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Reviewer: CherryDarling77 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh, achelle i love it!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for that lemon, it's gonna be hot!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! it's coming soon, i promise.. Pun intended! lol
Reviewer: CoCoC (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
I have to tell you that I absolutely LOVE this story! I'm glad that they have both decided to forgive one another and I can't wait for your next update. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Aww thanks! i'm glad you love it! Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: veronicacullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
finally!!!!!!!!!!!!
ca't wait 2 see wat happens with those 2
Author's Response: lol! thank you!!
Reviewer: indiainksky (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
awww...Emmet is such a softy, deep down.
Author's Response: He is, isn't he? Thanks!
Reviewer: BeyondStarsAndBoulevards (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
Oh my gosh, your updates are coming out so quickly, and I love it! Your story is truly amazing...my favorite, actually. You are an amazing writer with "mad skills".
Chapter 18 was great, I'm so glad that all the drama (even though the drama was great!) is over and there can finally be some Emmett and Rosalie quality time together. =D
Can't wait for Chapter 19.
Author's Response: thank you! i was surprised, because i just submitted it earlier that day, lol. sometimes textbelle surprises e. Anyway, i'm so honored to be a favorite! Thank you for thinking i have "madd skills." I do have a few betas that help, like KariAnn, Ledybug and cfmom, so i cant take all the credit! I'mg lad you liked 18 and i'll be working on 19 this week!
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
OMG! Em is so damn sweet! This has been my favorite chapter so far!!!!! GREAT WORK!
Author's Response: thank you so much! he is, isn't he? *sigh* thanks for the review, and making chapter 18 you fave!
Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
HI MARI I congratulate LA FOR SELECTION OF MUSIC, LOLLL SÃO LINDAS, DIVINE, ESPECIALLY ROMANTICAS ... The Temptations - Night and Day Billy Joel / Jordan Knight-She's Got a Way Bic Runga - Sway Jagged Edge - I Gotta Be Desiree - Kissing You Janet Jackson - Let's Wait A While, THESE SONGS ARE MAGIC ... THANK YOU FOR YOUR LOVE, FOR YOUR DEDICATION AND WORK Browse and select them to us. DIANA BLACK
Author's Response: thanks so much! those were songs i listened to as i wrote, esp She's Got A Way, I Gotta Be, and Kissing You!
Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
EI DHG THIS CHAPTER HAS BEEN ROCK, YOU ROCK ... LOLL I look forward to THE NEXT CHAPTER, ROSE / EMMETT IS ON FIRE, LOLLL LOVE THE PROCEEDINGS OF THIS STORY. BEYOND LOVE JAKE / NESSIE (KARI), AMO BELLA / EDWARD (LISA) LOVE AND LIGHT ROSE / EMMETT (MARI). LEARN A LOVE THEM THANK YOU .... I LOVE YOU'S DHG. DIANA BLACK PS CONGRATULATE ONCE AGAIN THIS SITE TWILIGHTED FOR EFFICIENCY, EXCELLENCE AND VALIDATE COPETENCIA BY SO FAST NOT ONLY THIS STORY AND YES OTHER ... Appreciate it, is YOU ROCK ...
Author's Response: thanks! i was happy it got validated quickly too! That is very true, i do adore Kari's Jake/Nessie story, Lisa's Bella/Edward, and now Shay's new Leah... with a new manmaybe ?? :)... i guess you can say that within the DHG you get all of the great couples and their love stories without having to step out! THank you for being such a big support in all of our stories! we all appreciate you for it!
sincerely,
mariecel
Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
HELLO DEAR MARI DHG THIS CHAPTER HAS BEEN UNIQUELY DIVINE, enlightening. I was surprised EMMETT LIST HOW MANY QUALITIES AND DEFECTS OF ROSE, SO WHO TRULY LOVE AND CAN PRONFUNDAMENTE list them, qualify them. FOR ME THE WORST OF DEFECT STUBBORNNESS ARE THE ROSE AND THE PRIDE. FOI LINDO COMO Emeetto HAD THE SENSITIVITY TO UNDERSTAND THE "FEAR" OF ROSE HAVE IN RESPECT, PERFECTLY JUSTIFIED BY THE FACT THAT HAVE BEEN ESTRUPADOR ... MARI, YOU ARE OVERCOMING INCREASINGLY, WHETHER IN EMOTIONS, AS IN YOUR LINDA WAY OF WRITING WITH MUCH LOVE .... YOU LEAVE MY SINCERE THANKS AND THANK YOU for sharing this EMOTION ... KISSES DIANA BLACK
Author's Response: Aww! diana, Thanks so much!! thank you for thinking i write beautifully (linda, correct?), and agreeing with rose's reaction and emmett's awfully sweet understanding to her fear of sex at the moment. I'm glad you enjoyed his list of her habits and details. I love your reviews. they bring a sunshine to my day!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
AWW!! YEAH! Great job.
Author's Response: thanks!!
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
YAY! ROSALIE!
I love this story, and I already added Strengtha and Remorse to my faves. This is such a great story! Keep going!
Author's Response: thank you! and thanks for also subscribing to S&R. I'll have to swing by your stories when im done writing V&P!
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
I'm glad that they didn't go all the way this first time, and I'm glad that Rosalie was able to gain some comfort from Emmett. It's about time she stopped all of her games.
Author's Response: THanks for agreeing that they should wait... and lol at the games comment! thats why i hoped to get this update out soon. i'm sure people were sick of her bitchyness by now! lol. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
You my dear sweet girl are a delicious tease. Goodbye stubborn pigheaded drama, hello sexually frustrated drama. It was nice to see Rosalie crack finally.
Author's Response: LOL! thanks! i think? lol The sexually frustrated drama wont last long... she's a freak and doesnt know it yet, lol. He was born a freak. Thanks for enjoying Rosalie "finally crack"! and thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: liork (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
That was sssooooo good!!! :):)
Author's Response: thank you!!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
nice
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: Feisty (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
Does Fred Astaire sing? I thought he just danced... Wow. You learn something new every day.
Love this:
"Finally, I gave in." It's about f-ing time.
"Wait. Did he just say my skin… creases?" hahahahaha
“You’re unbelievably stubborn, cold, bitter, and you can hold onto grudges for far longer than anyone I’ve ever known,” he said with stern resolve. “You’d drive most any average joe away with your antics if he wasn’t completely sweet on you.”
Author's Response: Yes Fred Sings! check it out on youtube (Night and Day, Fred Astaire). Its pretty cute.. he dances with Ginger Rogers, and sings as well, and you can buy his music.
I'm glad to give you that she finally gave in, lol. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Jennixst (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
I thought you handled their making up beautifully and It's so right that they aren't straight into it. The era and the circumstances don't allow for it.
Author's Response: Thank you for understanding my choice and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: justemmettplease (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 19: Declaration
Gracious, that was awesome! And you're absolutely right about her past needing to be dealt with. Emmett was just divine here. You wrote it perfectly, honest and nervous and sexy, and all Emmett. There's no way Rosalie could resist him. Very nice little hint of lemon, also. I have a feeling when the lemons are full blown that house better watch out. I sense structual damage in their future. Good thing they're moving to Washington. U would also like to say what a fine job you've done at keeping them in character. Rose's firery dispositon and Emmett's sweet sexines is some of what makes them my favorites. Again, a wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! that means a lot to me considering your screen name and the fact that I assume that you "know" emmett and his character. Often times i get nervous that I won't be able to deliver to everyone else's standards of the hot, strong, muscular cullen big brother. I think your sensing of the future just might be on point, but i can say no more without spoiling it for everyone!
Reviewer: Bose (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
So, is that the power of "Sorry"? lol Very nice writing sweetie, i am kinda suprised that Kent lived...of course i shouldv'e known you wouldn't kill one of your "not ugly" guy crushes... :p
Mike
Author's Response: of course i wouldnt kill off tom welling/clark kent. you wouldnt kill of jessica biel. and thank you bubbie. i love you.
Reviewer: KariAnn (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
This is in response to reviewer Feisty who left this comment:
Note: "I looked away, shame coloring my face." Shame can't color her face. Nothing can. She doesn't have blood.
Okay, I don't think that she meant her face was LITERALLY colored by blood. I think she simply meant that the emotion of shame was painted across her face.
And just so you know, I don't mean her face literally had paint on it. It's called a metaphor.
-Kari
Reviewer: chancoltbritt (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
ok so impatience is not for me!! wating for a long time for the next chapter....please update soon!! love it!!
Author's Response: chapter 18 was submitted today. hopefully it wont take long for TB to vaildate it for me! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
EI MARI INCREASINGLY I am amazed, amazed, ecstatic with the DEVELOP THIS STORY. YOUR WRITING YOUR IDEAS, CONTEXT ... Congratulations are undeniable. LOVE HOW IS INVOLVED IN EMMETT ROSE. SO IT REALLY DOES LOVE YOU TO HURT AND ANGER WITH ROSE him with indifference. KNOW THAT SHE LOVES IRREVOCABLY, BUT WITHOUT LIMITATION YOUR PRIDE IS A NONSENSE. ROSE LOSING TIME, AND I'm going crazy, LAUGHS ... MaRiZiNhA, I WANT TO SEE THESE TWO IS "UNDERSTANDING" LOGO. YOU KNOW WHO CREATED A MONSTER (EU), IS NOT??. RISOS BEIJOS DGH DIANA BLACK
Author's Response: Diana! thank you so much! I loved this review, it ma]kes me feel warm inside! i'm glad you're liking it all, and i promise they'll get together VERY SOON. infact... no i cant say it here. come to my thread, you'll see, lol.
Reviewer: muse-alicious (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
i adore this story!!!!! youve really kept the characters, in character :D cant wait for the next chapter, well done :) x
Author's Response: thank you so much! 18 has been submitted, so lets hope for a quick validation!
Reviewer: raceyoutocullenrock (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
OMG!! I very nearly died waiting after the massive cliff hanger in the last chapter, but this was SOOOO worth the wait :)
I'm so glad that Emmett didn't kill Thomas, that would have been bad, his poor Nana. Rosalie did a VERY silly thing in winding up her newborn like that, and she got what she deserved, a good dose of shame and humility.
I really hope Emmett understands her subtle hint right at the end there, she really does love him, don't we all *sigh*
Hopefully you wont take too long with the next chapter, I want them to get over that final hurdle already. Both of them deserve to be happy, and a little more smutty *grin*. Pretty please?
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Author's Response: I'm glad the chapter was worth the wait!! i couldn't kill thomas off, really. Chapter 18 is up so i guess you'll see if your hope is answered. =)
Thank you so much and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 18: Apologies
Great chapter I loved it Cant wait for the next I am trying to wait patiently but I cant Urgh
Author's Response: Thank you! and chapter 18 is up now! Yey for a speedy validation!
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