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Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 10

HAHAHA..I love it.

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 4

Rose is almost as manipulative as my mother-in-law.  Thankfully, my husband is not as gullible as Edward. 

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 3

Edward is a pathetic wimp.  He is just no match for Rosale, lol.  I hope when he finally dumps Rosalie (it HAS to happen), he an Bella get together and are on a more equal footing.  I know in other stories Emmett caved to Rosalie a lot but he did it with so much more style and because he loved her, not out of some misplaced obligation and Rosalie totally loved and respected Emmett. .  This romance is just 2 pitiful codependent vampires who need to move on.  I am enjoying the image of poor whipped Edward trying to get back into Rosalie's bed.

Reviewer: lexmac (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 9

I really like this story, please keep going.

Reviewer: LisaDawn75 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 9

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 9

so good.

Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 9

I'm very much looking forward to more of Emmett's thoughts ;)

Reviewer: Sydney (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 9

UGH you need to write more often I still dont get it!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry! Chapter 10 is already in the queue to be validated, so it's out of my hands now!

Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 9

Em is her singer... I can't wait to see how this is going to play out!

Reviewer: LDS (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 9

Lovin your story and am anxious to find out where it's headed.  But what I really want to know, is where is that Best Buy located?  I think I need to pick up a copy of Weeds from that Kellan Lutz look-a-like!   ;)

I am not a writer.....just a voracious reader!

Reviewer: JanCullen86 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 9

Another great chapter! I keep wondering who's going to figure out they're vampires first Emmett or Bella. Thanks for the teaser! It's gotten me excited for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

another great chapter! i can't wait to see where this leads!

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 9

Cute chapter.

Reviewer: New-moon-rising (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wow this story certainly has a good twist to it, thanks for giving us the pleasure to get to read such a fantastic peice of work. lol

Reviewer: ac1984 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 9

really liking this story, very nice play on the characters. cant wait to see how they evovle.

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love it.

Thanks  for  posting.

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 9

Another great chapter!!  Can't wait to see what Rosalie does...

Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 9

wow i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i read all the 9 chapters in once.... this is great...keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1i can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 9

i'm loving it you can't update fast enugh for me!  

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wow. Edward and Rose are match made in hell! Sooooo entertaining!

Reviewer: elanor (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 9

Very interesting.  I'm hooked.

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 9

I love it!!!

Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 9

so good but definitely dying for more...

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 9

oh, please post again soon. i just found your story and i must admit i'm really excited over it. though i must aslo admit that i find the whole edward rosalie thing a bit creepy, and i really feel bad for the poor guy. Give him a break please!

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 9

Fun chapter, I can't wait to see what the next one brings.

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