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Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 6: Lost
glad he was only gone for the 8 days and that rosalie forgave him her feeling of love won over a feeling of spite that's good
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 5: Predator
oh poor rosalie, she has faith in emmett i'm sure t
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 4: Changed
newborn crazyness here we come
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 4: Changed
newborn crazyness here we come
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 4: Changed
newborn crazyness here we come
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 4: Changed
newborn crazyness here we come
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 3: Found
rosalie with such affection for emmett and edward as usual the angsty one
Author's Response: hehe yep! thanks so much!
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 2: The Hunted
an excellent chapter the way she immediately knows she has feelings for emmett(she does not know his name yet) is realistic because she immediately knows how she feels about edward and nothing is going to happen there
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 1: Mirror Mirror
fab start liking this story idea cant wait to read on
Author's Response: Thank you tracy! Just catching up on old, unanswered reviews!
Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
I'm curious: LINDA YOUR STORY WILL JUST HOW? HOPE SEJE TO THE ARRIVAL OF NESSIE (LAUGHS).
REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY. IT'S SO EASY TO READ AND ENJOY.
You show yourself a great writer.
AGUARDO YOU HERE IN BRAZIL.
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
THESE CHAPTERS YOU HAD ANY INFLUENCE OR ANY SUGGESTION OF THE BEST SCENES OF HOT MASTURBATION AND SEX SCENE? Lol.
KNOW THAT THERE IS A RIGHT PERV MIKE IN YOUR LIFE, AND THANK GOD FOR THAT (YOU ARE GOOD TOGETHER, Heavenly Creatures)
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
MARI I was thinking, could you possibly DO ROSE jealous of EMMETT (MEAN MAYBE A ROGUE COME AND VISIT CULLENS She was interested in EMMETT) I WANT TO SEE THIS SCENE.
ROSE was always so self-assured, WANT TO SEE HOW JEALOUSY act on it. (This is ONLY a simple TIP)
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
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Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
The JEALOUSY THAT FELT BY EMMETT ROSE (I refer to the DANCE MR. KENT), WAS DANGEROUS AS WELL, IT WAS SWEET.
YOU KNOW THAT JAKE IS THE BEST FOR ME, BUT THE PROJECT OF EMMETT MARI YOUR EYES, MY CAPTIVE HEART so that i just LOVE EVERYTHING HE DO, THINK (EVEN BEING STUPID, LOLLL)
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
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Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
BEAUTIFUL FORM WHEN EMMETT (WAS ATTACKED BY BEAR AND WAS DYING), HE SAID THAT YOUR ANGEL ROSE ERA. MAL KNOW THAT SHE WAS YOUR ANGEL and soul mate.
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
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Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
LOVE THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE THE LOVE OF CARLISLE AND ESME IS their "children".
TO ME THAT MAKE THEM AS HUMAN
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
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Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
HAVE A CURIOSITY, KNOW HOW WAS THE TIME OF NEWBORN EMMETT, BUT HOW WAS THE ROSE OF?
SHE IS ALSO A YOUNG ROGUE, Posui MUCH CONTROL, WHAT YOU SAY ABOUT THAT?
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
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Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
FILIPINA, YOU KNOW THAT I LOVED THE BIT WHEN EMMETT WITHIN THE ROSE (THAT WAS HOT, AND ANIMAL FRI). And growl, LOLLLL.
FOR YOU WHAT WAS THE HOTTEST PARTY, FRI? (ONLY THE VALE PRIMARY).
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
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Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
HEY, YOU WITH YOUR MIND AND BRIGHT PERVERTIDA (PERV-SMUT), MADE ME SEE WHAT EMMETT PASSED DURING THEIR FIRST YEAR OF NEWBORN, LOLLLLL.
YOUR IDEA ON THIS PERIOD WAS IN SUBLIME, SURREAL.
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
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Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
MARI, YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS COUPLE (AND IT'S YOUR FAULT BECAUSE CREATED A MONSTER) SHOULD NOT ONLY LOVE EMMETT, BUT HAVE LEARNED TO UNDERSTAND AND LOVE ROSE. THEY REALLY COMPLETE.
ROSE NEED THIS SIDE MAN, SWEET AND ALEGRE DE EMMETT.
THANK YOU FOR THIS EMOTION.
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
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Reviewer: anginha (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
HELLO DEAR MARI
I WANT TO STRESS HOW BIG IS THE YOUR WRITING IDEAS, AND THE PROCEEDINGS OF THIS STORY.
COME ON, THERE ARE 12 TO REVIEWS 600, woaaaaa
KISSES
DIANA-CHICA BRAZILIAN
Reviewer: cakes4547 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 4: Changed
Okay, okay, you caught me. I'm reading this story for the 2nd time I love it so much. I can't wait to see what happens! Oh and I can't wait for the next update on the Emmett POV story as well. I'm waiting with baited breath! lol....can't wait to see where this story goes. I love reading all the little details about their lives, thoughts, even clothes. well done!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! just to let you know, i have been and will be revisiting the earlier chapters to make some improvements and lengthen it. Also, i'll be writing a few additional earlier chapters before i end the story. Thanks so much for going back and reading! i'm very flattered and indebted to you!
Love,
Achelle
Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
Wow, my Mari, I would have such a human headache from being thrown around like that, but I think it would be worth it.
When Rose was standing there watching his lips with the blood on them, OMG how hard was that!?! I mean, hell, she wants her tongue in his mouth anyway, and now it has blood in it! Damn!
“I suppose now that your curiosity has been answered, you can keep your investigations and experiments relegated to only animals.” I Ha! That was funny.
“As long as I have you—my angel—by my side, I can’t be remorseful about anything.” Yep! Oh my heart!!!
I looked over at Emmett as he pondered over the novel in his hand—Dracula by Bram Stoker. A snort came from him… A snort came from ME! Funny!
“Now, with it just being the two of you here in the house, I trust the both of you to… use discretion,” Esme said, with a certain look in her eyes. “Especially within the house, as there are so many valuable things here.” OH SHIT! Ooooh shit. If they only had Alice.
My weight was supported with whatever he threw me against. And so it begins. ;)
Clap! Clap! Clap! Love it! Thank you!!!
Love you!
~Jen
Author's Response: Oh my Jen,
i love your reviews! I'm glad i can get an "oh my heart!" from you again! its been a while since V&P's done that for you! Thank you for reading and reviewing, my darling! I miss you!
Love,
Mari
Reviewer: Mizzchia01 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Uninvited
Oh my I love this story so much.Besides the original books i've never read any twilight story that has had the ability to ignight any kind of passion inside me. Thank you so much.
Author's Response: wow, well thank you!! I'm so flattered and happy that i ignighted such a passion for you again! Thank YOU so much!
Love,
Achelle
Reviewer: CherryDarling77 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 23: Broken Walls
Oh Achelle, you BAD girl, cliffhanger of an ending. Excellent as always and oh so HOT lemony goodness!
Loves it :) Can't wait for the update.
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Author's Response: lol thanks cherry. sorry about the cliff, but im glad you liked the lemony goodness! Just sent ch2 of strength and remorse to my beta for some editing before i post it, and im going to begin work on chapter 23 of V&P this week!
Thanks again!
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