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Reviewer: bmm (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: Mirror Mirror

this is a great story.  Most of the time Rosalie is protrayed as a bitter bitch, but in this story it seems that she will be more likable. I can't wait for the next chapter.  Please keep writing...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm nervous to write a Bella/Edward story as my first, so I figured i'd try these two. Rosalie is actually fun to write, because I get to be a self-centered, vain little vixen. I do try to remain true and give her a bitter, bitchy/spoiled edge, but I am also finding I could write her so that you might even feel compassion for her. Soon as I get chapter 2 back from my beta I'll post it into the queue for publishing!

Reviewer: popsewini (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: Mirror Mirror

That was really great! Is she going to find Emmett on this hunting trip or a different one? Please continue!!! xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the compliment and the review! And yes, this is the infamous solo hunting trip she takes when she finds "dying hot guy"!

Reviewer: KariAnn (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: Mirror Mirror

Hi Achelle, this is a very good start!  I didn't even realize you'd posted your first chapter, but I'm glad I found it!  It's well-written, and I love the insight into Rose's mind.  Just curious though... is it going to mention how Edward offended Rose when she was first made?

Anyway, can't wait 'til we me Emmett and the infamous bear!  ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks Kari! Yes, Rose actually does touch on Edward's distaste for her in the next chapter. The bear and Emmett will be there too, lol. Thank you so much for the compliment! If it's well written, it's only because of inspiration from writers such as yourself!

Reviewer: hkmmurph (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 1: Mirror Mirror

I am so glad to see this story up. There just aren't enough decent Em/Rose fictions in existane. Good job! :3



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Working to get the next chapters up soon. Thanks for the compliment and the review!

Reviewer: mysticsavantpixie58 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Mirror Mirror

love this story, please keep it going

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. I'll definitely keep it going. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: ghetto_262 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: Mirror Mirror

wow, i am usually not a big fan of Rosalie, but i am finding your story quite enjoyable... well done.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I honestly didn't like Rosalie in the books, but I am also nervous to write a bella/edward story so I chose Emmett and Rosalie instead. Its actually fun to write as her, because she's so vain and self-centered. I try my hardest to give her more dimension than a shallow hot blonde, though. I think she's smarter than she lets on. Thanks for the review again and please stop by again soon!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 1: Mirror Mirror

MORE!!!



Author's Response:

My beta has chapter 2. Once I get it back from her i'll get it into the queue to be posted. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: irmelin (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 1: Mirror Mirror

I really like it, great work! Looking forward to the part where she meets Emmet! Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for being my first reviewer, and thanks for the compliment! I'm currently working to get chapter 2 up, you know, with the bear and the "dying hot guy." Thanks once again!

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