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Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
if i had any self control, i'd wait until a bunch of chapters were posted before reading more...but i just can't do it! i just need to know what happens already!
edward is going to pull it together, i just know it...and way to go esme. good talk.
Author's Response: LOL! Edward is going to get it together. You should be impressed!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Poor Edward... I really feel for him but he did bring this on himself.. I really hope Bella and the Baby are ok and he can get to them in time. Great job so far... Can't wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: The baby will be fine. I promise!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Ellie-
Hey Girly! I loved this whole two-part reveal, although, I think I have a new harder/favorite chapter. Chapter 23...that bad boy was rough...but I loved it!
Congrats on your nomination...you totally deserve it! Keep it up, girl!
XOXO
-Whitney
Author's Response: Oh 23 is a NIGHTMARE. This is only a warm up...
Thanks so much on the nomination. I'm STILL in shock!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Gidget (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
that was heartbreaking to read....great chapter
Author's Response: It is a tough chapter!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Moelike (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Wow. This story is one of the best twilight Fanfics I've ever read, and the best I've ever read on this topic. Toatally stunning! I mean, I felt the same emotions as the characters as I was reading. I read the first 17 chapters last night and I was so excited to see that it was updated today! Please update soon! I'm on the edge of my seat.
~Moelike.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, what an awesome compliment!
I'm so grateful for your review!
Reviewer: Beth818 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I bet it's either bella or Edward that talk next! At least I hope so
Author's Response: You shall see soon!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: BrownEyes11 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Im guessing Angela or Carlisle is next. OMG, you can't kill the baby.
BTW, your story is getting a 9 1/2 from me. I hope you continue, I can't wait to find out what happens next, and you are an amazing writer! I love how you say that Edward has to let go of his childhood and be strong. You are awesome! hurry up or all the Twilight_Bots might turn on you. *laughs evilly and bradishes remote control*
Author's Response: LOL! Well, it will be my goal to earn your 10 then!
I'm going to be very clear that the baby will be fine. No hurting babies here!
The next chapter will be up soon!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: nicarter (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
aother great chapter....cant wait for the reunion of the two!!
Author's Response: It is a painful reunion. But I do believe in Happy Endings!
Reviewer: TLP (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
All I can say is: Thank goodness I was wearing waterproof mascara when I read this *sniffle*
<3
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I know it's a tough chapter, but it was necessary!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: BrownEyes11 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
OMG! miscarrige? what the freak? how could you kill off Edward and Bella's baby!
Author's Response: Oh no! No no no! Read the A/N in chapter 16. That is not where I am going. Promise!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I think we need to hear from Bella
Author's Response: Not quite yet. She's coming tho!
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: ftloc (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
this was heart breakingly beautiful and it hurt my heart. more please
Author's Response: It is a hard chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: TIFFYYYYY (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Aww that was such a great chapter :) so sad...update ASAP
Author's Response: I will update soon!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Tears are pouring down my face. I feel awful after reading that.
Great job writing :)
~Susan
Author's Response: It is painful, but necessary.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Oh, so heartwrenching!
Author's Response: That was a *painful* chapter to write.
There will be more soon!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Do I detect a hint of hope there at the end? Will Edward listen to Esme and do the right thing? And speaking of Esme, she's just the best. I hope her forgiveness and gentle persuasion will sink in.
I can't imagine what Bella will do when the Cullens descend upon her. WILL she forgive as Esme thinks she will? Will she listen to Edward and believe the truth? Her confidence is so shattered, I think it will be very hard for her to trust again.
As always, pomme, thanks so much for your beautiful writing and for your quick updates. It takes the sting out (a bit!) that this story is moving along so quickly.
Needless to say I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way!
Edward - he is changed, fundamentally, at the end of this chapter. It won't be all at once, but he is changed and will continue to "man up". I think you'll be impressed.
With Bella, the real question is, will she be able to react?
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: jhharp08 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Esme is awesome, i liked this chapter, i hope it continues to get better!
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Wow, that was intense. As much as I hate to admit it, I was actually feeling bad for Edward...even if he did bring on himself. His reaction was very fitting though, and Esme was absolutely amazing. She had the perfect balance of motherly love and comfort, and wisdom and strength. She said exactly what Edward needed to hear...tough love, but still supported him completely and gave him hope. Esme was definitely the hero/star of this chapter and you, of course, for putting us out of our misery so quickly...lol! ;)
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way! Edward needed her to slap him around and love him all the same.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Ugh! So glad the next button is there!!!
Author's Response: LOL! The next one just went up today!
I have 32 written, so they go up pretty fast.
Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Wow, that was SOOOO intense!!!!! I cried through the whole chapter! I can't wait to see Bella's reaction.
Author's Response: It's a tough chapter, but needed.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
And I thought I'd cry and cry for Edward in this chapter. It wasn't near so bad as I expected....Wow, I love Esme. She is strong and she is soft. And this is the how and why women hold their families together.
Sandra
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
i hope we hear from angela so we know what is going on with bella and the baby......
love the chapter.. it was hard but it was needed
update really soon like now
Author's Response: You will get a little about Bella and the baby in the next chapter. Just hang in there!
Thank you for the reviewing!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Go Alice!
Author's Response: Alice totally takes charge. She's a fun character, but strong.
Wait til you meet Jasper!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ibleedmaizeandblue (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Wow. Poor Edward, no one deserves to feel like that... I'm curious as to how he will handle himself after this chapter. I believe he will man up but at the same time I can't imagine how difficult that will be for him to do.
You are creating a beautiful story here full of emotion and pain. I can't wait to see what is up next. Each chapter is a suprise... we never know whose perspective will be up next.
Author's Response: What an amazing review! Thank you so much!
The reconstruction of Edward doesn't happen overnight, but it will happen.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I am not sure but I would like to hear from Bella. I think this was a great chapter! Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: We aren't quite to Bella yet, but she is coming, and it *is* painful.
Thank you for reviewing!
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