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Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 10
oh good, a visit from the drama llama!
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 10
I'm liking this Emmett, too ;) LOL
Great chapter...I like that Edward's not trying to stay away from Bella SO hard. The Emmett and Rosalie interaction is wonderful :) I can't wait until they fall in love with each other. I've always supported their relationship. So strong and passionate!!!
More Bella and Edward please!!! :D lol
Reviewer: JanCullen86 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 10
I love how often this story updates! It always brightens my day when I check my email and see that there is a new chapter! This was another great one. I love Emmett! And I loved when Jasper told Edward it's okay to be happy. And the teaser for the next chapter is awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 10
ok enough with the teasers, i need regular daily updates to feed my addiction! So please get your fingers tapping before i go into withdrawal. pretty please!
Author's Response: The story is written! Talk to my validation beta if you want updates faster :) Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 10
I love it. Great chapter.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: dylansmommy06 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 10
great story
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 10
Hmmm. Sometimes I think that Bella really does go too easy on Edward. He has been quite a jackass to her and she seems to turn the other cheek everytime.
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 10
ohh that looks good. please update soon. it's an interesting twist to bella and edward that it's not her scent that drives him insane. though i still marvel at just how stupid he is not to notice that he attracted to her. though i'm just a spectator like jasper i find it all very entertaining.
Reviewer: His Gem (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 10
:) I love it. I hope you update again soon! :)
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 10
I really like Emmett and Rose. I can't wait to watch their "courtship" :)
Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 10
I love how this is developing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 10
Well according to the excerpt it looks like things are going to come to head a lot faster. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 10
Great Chapter!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 10
mmmmmmm i so love Emmett!
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 6
Now THIS is a clever story! Love it! Brilliant! Wonderful twist.
Reviewer: ckate24 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 10
i really love this story, your'e an excellent writter! But I would like to see a little more of Edward and Bella passion, instead of Rosalie and Emmet.
Author's Response: It's coming! Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: cullen_lover (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
this is only the first chapter and i loved it. i loved the fact that edward isnt single and that bellas blood isnt really thta strong for him. it makes things a lot more interesting :)
Reviewer: bells80 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 10
great story!!!
update soon
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
Nice! I lke the idea and writing... can't wait for more.
Reviewer: bismarckfairy (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 10
That has to be my favorite thing anyone has ever imagined that Alice would do to keep Edward out of her head!
Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 10
OMG that teaser is awesome!! Reeeeeally loking forward to the next add =]
As for this chapter - I loved it! I'm enjoying how the storyline is progressing, and seeing the relationship between Rosalie and Emmett. Its great to see parallells between that and Bella and Edwards relationship in Twilight. =]
Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 10
Good chapter. I love Emmette!! Can't wait for the next chapter.. especially after reading the teaser!!
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 10
Nice teaser, Lovely chapter...too short for my tastes, but I can survive a little longer with the promise of more!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 10
I like the idea of this fic, but I think you're making the attraction between emmet and rosalie storger than bella and edward. I wish you could make edward really fall in love, miserabily, and let us see his struggles to resist the passion.
(I can make many mistakes writing, I'm not american, I'm brasilian, but I can read pretty well)
thanks
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 10
Once again another wonderful chapter. Keep them coming, you truly have a wonderful gift.
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