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Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
"I cried, clinging to her, arms wrapped tightly around her waist as she sang and rocked and I bid farewell to my childhood."
I am weeping, rocking righ along with him!
Author's Response: That was my favourite line in the chapter. So hard to write, but so needed.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: LoveSunshine (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Wonderful update! I do wish the chapters were a bit longer though. I know you explained your reasoning, but I read it so quickly! Please update soon. I'm enraptured with this story!
Author's Response: I know. I do understand it can be frustrating. At least I update quickly!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
Argh! So glad the next chapter is up!
Author's Response: That was a tough one to leave it on!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Tatsch (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I Love Esme. Pure Love. I want to hug her for the little bit of "kick-in-the-ass" she just delivered...
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Wow. Go Esme! It'll be interesting to see how Edward acts since he's supposed to be a man when he leaves that bathroom. Great chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Wow. Go Esme! It'll be interesting to see how Edward acts since he's supposed to be a man when he leaves that bathroom. Great chapter!
Author's Response: He has a way to go - it's an enormous change to undertake. But he will impress you, I think.
Thank you for review!
Reviewer: starcrossdlover (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
i like it! i like the way you wrote Esme comforting him as only a mother can, but at the same time pushing him toward who he needs to be from this point forward. I just love every minute of it. thank you for sharing this story! until next time! :)
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Ummm, wow. I really like the way you are writing this. It helps give it impact. Can't wait for the next installment...
Author's Response: It is written from a completely emotional perspective. I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jrojrojro (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Guah! My insides feel like they have been been through the wash cycle after this one. But I love it and I can't wait for more. You super speedy updates have me kissing your metaphorical feet (and your real ones if i ever meet you in person!) You rock the angsty story tellin'! I can't wait to read the rest - keep up the bloody brilliance, lovie!
Author's Response: LOL! Wow, that's amazing. No need for foot kissing. Just gimme hugs:)
I'm so grateful for your support and reviews!
Reviewer: bella2k9 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
AMAZING! i actually cried at the end there. please keep updating fast, the suspense is killing me!
x
Author's Response: It is a tough chapter, right?
Thankss so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Waldinando (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Poor Edward... this definitely looks like it must've been hard to write. I would have cried.
And I cried just reading it. I never cry.
Author's Response: Well, I cry at everything and I definitely cried writing it! It was TOUGH.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Finally! Someone told him to man up and get over himself. Lol.
Author's Response: He needed to hear it. I think you will be impressed with what he does with it...
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
maybe angela or bella? i'm glad edward finally knows what's goin on now. but i think that angela needs to update us on the baby... :) love it!
Author's Response: We'll get an update soon!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
UM, THIS WAS AN EMOTIONAL CHAPTER. AND IT WAS REALLY GOOD. I HAVE NO IDEA WHO WILL BE TELLING THE NEXT CHAPTER BUTHOPEFULLY IT WILL BE BELLA
Author's Response: Alas, a little way to go before Bella, but when you do, be careful what you wished for. It's a heartbreaker.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Oh...it wasn't that bad! All the code red stuff, and it wasn't near as bad as I thought it would be! It was about what I expected actually. I'll be glad to see Edward man up...hopefully he doesn't take the decisiveness too far...
Author's Response: LOL! Well, I try to be Codier in the future:)
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
You can be a child for a moment longer.... I so died at that line! Congrats on your nomination!
Author's Response: That is my favourite line in the story.
OMG on the nomination! WTF!
Apparently, it's our lovely Burberry Bugsy behind it!
Thanks so much for everything you are to me!
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Awesome chapter....you always leave me wanting more!! Great writing!
Author's Response: You'll get it soon! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sarah Peachel (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Oh my god... please don't you ever stop writing. Ever. I mean it. You have such talent. The emotion in your stories is so real and raw... I'm at a loss for words. You're just incredible. We all love you. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: WOW! What an amazing complment. I'M at a loss for words!
Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
so sad.
Author's Response: I know. But thank you for the review!
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
loved esme's speech. edward would have needed that kind of speech in New Moon. although he is quite stubborn and proably wouldn't have listened.
Another awesome chapter. keep it coming.
Author's Response: Well, Edward does listen here. It's not all at once, but he listens...
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Awww Esme is so cute lol
LOVED the chapter!
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
good chapter albeit sad. when's the reunion? yes, i'm straight to the point. haha. sorry i just really like this story.
Author's Response: Got a ways to go before they meet. Not too long now.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
OMG that was heartbreaking, but necessary! Edward needs to face his own inner turmoil, but once he steps off that plane he will have to be strong for the both of them, for himself, Bella and the baby.
Absolutely wonderful writing and I can't wait for more. Thank you for posting so often.
Author's Response: Edward is about to make some MAJOR changes, so hang in there!
Thank you so much for the compliment and the review!
Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
awesome, I cried..
Author's Response: Hard chapter, right?
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
aw! poor edward!
you did a great job expressing the emotions of the characters :) well done! I really hope you post the next one soon!
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