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Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
Wow, my Mari, I would have such a human headache from being thrown around like that, but I think it would be worth it.
When Rose was standing there watching his lips with the blood on them, OMG how hard was that!?! I mean, hell, she wants her tongue in his mouth anyway, and now it has blood in it! Damn!
“I suppose now that your curiosity has been answered, you can keep your investigations and experiments relegated to only animals.” I Ha! That was funny.
“As long as I have you—my angel—by my side, I can’t be remorseful about anything.” Yep! Oh my heart!!!
I looked over at Emmett as he pondered over the novel in his hand—Dracula by Bram Stoker. A snort came from him… A snort came from ME! Funny!
“Now, with it just being the two of you here in the house, I trust the both of you to… use discretion,” Esme said, with a certain look in her eyes. “Especially within the house, as there are so many valuable things here.” OH SHIT! Ooooh shit. If they only had Alice.
My weight was supported with whatever he threw me against. And so it begins. ;)
Clap! Clap! Clap! Love it! Thank you!!!
Love you!
~Jen
Author's Response: Oh my Jen,
i love your reviews! I'm glad i can get an "oh my heart!" from you again! its been a while since V&P's done that for you! Thank you for reading and reviewing, my darling! I miss you!
Love,
Mari
Reviewer: CherryDarling77 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
Oh Achelle, you BAD girl, cliffhanger of an ending. Excellent as always and oh so HOT lemony goodness!
Loves it :) Can't wait for the update.
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Author's Response: lol thanks cherry. sorry about the cliff, but im glad you liked the lemony goodness! Just sent ch2 of strength and remorse to my beta for some editing before i post it, and im going to begin work on chapter 23 of V&P this week!
Thanks again!
Reviewer: kimi-cullen (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
awesome as always :) nice sexy times! lol
x
Author's Response: thanks kimi! glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Bose (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
Though i'm sure we all love a good sex scene and you did a great job on it! I do think that sex in the same chapter that he kills someone is a bit off. Yes i know that there was time lapsed between the incident but still. Maybe this wouldv'e been better as seperate chapters?
my 2 cents
Author's Response: hah, well a little too late for that now, dont you think :P thanks foryour honest opinion. I know you're just trying to be helpful. Love you!
Reviewer: Bose (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 22: Firsts
lol "teeth, teeth, teeth!" that can ruin a moment
Author's Response: hehe
Reviewer: Bose (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 21: Redemption
sounds like you might like gifts like that too :P
Author's Response: lol i do like gifts like that :P
Reviewer: Bose (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: Revelations
lol she dodged it :p dont get any ideas lol
Author's Response: thanks! lol he let her dodge it!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
Any sex that ends with remodeling your home has to be great sex. And you are the best at writing cliffhangers. Loved the long chapter. I read the first lemon last night and the wall smashing lemon this evening. I love a little lemon before bed. Have a great week!
Author's Response: Kelly! LOL i agree about that! I'm happy that you appreciate the cliffhangers, and glad to give you lemons before bedtime!
love, Mari
Reviewer: KariAnn (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
Hey, woman! Woo-hoo! You know I loved this chap! I briefly considered copying my review from FF, 'cause that's how lazy I am! Haha! I love that they tore down a wall. The way you wrote the expressions on Carlisle & Esme's faces when they walked in the door... priceless. ;)
Love ya!
-Kari
Author's Response: thank you so much! glad to know you thought the rents faces were priceless, lol. even if you copied your review from FF, i'd be happy with a review at all, so dont worry!
Reviewer: Katara97 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
This is one of my MOST FAVORITE stories on here. =]
As always, loved it.
Author's Response: AWW! well thank you! that makes me feel all warm and fuzzy! Thanks for such a sweet review!
Reviewer: cakes4547 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
wow what a great chapter! thanks for updating, I can't wait to see what happens next! love it so far.
Author's Response: thank you so much! glad you love it so far!
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
Awesome chapter!
Haha! I loved Esme's/Carlisle's reaction! haha! What exactly do you say when your living room has been torn to shyte?
lol! Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I"m glad you enjoyed their reaction and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
There's the Em and Rose we all love! Who wouldn't want to break furniture with Emmy?
Cliffy's are evil. EVIL! Update soon please.
Author's Response: LOL thank you! yes, who wouldn't indeed!
Sorry about the Cliffie... i'll be back with chapter 23 in two weeks... and chapter 2 of S&R will be going up soon!
Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
Mari - oh Mari - this is so much better with the changes you made. The pace, the fluidity, the little details....just wonderful. You did a great job, hon.
I loved that Carlisle calls Emmett - son. And I am really glad you changed kid to doll when Emmett was talking to Rose. Much more well suited for them. I think you do a fabulous job of capturing not just Emmett's playful side, but also his deep and growing love for Rosalie.
Fabulous!
~Lisa
Author's Response: Thanks momma hen!
wouldnt be what it is without your help, and i really do appreciate your generosity in devoting time to my chapters. i still CAN't believe you beta 3 stories, and write your own, and still come out sane! lol
thank you for being such a great friend, and for reviewing even though i know you already spend hours proofing and commenting on each chapter!
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
I love the way you have captured Emmett's humour and joy. I am starting to understand how he and Rose fit together. Great chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed my version of Emmett. thank you so much!
Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
Amazing chapter! You're a genius!
Author's Response: Aww thank you! And htanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: justemmettplease (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
Holy crow! Well, at least it was only the living room, right? Rosalie really does have great self-control. I wouldn't have lasted the first day alone with Emmett. It seems like his basic personality is coming into the fore, take what you're given and deal with it. Just the right thing to balance Rosalie's serious side. Its good to see her find happiness in Emmett. Here's looking forward to home repair and Hale family drama. And lots more of Emmett & Rosalie destroying things...
Author's Response: aww thank you so much! yes she does have some control, though now that she knows that sex could be more amazing, i doubt the control will last too long, lol. but i'm with you, i wouldnt last a day alone w/ him either. I'm slowly trying to peal away at his newborn exterior and let in-character emmett shine through. i'm glad you're agreeing with it so far! esp given your screenname, i feel that's a great compliment coming from you! Ch 2 of S&R is up next, and then i'll be back w/ ch 23! Thanks for reading and reviewing as always!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
hmmmmmmmm.........can't wait for what comes next!!!!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Reviewer: cakes4547 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 22: Firsts
Can I just say that I absolutely ADORE this story?!
lol but I really do think it's great so far. I was sick in bed today and I did nothing but sit here and read it - please update soooon!
Ever since reading Twilight I have been curious about Emmett and Rosalie's story, and I really think you did a great job of capturing their struggles and growning love in his first year. I agree and think that it couldn't have all been sunshine and rainbows - there had to be some real problems and struggles, especially with a character like Rosalie. I think you did a great job of capturing her.
I look forward to reading the rest! I can't wait! loves it.
Author's Response: thanks so much! Cn i just say that I really appreciate this review?! I'm so glad that my Em and Rose entertained you on your sick day. Thank you for agreeing with the way i captured their struggles and the way i portrayed Rosalie's thoughts and actions. That really does mean a lot, and I write for readers like yourself I've got chapter 22 up now! anway, I hope you feel better!
Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Mariecel
Reviewer: MsShayB (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 22: Firsts
*cracking up* OMGosh!! I love how real you made their first time. "Teeth, teeth, teeth" That part had me giggling. Poor Rose, she was trying, though. lol!! Please don't tell me that he went and drank someone dry. Oh, Emmy...c'mon. *sigh* I tell you about those damn newborn cravings. Rose wasn't enough, huh? *shaking my head*
Love ya, Shay
Author's Response: thank you for appreciating the "realness" of their first time! yeah, he slipped. he's been too perfect for a while.. had to let him slip up... and remain true to the "i was a challenge in my early years" thing. thanks for reviewing!
your pookie-lala,
mari
Reviewer: MsShayB (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 21: Redemption
Hahaha, Go Rose!! Nice hook-up. However, I've been wondering...how old is Thomas? Anywho, I'm glad to see that he and Maggie hit it off.
AND SHE SCORES!!!! Touch down! Emmy-bear finally decided to taste the cookies, huh? Hahaha!!!! Priceless. I loved the chappy.
~Shay
Author's Response: i dont know how i missed answering thi s review! thank you so much! i'm glad you enjoyed it! and i hope things can calm down for you in RL so may come back to the fandom!
love you, Mari
Reviewer: KariAnn (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 22: Firsts
Eek, I'd forgotten that you'd told me this chapter would be a cliffie! Dun dun dun! Lol. :)
This was a great chapter - Their first date was just so sweet and perfect. I totally had this mental image of Edward holding the two elk in a headlock, and it was simultaneously amusing and just perfect. Very creative on Emmett's part, and it was very sweet of Edward to help them out. ;)
Again, great job! Can't wait to find out whether Emmett killed some innocent human bystanders!
Love ya! -Kari
Author's Response: Thanks Kari! Glad you liked their first date! cant wait till my latest validates so you all can see how the human(s) panned out!
Love ya and thanks for always supporting me!
Mari
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 22: Firsts
Top Three Favorites of Chapter 21
1. Vampire's Picnic - very cute- the roses, the candles and "dinner"
2. How u described Em and Rose first time together
3. The human blood cliff-hanger
Great Chapter and Happy Halloween
Author's Response: Thanks Kelly! I'm so glad you liked it, esp the picnic, their first time, a d the cliff hanger! So glad to know you're enjoying!
Reviewer: kimi-cullen (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 22: Firsts
oh no.... :(
after such a perfect night hes likely to have gone and killed someone :(
excellent chapter tho :)
kim x
Author's Response: yeah, i know, but it was just too perfect for me, and we all know emmett had a hard time sticking to the rules in teh beginning.
thank you so much, Kimi!
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 22: Firsts
Emmett setting up that date at the beginning of the chapter was so sweet and funny at the same time, because of Edward waiting there with the elk. That made me laugh.
What made me laugh more was when Rose kneed him. I was in stitched.
Ah, but the ending, major dun dun duuuun. Now I'm wondering if it was one of his singers or just a stray human. Poor Emmett and poor Rose too, I can imagine Edward's going to give her hell for that.
This story just gets better and better, I don't even know how that's possible, since it was so good to start with.
Amazing.
Alice.x
p.s I voted for you.
Author's Response: Thanks Alice!! I'm glad it made you laugh!! and that you enjoyed the first date! I'm working on the next chapter now. Im so glad you think it gets better and better! i'm constantly afraid i'll drive my readers away!
Up next in teh queue for validation is a naughty AU V&P oneshot of a threesome between Em/Ro/Ed... i know, RANDOM! if smut is your sort of thing, keep on theh look out... if Canon couples are mre your thing and that idea of edward joining in squicks you out, i'd understand if you skipped it! lol
Vanity and Patience was nominated for Best Rosalie and Emmett in The Golden Chocolate Awards To vote, please visit: http://goldenchocolateadwards.webs.com/voting.htm You only have until Tomorrow (Friday) 11:59pm EST to vote!
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