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Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
next chapter now please??
Author's Response: I will submit it tonight! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Argh! You can't just leave it with that one sentance and end the chapter! No! Please say the next chapter will be posted later today? Tonight? Don't leave us hanging like that for too long. Please?
Author's Response: I will submit it tonight. It is ready to go and total heartfail so be prepared! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
OMG that was a great chapter! You are the master of cliff hangers though! LOL! Loved getting EPOV!
Author's Response: More Edward shortly and his reaction to his impending fatherhood. Thanks for all the support!
Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Wow you should be hiding after that, well writen, this along with Tropic Vertigo are my fav. stories, great writing!!!!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying! I will update soon! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Sorry to be harsh but I'm getting a little impatient. These chapters are entirely too short, with barely any movement in the story. I find in ironic in author notes that authors know readers aren't going to like it but do it anyway.
And Emmett's still a jerk.
Author's Response: Just because we know that something may not be well received does not mean there is no reason to do it. I am sorry you are disappointed.
Reviewer: hbedell (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
GAH!!
....you vile...evil.... *grins*
LMAO!! I really love cliffies!
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed! There is more coming soon. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Evil...Evil...Evil.... but I loved it!
Author's Response: I am glad! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
YOU KILL ME with your gigantic cliffie. I knew it was coming due to the A/N, but I still cringed when I saw how the chapter ended.
Thank you for the angsty goodness. I always squeal when I see one of your updates.
Author's Response: Lol! You won't be hanging long. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
I'm not throwing anything... yet. J/K. Please update soon! I can't take it!! I need to know if Bella nad the baby are okay!! AHHH!
Author's Response: I always do! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Rachxox7 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
OMG, That is an awful awful cliffy. I was so excited when I got the email of this being updated and then I read through it so fast. Ah, so painful to leave it like that. I can't wait.
Author's Response: It won't be long! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
I LIKE IT AND SO CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE. I'M SO HAPPY YOU DIDN'T TAKE TO LONG AND HOPE THE NEXT ONE IS COMING REAL SOON. CAN'T WAIT.
Author's Response: The next chapter is ready and waiting. It won't be long! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
OH MY GOD! please update, i need to read more of your fantastic story. i need to know how edward is going to react! ahhhh!!!! lol :]
Author's Response: Part of your answer is up! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
OMG!!! Another great chapter and now I'm dying to find out how this ends up!! I'm so glad that he at least followed Alice...
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: punky (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Love it! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Poor Alice! She is devastated to leave with Jasper coming home. This chapter was great insight to how much she loves Jasper/Bella/Edward/Baby...thanks for that. Edward knowing that something was wrong with Bella is sweet and touching. Thanks for a heads up on the angst level in the A/N, I'm really looking forward to seeing how you handle Edward in the next chapter. Your A/N was very sincere. I don't think you have written with anything less than motherly love and complete integrity.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that. Despite all the angst, there is a lot of love in this story. I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Awesomeness!! Can't wait for Edward's bitter dose of reality next chapter! Sooo excited...please don't leave us hanging long.
Author's Response: It has already been submitted! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
That was a perfect set up to the big reveal! Edward doesn't even know Bella is missing does he? He is in for a shock and knowing him...a boatload of self loathing....
Author's Response: Edward knows *nothing* about any of it. He only has his intuition. Yup, he is in for it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
OME, Edward knows something is wrong. I'm on pins and needles here. Glad for your AN about Bella and the baby. Id be dying right now, if it wasn't for that, so thank you.
Author's Response: It will be a long road, but it will all work out! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Bring on the truth! This chapter was awesome. I loved Alice in this one.
Author's Response: It is a coming! Hang on to your hats! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Gidget (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
can't wait to see edwards reaction. good chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! It will be out soon!
Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Wow! That was amazing...Edward is about to get a real kick to the gut. I can't wait to see what happens when he receives the news of what he really left behind. If he has beaten himself up this much over just the leaving I can only imagine how bad things will get when he finds out that he not only left Bella but he left her with his child. I love in charge Alice, she knows how to get things done. The family needed a kick in the pants to get the ball rolling and get them to Bella as fast as possible. I can't wait til the next chapter to find out what Edward's reaction will be...this is a real emotional rollercoaster but it's a great ride. The story is amazing.
Author's Response: What a wonderful review! Thank you so much! He is about to get a big dose of reality and it's not pretty. Try not to kill me at the end of the 17, okay!
Again, many thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Alice was amazing the whole chapter, but the scene at the end with Edward was definitely the best...and very touching. Thanks for another wonderful chapter. :)
Author's Response: Well there is a lot more Edward in short order! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
love this story, can't wait till next chapter
Author's Response: It should be up soon! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Ambra (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Can't wait for Edward's reaction! Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: It is coming right up! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: ABH (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I feel guilty for saying this, but make him squirm...
Author's Response: Oh, THAT you don't have to worry about!
Thank you for reviewing.
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