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Reviewer: wannabebella (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 08:15 AM · On: How To Own A Lake
nc17 lemons!
Author's Response: Sorry, not likely in this fic, but you never know what will happen in the future ;)
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 07:17 AM · On: How To Own A Lake
I liked that you gave us a fun chapter and some history lesson as well!
Nicely written. Please continue.
sincerely,
Karina.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:30 AM · On: How To Own A Lake
great story cant wait to see where it goes (hint hint) hehe
Author's Response: Lol, oh, it goes places! Crazy, silly, stupid places. Thanks for stopping by ;)
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Itsy Bitsy
I really liked your story, Bella will be Bella!!!
sincerely,
Karina.
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, she certainly will :)
Reviewer: Tayanna-Ushlee (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Itsy Bitsy
It's just like Bella to stutter and make mistakes in her speech over a bathing suit. Eddie made me laugh. Alice is forever the sneaky, mishievious one, isn't she? Liking the story. Update. xoxo~Tay-Ush
Author's Response: Alice is one of my favourite characters, and I hardly ever write her, so I like to have fun with her when I do. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: pBluescript (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Itsy Bitsy
Okay, I should have seen the yellow polka-dot bikini line coming from a mile away, but I guess not. Keep writing! I like it!
Author's Response: Honestly, I was surprised I didn't get a lot of rolled eyes for that one...seems no one expected my level of cheeziness :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Itsy Bitsy
Cute!
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Itsy Bitsy
haha wonderful chapter edward was hilarious! i cant wait for 3! xoxo
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: the_real_MrsEdwardCullen (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Itsy Bitsy
That was GREAT!!! You're really good please write more soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I will!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Itsy Bitsy
funny and too sweet! Sounds like the perfect day...besides the itchy poison ivy!!!!!! I hope they continue to have a fun filled day...drama free!
Author's Response: Thanks! It will be an almost exclusively fun and fluffy story - very little drama involved.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:47 PM · On: When Life Gives You Lemons
hahaha!!!! TOO FUNNY!!!! If I were Bella...removal of all my clothes might be hard, I would hate to be taking off my shirt and spread the poion ivy to my face...I think I would need it to be ripped off of me!!! HEHEHE!!!!
Author's Response: Oh merciful heavens...that never even occurred to me...of course, she didn't really get the poison ivy on her shirt, and this fic was originally written for a site that limits its contents to pg-13, so the shirt ripping might not have gone over too well...but you never know what outtakes will pop up ;)
Reviewer: tarantio (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Itsy Bitsy
i like it very much!!!please go on,it's great and the characters are quite credible in their roles (sorry if it's a too short review but my english isn't sooooo good) anyway go!go!go!
Author's Response: Your English seems just fine! Thanks for taking the time, and making the effort, to review :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Itsy Bitsy
I Really like this story - so cute. Update soon.
Author's Response: Will do ;)
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Itsy Bitsy
So cute!! I'm loving this story already!!
Author's Response: Good, I'm glad :)
Reviewer: Soph Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Itsy Bitsy
ROFL, soooo cute!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: pianoloverr7 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Itsy Bitsy
hahahaha! wow, thats really good! i want more more more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! More will be up soon!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Itsy Bitsy
LOL like you wouldn't try and ogle half naked or FULLY naked Edward. Just do it girl. TAKE ONE FOR THE TEAM! And draw us pictures! LOL i really enjoyed this chapter :)
Author's Response: Lol, if I could draw, believe me, this sucka would be illustrated ;) Crap, I had something clever and witty to say, but the idea of mostly naked Edward distracted me...poor Bella...so awkward.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Itsy Bitsy
Still a cute story, but not nearly long enough! Whaaah.
Author's Response: Lol, later chapters are longer, and there are at least six or seven chapters already written, so never fear :)
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 10:22 AM · On: When Life Gives You Lemons
I am unable to review on ramblings and thoughts, but check daily for updates! I have thoroughly enjoyed and can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I think you're my first stalker ;) Yay! I'm hoping to update on R&T soon, so keep checking :)
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 06:07 PM · On: When Life Gives You Lemons
Interesting I'd love to see where this is going
Author's Response: Bwahahaha! So would I...wait, I probably shouldn't admit that...meh. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Tayanna-Ushlee (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:19 PM · On: When Life Gives You Lemons
He he. It is so like Bella to fall into an ant pile after tripping, knocking herself out. That was hilarious. When Edward whispered, "Acid," and Bella said, "Wait, what?"I was chuckling, thinking duh, Bella. The lemon acid. If I was in her position I probably would have said something like, "Burnin', right?" Eddie would've been looking for reasons how we met and why he loved me.
Keep it up. xoxo-Tayanna-Ushlee
Author's Response: Ha ha ha! I'm pretty sure if I wrote Bella as anything like myself, Edward would run for the hills. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ak24691 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:53 PM · On: When Life Gives You Lemons
I love these sorts of fluffy, pointless but fun fics and you just seemed to have captured the characters perfectly. PLease continue and update soon.
Author's Response: *takes bow* thank you very much! This is actually my first fluff fic (I tend to lean towards angst) so I'm glad you like it!
Reviewer: amagicey (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 06:39 PM · On: When Life Gives You Lemons
cute :) I love ones about E and B trying to do human things....
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 06:04 PM · On: When Life Gives You Lemons
Cute story! Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! Will do!
Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 05:39 PM · On: When Life Gives You Lemons
haha cute i cant wait to read more! xoxo
Author's Response: Thanks!
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