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Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Oh I most definitely need a support group after reading this...That was amazing. Go Esme! She stepped in when she needed to and gave Edward the swift kick in the ass that he needed. He can't be a child any longer and wollow in his self loathing, it's time to let all that go and man up. This story is so painful but OH MY GOD it's amazing. I love this chapter. Edward has a long road ahead of him and I have a feeling the reunion and seeing Charlie when he finds out why Bella left is not going to be pleasant. Charlie is going to be postal I would imagine when he finds out that Bella is pregnant and has been living how she has for the last several months. Then knowing she was pregnant and Edward left her, regardless of the fact that he didn't know, Charlie is not going to be a happy camper. This story just continues to get better and better. Amazing job!
Author's Response: Yeah, Charlie doesn't take this so well, but you'll be surprised about what he does. Edward DOES man up. It's not all at once, but he does.
Hang in there. I think you'll appreciate it!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: KellyCullen (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
The baby better be ok!! :)
Author's Response: I *swear* the baby is okay!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
I love all the different points of view in your story! It's wonderful to read about what's going on through other people's eyes, other than Bella's or Edward's. To me, it creates a bigger world and it works great with your plot because we can see what's going on behind the scenes, things that neither Bella or Edward would be aware of.
Author's Response: The whole story's premise is the emotional responses of *everyone* during a very trying time. I am glad you are enjoying it!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Angela is s awesome! She's my hero right now! Bella's whole situation is so heartbreaking and the letter she wrote to Charlie was so sad. I swear, I don't think I've cried this much reading so few chapters of a Twilight fanfic before. Granted, I've only been reading for a few months but I read almost every day! Great story and awesome writing!
Author's Response: I am so honoured. I am sorry you cried, but it means I'm doing something right! Just keep in mind I *do* believe in happy endings!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Man do I love Esme. What a mom. I can understand his thoughts but he needs to accept this, put his thoughts aside and be there for bella!
Great chap and thanks for the quick update. Loved it.
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Rinalysee (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Edward really has to cut the self pity out and become strong. I'm really anxious to see what happens when they get to the hospital. I hope everything is fine with Bella and the baby. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: The hospital will be ugly.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
That was good, very emotional...too short though :)
Author's Response: It was hard to read and write.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
great job i loved it soooooo much ....UD UD UD UD
Author's Response: I will! I promise!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
OMG, this is so sad!!!! I'm in tears! I'm so glad Angela is there for her. Oh my God, I can't even imagine how Edward will feel when he finds out what's happened to Bella. I'm so emotional right now! <sniff, sniff> I better go get a box of kleenex before I continue reading...
Author's Response: You will find out! keep reading!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
wow!!! this is a completely intense story. i'm glad i found it. i can't wait for more
Author's Response: It is tough but I do believe in Happy Endings!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I love that it was Esme who gave E the support he needed. She not only gave him the support he needed but also told him that he could no longer be a child because he had to be a man. Even though the statement seemed harsh it is something that E has to do if he wants to get B back. Can't wait to read what's next. Next chapter maybe in Esme's and Charlie's POV? =)
Author's Response:
Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Hey there! I just started reading your story and it's heartbreaking but I'm hooked! I have a feeling I'll have to read all 18 chapters tonight! I hate to do that because I just know I'm going to want more afterwards, but so far, I can't help myself!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I hear it's addicting! At least i update fast!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
That chapter deserves the title for King of Sobs...seriously, crying at the beginning, in fact I started to cry a few chapters ago, but that one just broke me down. You are great...I can't wait til the next chapter, having to know that he will have to make decisions in regards to Bella and their child, that part was hard to read too. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Author's Response: Oh, hun, they get FAR worse! Hang on though. There is a happy ending!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I love Esme, she at least can try and get through to him.
Thank you for posting again so soon, the cliff hanger at the end of the last chapter just about drove me nuts.
I'm wondering how Em is reacting to Edward's reaction to finding out he was going to be a dad. The whole throwing up and shock should say he didn't know.
Author's Response: I will tell you straight up, Edward DID NOT know. Absolutely not. He made a bad choice, but not *that* kind of bad choice.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
This line broke my heart
"Just like he adored the baby’s mother."
Beautiful, of course Edward could sense something was wrong, they are two halves of a whole.
Author's Response: That connection plays up in a big way soon.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: maravilla (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I'm glad Edward is finally gonna man up!! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: And he will. I think you will be impressed.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
love it! need more now! Write more soon please I will be waiting.
Author's Response: It will be up soon! Promise!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
love it! need more now! Write more soon please I will be waiting.
Author's Response: There are 32 chapters written, so I'm sure the next will come soon!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: emt_lvr (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Totally bawling my eyes out over here!! I love Esme.
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: monokuroboo69 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
*breathes deeply* crying a little too much.. wonderful though. my heart hurts, but in a good way. and hey, BB told me she went and nominated you over at the razzle awards?! congrats! i think she went and nominated you for something else on another site as well.. thats what i last heard at least. pls get the nxt chap up when you can! i'm dying here! and congratulations again on the nomination!
Author's Response: OH MY GOODNESS! She nominated me for Best Author! I'm BLOWN AWAY. I can't thank her enough for that.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: middlechild79 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
That Esme is one smart cookie. I hope he listens to her and allows Bella to think and feel her own feelings. I hate when people decide what is "right" for other people. Sorry, personal rant.
Author's Response: Esme ROCKS! I love writing her this way! She is totally right in this circumstance!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: slaybelle (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
That did hurt to read but you are right, Edward needs to be completely destroyed to heal.
I love the last line of this.
Author's Response: Got to deconstruct to reconstruct!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Edward emerges!!! Woo Hoo! I would like to see where Bella's head is at this next chapter!
Author's Response: You've got a few chapters to go before Bella, but when we get there it's heartbreaking.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
yay!!!!!!! keep going cant wait to see what happens at the hospital...
Author's Response: It's coming soon!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I just started reading this today and it is really good. I really loved Esme's part in this chapter.
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying! Thanks so much for reviewing!
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