TLP (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Please tell me that "happy endings" involve living babies? Heartfail I can take. Death of a child? Notsomuch.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I will make this clear here, on the thread an in my next A/N, I will not hurt the baby. I am a mother and I have lost a child and I wouldn't wish that on anyone, real or fictional. You have my word!
Reviewer: cheetahfalls (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
hmm..if you already have chapter 30 written, why is chapter 15 only posted?
You're making us wait...how cruel.
This story is too heart wretching.
Author's Response: I post the next as soon as the previous one is validated! So the next should be out soon! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
I knew it... I knew it had something to do with the baby!
I'm repeating to myself 'she believes in happy endings'. I hope the next chapter is out soon... I'm sure you have lots of people saying the same thing.
Oh Edward is going to freak! I hope Carlisle can get some info & will have it handed onto Angela. She's at least been there for part of this and taking care of Bella when no one else has (of course Bella wouldn't let anyone either).
Author's Response: Angela will not be left out. No way. As for freaking, that is mild for what Edward goes through. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Oh God, PDT--is the baby going to be okay?!?!?!?!? Is BELLA going to be okay?
*deep breaths*
You know, you picked a good day to hit us with the major Code Orange heartfail--because SHIRTLESS ROB pics make EVERYTHING easier to deal with. So while I could go on and flip out on you about this, I'm just going to go back to my SHIRTLESS ROB lust-induced haze, a truly happy place where the birdies are always chirping and Rob is ahem, waiting for me.
(good update!;)
Author's Response: Lol! They do soften the blow! I am glad you enjoyed it and YES, the baby will be fine!
Reviewer: Jordanthegirl (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
oh my gosh!! update quick, i have to know what happens!
Author's Response: It is already written so it should be soon! Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Ooooo....Ellie, girl!
A midnight phone call when I was up till 2 in the morning anyways, is not a big deal at all! Hahahaha...now if you never call again, different story! lol!
I love love love love this whole flippin' story! I can't wait for the Edward chapter...you know i heart ya girly!
XOXO
-Whitney
Author's Response: Aw, shucks! I will call again as long as I am not lynched in the meantime! Thank you for all of your support!
Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
oh hell no you didn't kill the baby!!!!! Can't wait to see what Edwards response to all this is..
Great update
Author's Response: No babies will be harmed. I like angst but am not heartless! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: BixxaCullen (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
don't worry! i have no sharp objects/flaming torches!!
I think this story is great! And this is a good plot twist...better than the typical "Edward heads home and life is all butterflies and faries again" totally didn't see this coming!!
Update soon please!
x
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't think many saw it coming! There won't be butterflies and faries for a while, but there will be a happy ending!
Reviewer: Piper Smith (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
You must update this ASAP! I need conclusions!
Author's Response: Oh, the conclusion is a way off! But there is a lot more to come and I am sure the next one will be up soon! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Abimaddevil17 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
You can't end it like that! that's pure evil! Update asap! or i might just go insane!!
Author's Response: I will update soon. The next chapter calms it down a bit! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: agentpaper (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
you are telling a lovely story, but i'm not coming back until it's over. i'm too delicate for the teasing.
Author's Response: Hang in there. I assure you, the baby will be fine and there will be a happy ending. Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Well that was a super crappy place to leave us hanging!!! I think this is going to be a more messed up story than I thought...
Author's Response: Don't give up. The pay off is grand! And I will update soon. No babies will be harmed!
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