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Reviewer: Kina666 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Can't wait for the next chapter!~
Author's Response: It will be up soon, I'm sure.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: angela2805 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Wow that was powerful. Very well written!
Author's Response: Thank you! It was quite hard to get to that place to write it.
I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
“Then come,” Esme whispered, pulling my head to her chest and kissing my hair, rocking me steadily and humming softly. “You can be a child for a moment longer.” I cried, clinging to her, arms wrapped tightly around her waist as she sang and rocked and I bid farewell to my childhood."
I loved this part!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: That was my favourite line of the story, hence the title!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
WOW!IloveEsme!!!!
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Aaaaaaah!!!! I know Edward will man up! I can't wait til Bella sees him!!! I wanna hear from her!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh, dear. Bella. Well, we do hear from her again, but it's going to rip your heart out.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: whitwhit94 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Oh my gosh! This is so good. But I feel bad for Edward. He didn't know and yet, like always, hes going to blame himself. Gosh, that could get a little annoying at times.. Anyway. Update again soon! Please and thank you : )
Author's Response: This is the beginning of the transformation for Edward (venom = transformation). He's going to change a lot.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Rachael (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Get to the hospital already! ...sorry, I'm impatient.
Author's Response: It's coming. I promise. Chapter 20 starts that voyage.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I forgot the kleenex.
Okay, so, don't listen to 'All Fall Down' by One Republic while reading this chapter. It kind of adds to the pain.
The destruction of Edward.
I....er....wow. That was, hard.
I'm gonna take a guess and say Cheif Swan tells the next leg of our story.
It's time to feel the angst from the cheif!
If it's not him, then it's gonna be a panicked Angela. Maybe.
Can't wait for the next leg, I waited impatiently for this one.
xoxo - Cherolyn
Author's Response: Thanks so much for waiting. Hope it was worth it!
Thank you for the review as well!
Reviewer: keola (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
painful stuff...clever the way you wove in the vampiric thread. I'd like to hear Esme's POV incorporating why she & Carlise let Edward call the shots, dump Bella and move the family. Who gives a kid that much power?!
Author's Response: In real life, this probably would never happen. But I did want to use the book for the starting point (and weave in threads, like the vampire venom and transformation). so I'm hoping you can suspend disbelief!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mzvez (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
This chapter was soooooooooooooooooooo good. I can't wait for the next. I am sitting here waiting patiently. Soooooooooooo Goooooooooood.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it, angst fest that it was.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Ugh...heartbreaking....good, but heartbreaking.
<----impatiently waiting for another update.
Author's Response: LOL! I'll have one soon!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
oh my god! im on the edge of my computer chair for your next chapter, dont keep me waiting haha
Author's Response: I never do!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
What a good mother!...next leg I am guessing angela???
Author's Response: She gave him the what for in Esme's own way!
You'll find out who is next soon!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Love it! I adore how Esme finally told Edward enough (too bad she didn't do that to begin with). Great chapter! Can't wait for the next.
Author's Response: It took everyone a while to realize how wrong this was and act. But they did and they will.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Holy crow you have one great story going on here. I apologize for not reviewing each chapter as I went, but I found myself not wanting to stop until I was totally caught up. This is just excellent and I can not wait until 18 is up!! Wonderful job!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you!
I submitted 18 for validation last night, so it should be up soon!
I so appreciate your review!
Reviewer: culleniwish (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Not throwing anything.... So now he knows (finally! :0) I wonder how he'll react. Wonder how Bella and baby are doing? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: No news on Bella and the baby until 19, but I submitted 18 last night, so it should be up soon.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
OMG
he knows
aaahhhhhh
woop
cant wait for the next chapter absoulutely in love with this story
10/10
xx
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
AHHH!!! Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please post soon! I loved the chapter but that was a horrible cliffhanger!
P.S. I really liked this chapter even though it was super super sad (and a super annoying cliffhanger) because it was written so well. All of your chapters are great but this I liked this one so much because the way Edward adds his own thoughts and it shows how much he cares and how he always blames himself for everything. Well he sort of does deserve blame, but still. I really think you wrote exactly how Edward would be. I even liked the cliffhanger. Well maybe not liked... I think it was super suspenseful but I'm still really annoyed. ;)
Author's Response: LOL! You can be annoyed. But I'll fix it soon.
Thanks for the compliment! That was really the point of this and the next chapter. Get inside Edward's head and poke around. I'm glad you feel I did a good job...
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: phips16 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
ahh edward knows. great chapter. cant wait to read his reaction to bella being pregnant. update soon
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment! I submitted it last night. I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
I'm going to throw the keyboard at you so you can get the next couple of chapters done at the same time. LOL
Why do you do this. LOL
Very awesome chapter. You're an awesome writer. Can you tell me if the next chapter will be Epov or someone elses???
Author's Response: LOL! There are 32 chapters pre-written and the story is not completed! I explain why I split the chapters in the next A/N. It was submitted last night!
Yup. It's another all Edward POV.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Holy Shit that was intense. It doesn't fail to affect me even a second time! Poor Eddie! I love Emmett's overprotectiveness and his championing of Bella too....
Awesome as always!
Author's Response: Emmett is so protective of all of his family - whoever needs him most. In this case, that's Bella.
And poor Edward goes straight to hell in the next chapter.
To be cheered up, feel free to go to the thread and see what Jess just posted!
Reviewer: puska (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
WHAT!!! you can't leave it there!! noo, poor wdward, I've been lurking here, reading this, and this cliffie finally made me leave a reveiw, lol. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: LOL! I appreciate that you de-lurked! I submitted 18 last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I would still take a smelly Edward over no Edward! Alice is stellar in this chapter and seems to be the glue that holds them all together. Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you, dearheart! Smelly Edward would be just fine with me too!
Reviewer: Abimaddevil17 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Need More!! Please Update Soon!!!
Abbie :D
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
And it's done!!!!!
What a cliffie- can't wait for you to update :)
Author's Response: LOL! I submitted it last night. Thank you for reviewing!
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