Reviewer: petite_femme (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 09:42 PM · On: FGB Outtake the Second - Three A.M.
I know this story is old, but I just found it because the stories that I've been following haven't updated in a while. I literally read the entire thing in a few hours. This story is completely addictive. Your writing really made me feel the mood swings and the emotion of the characters. I laughed hysterically at some parts (Jasper. Anything Jasper.), and yet I majorly teared up at others. Absolutely fantastic job on this.
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
This isn't my first time reading, but I wanted to comment on your note. "I wrote the stuff and it still hurts." If you aren't moved by your own writing, your doing something wrong. Veracity and authenticity come from true feeling in the author. I really like this story.
Reviewer: Angel_on_Wheels (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 12:58 AM · On: FGB Outtake the Second - Three A.M.
Great story I really enjoyed reading it.
Reviewer: Undercover415 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No
Okay, so I am sooooo bawling right now. I'm crying so hard that my head hurts!
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Thank you for not calling her Libby. I love the name Elizabeth, it would be my daughter's name if I had one.
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
He hugged the incubator. I am dying.
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
All of them giving blood, wow that is amazing.
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
It can't get worse! Noooo!
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Oh my gawd. Stab me in the heart.
Can I please say that I'm so flipping happy Esme told E to man up?
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
It was so brave of you to share your experience. I'm not sure how long this story has been around (I guess I could easily look!) but I hope you are well and happy in every way. I love this story, thank you for sharing it.
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I love Emmett!
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Thank goodness for Angela.
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I did not even think of Bella taking off. I've not read any stories along this line so I'm excited. But so sooooo sad and I'm glad that Emmett said something.
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Oh no!
Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 03:36 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
So sweet. I love when he says she is so beautiful around him.
Reviewer: twilightcougar (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
#sniff#.It definetly the golden eyes of a particular vampire
Reviewer: LMC123 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2012 11:22 AM · On: FGB Outtake the Second - Three A.M.
loved the last chapter, missed it from the original story so well happy you ended on it. def the most beautiful first and last chapter of any story. really loved your story, thankyou x
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2012 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
"Everything will be all right in the end... if it's not all right then it's not yet the end."
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2012 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
This week's incentive: Alice is taking you shopping and you can pick ONE thing, anything you WANT and you get to come back and wear it for ... insert Cullen boy of preference. What do you get? And what do you do with said Cullen boy!
Uhmmmm... Can't I wear a Cullen boy? Pretty please??
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2012 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
I think the only problem I have with this story is it seems some of the author's notes are longer than the chapters :( Oh well, as long as the next one is ready to read I'll survive!!! :D
Reviewer: Tootz (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together
I don"t know how much of this I can take. This is the best writing I have ever read and beleive me I have read a lot!!!!!!
Reviewer: dianmaxx1 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
no way. right? nfw!
Reviewer: dianmaxx1 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No
wtf?
Reviewer: djwolf55 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 08:04 AM · On: FGB Outtake the Second - Three A.M.
This was a fantastic story! Thank you!
Reviewer: dianmaxx1 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2012 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
wow
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