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Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Gah, that's a cliffie if I've ever read one.  Happy Endings are a good thing - you know.  I'm glad you believe in them.  I'm hooked and really don't have anything to say just commenting to help you reach 1000



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!

And yup.  It's a cliffie.  There's another one in 17, but I try to keep them coming!

Thank you for taking the time for reviewing!

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Ok...it's not too bad. But remember, I don't think wide awake is too bad. Yeah. Love the story!

Author's Response:

LOL!  Considering some of the other chaps, this isn't too bad!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Whew. That was difficult. Is it bad that I can't wait for a new chapter and then I fret and wring my hands before I open it?

Angela is the BEST FRIEND EVER. I just love her. Poor Charlie, his baby is in trouble and he isn't there. Poor Edward, his baby is in trouble and he isn't there. Lots of good stuff in this chappie, thanks for it all...even the wrinkle.



Author's Response:

It's all about to come together in a big ball of angsty goodness.

Thank you for always reviewing!

Reviewer: fallenangel126 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

I got all excited when my email told me you updated.. i even let out a squeal according to my hubby.. I cant wait to find out what happens and how alice is gonna deal with edward and how edward is gonna deal.. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, UPDATE SOON!!!!!



Author's Response:

Oh, it's all about to happen in a big, frickin' crash.

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

I loved it but Oh god way to leave me hanging.  Tell me it won't be too long before another chapter.  Can't wait!



Author's Response:

It never is long.  I'll do my best.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Okay, I am chating over and over again that you believe in happy endings.  And so I am going to trust you in this that all will be okay.  But, if you want me to be able to do that your going to have to update extremely quick so I can see some proof of that too.  ;)  Please?



Author's Response:

It will be okay.  I promise.  But it's a long and bumpy ride.  I'll keep it going tho!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

damn you...............



Author's Response:

Don't do that!  How will I get the next chapter out ;)

Reviewer: culleniwish (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

"She believes in happy endings. She believes in happy endings." Ok, it's working a little. :0) I really hope Bella and Baby will be ok. Maybe she'll be put on bedrest and then she won't be able to run again once Edward and the Cullen's arrive. Well there's my reveiw, I've done my part. Did it work for a quick update??? :0)



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'll have it out soon.  Teasers on the forum thread.  Also, I'm sure, lots of discussion!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

What a cliffhanger!! please  update soon.  :) I love your story



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks!  Another will be up soon!

Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

oh my gosh!  I don't think I can breathe.  I can't imagine her heartache if she looses the baby now.  It's the only thing that has helped her get through being without him.



Author's Response:

I assure you, the baby will be fine!  But it's going to be a heavy ride.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

I trust you.....I trust you....I trust you....

I'm just going to keep thinking that.  I trust you not to kill anyone, I trust you to make everything work out, I trust you to give us the happy ending you believe in!

Until the next update!

Manda



Author's Response:

Keep the faith, sista!  I'm going to put you through hell and it'll make Heaven all the sweeter:)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

ohhhh what a wrinkle... loved it :) well not if it gets all gory....



Author's Response:

Nah.  Not that gory.  That's about the most gore you get.  But angst definitely follows.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

OH NO!  I am now chanting to myself, "She believes in happy endings".  You have to update soon!



Author's Response:

Keep chanting.  It's a bumpy ride!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Ha! I had a feeling the story would turn this direction. Thanks for posting so freq. Great story!



Author's Response:

Don't count my deviousness out yet!  I could change course yet again.  I think it will be different than most think!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

NOOOOOO!!!!! You can't do that to me! That's evil, woman! I want to know what happens, now! Please update soon! Like freaking yesterday! lmao



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'll do it quickly!  I always do!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

PLEASE DON'T LET IT BE TRUE!! Bella losing her baby =(... well I don't know for sure but it really looks like that (if this is Orange then what's RED?)... I can't wait to read the next update... keep up the awesome writing and please update soon =) 



Author's Response:

Um, since I know what the next 15 chapters look like, I'd say this is Orange bordering Red.  The real fail is to come.  PLEASE be assured the baby will be fine!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: freckles9399 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

omg !!!! hurry up and write more quickly lol lol lol

i really want to know what happens next Edward is going to flip out !!!!! gahhhhhhh!!!! i think i may be in need of that support group



Author's Response:

Come by the thread for support!

And 30 chapters are pre-written so I'm sure the next will be up soon!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: juneforever (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

 I am completely hooked. I love it.

Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

URH YOU HAVE TO HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER.  NEED TO KNOW WHATS WRONG AND HOW ALICE TELLS EVERYONE AND HOW EDWARD REACTS AND JUST PLEASE HURRY.  CANT WAIT.



Author's Response:

Oh, I think you will be proud of our Alice.

Edward will be coming up in chapter 17!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

NO!!! HOW COULD U DO THAT?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!

(im still gonna keep reading though :) )



Author's Response:

LOL!  Hang in there.  Keeping up the reading will pay off.

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: jrojrojro (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Guah!  You can't just leave me THERE like that!  It's just cruel!  Oh man, this story is an agst nougut dipped in wonderfulness.  I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter.  Keep up the bloody brilliance, lovie!



Author's Response:

Angst nougut!  LOL!  It's an angsty wee story, alright.  But everything will be fine!

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

AHH!!  Please let it be ok!



Author's Response:

Just keep repeating "She believes in happy endings" because I do!

Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Holy sh**!!!!  Totally code RED!!  You evil woman you!  Please update again soon...dieing over here!



Author's Response:

Oh, if you only knew what was ahead, you'd know why it was Orange.

I will updpate soon.  I promise!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

First, let me tell you how happy i was working late when I got that magical email on my blackberry that you updated.

then i read it and you are making me cry here. why bella? why? why? I am so sad. please I beg of you update like now so i will be able to sleep tonight and not eat all of my nails practically off my finger tips.



Author's Response:

Aw, hun!  It will be okay.  I assure you.  Hang in there and everything will be fine!

Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

Ellie,

Great chapter. I'm willing to put myself through whatever ensues next because I know in the end it will be worth it and as always, I love this story.

*hugs and much love*

Amber

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