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Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 13
Who can't love Emmett!
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 13
Yay I like Emmets pov wish you could do more chapters with him! Good chapter I hope you update again soon!
Reviewer: Amarie7h (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love your Emmett! He's so lighthearted and fun.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 13
I dont know if I reviwed or not, I read on laptop and Ipod, but can't reply via Ipod, so just a small note to say Emmett rocks, love it, want more and, and more pretty please ASAP with a pouting Alice on top? or maybe a crocked smiled Edward....nummy!
Reviewer: scouting-for-rach (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 13
Aw I love Emmett! He's so funn :D
Great chapter in his POV, you're a really good writer, can't wait until the chapters get longer ^^
Kep it up.
-Rach x
Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 13
hahah I loved Emmetts's POV ! it was so funny! haha how he flirted with Rose ! I wonder what Rose would think if she'll find out what Emmett has dreamt about!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I pity Bella a bit because everyone makes fun of her and no-one understands that she's unhappy
Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 13
i'm reviewing it, loving it as i said before. Now please update pretty pretty PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 13
I hate Rosalie big time. What a bitch. And a hypocrite! You just KNOW she'd like Emmett to hop on over on his one good leg and bend her over her desk! Puhleeze, biatch!
Bella is pining for sure. I LOL'ed when Emmett mentioned Edward's angst - I always mock Edward for that! He's King Angst, Royalty of the Anxious and Unhappy. :))
I'm hoping soon that Emmett just plants one on Rosalie to get her all flustered, and give Edward some ammo!
How do vamps divorce, by the way???
Reviewer: paris877 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 13
really liking this story cant wait for the update.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh I just love Emmett. Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 13
Nice! I liked Emmett's POV. Thanks for posting so freq. Gives me something to read.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 13
Emmett's pov was a nice change of pace. Still can't wait for Edward to dump Rosalie for Bella. I wonder how that would work out. Would they still stay together as a family with their new mates (if it goes in that direction)?
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 13
Emmet was delightful. Well, it is obvious that Edward and Rose are mismatched and I am curious to see where you are taking us before they are paired properly. OMG, but Bella and Emmet are human... and so on.
I too tend to write short chapters, never more than 2000 words, and I know how frustrating this is for readers, as I too am one, but there is nothing I can do about it.
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 13
Loved the Rose Em interaction and I look forward to more.
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love your Emmett. I'm sure his inner voice can be an endless source of entertainment to Edward :D
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love Emmett's POV. Great chapter!
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love Emmett! He's awesome. :-)
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love Emmett, he's amazing.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: caednkat (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
Yay! I love Emmette!!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 13
haha you write emmett perfectly!!
Reviewer: lindaj (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 13
Love the Emmett insight! Please try to put in a few more alternate POVs like this! I would love to hear more from Rosalise. Alice and Jasper seem to have taken a bit of a backseat in this story, so it would be lovely to hear their observations on the whole scenario as well. Great chapter!
Author's Response: I know, apart from the four main people in my story the others tend to get shafted, especially Carlisle and Esme. I'm just not so good at handling so many characters and I tend to forget about the supporting cast. Though Jasper does have practically a whole chapter in which he stars coming up soon, so hopefully you will like that.
Also, there will only be one other alternate POV, but it will be from Rosalie (it's in the early twenties, I think, so you have a ways to go for that one). You'll get a chance to hear from her what she was really thinking when she got together with Edward and her thoughts on Emmett, etc.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 13
Emmett is freckin awesome!!!! So funny! can't wait for the next one
Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love Emmett - his outlook is so refreshing and angst-free lol
It was such a great add, I can't wait for the next add! Teaser is awesome x
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 13
can't wait for more
Reviewer: tattoochic911 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 13
I've been reading your story so far, and I really like it. I have to tell you, though, believe it or not this was one of my favorite chapters. Definatly good to have a lighter mood. Emmett is awesome!
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