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Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 17
I LIKE THE TEASER, AND YEAH, ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE TO BELIEVE THOSE TWO COULD STAY TOGETHER THAT LONG----IT IS ONLY BECAUSE OF EDWARD"S GUILT AND SELF-LOATHING, THOUGH-NOT BECAUSE OF ROSALIE BENDING.
THE CHAPTER IS GOOD, AND IS A NECESSARY STEP FORWARD!
Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 17
Well that chapter was not so interseting because we already knew that bella knew what Edward is and that they beroke up but I see that you needed some kind of transition !
I'm looking forward to the next chapter,
Yours, Cathy
Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 17
I'm really loving the story. Thank God Edward is done with Rosalie. That was just wrong!
Hope you send that next chapter soon!!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 17
Great chapter
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 17
I hope you update fast! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 17
So far so good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 17
bella has always been very perceptive. can't wait for more
Reviewer: maryrose (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 17
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) He knows she knows. She knows that he knows what she knows. And everyone who read this all ready knew. And that's life. Update soon Plis!!
Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 17
ugh teaser! how about just a really quick update?
Author's Response: The next chapter is already in the queue! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 17
Thank you Thank you Thank you! I love it so much!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 17
70 years is a long time for a couple to be together and just walk away like it's no big deal, ya know! I'm glad that Edward and Rosalie are no longer together, believe you me, but that's an awful lot of history... and baggage to overcome. Is this going to end with Edward/Bella and Rosalie/Emmett because it's looking that way. Now, the question is if both Emmett and Bella are going to be turned? Oh, the twists this tale could take!
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 17
lol at the teaser. that's too long to compete with. lol.
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 17
Well Good! I'm glad that its finally out there. "Vampire" and all:) I'm looking forward to see what happens next. I'm just glad that it isn't Edward and Rosalie anymore!!
Reviewer: Ljchurch21 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 17
You are good at this....This is one of my fave storys!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 17
Nice
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 17
poor edward had to endure 70 yrs of the wrath of rosalie.. thanx god he grew some balls and bid her farewell.. he should be with bella always.. and emmett can handle rose better.. thats just how it should be.. lol thanx for writing
chasity
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 17
GReat chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 17
I thought this was a very good chapter. You underestimate yourself.
Reviewer: Snakehips (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 17
great story. I am really enjoying this !
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 17
ooo, excitement! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Alice.x
Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 16
MY MY MY, I just started reading this and I've read all 16 chapters in one night (thus the other review I left). Its AWSOME! I've never even heard of a twist on the story like this, its absolutly creative and I couldnt...put it down? Since I'm reading this on a laptop I guess thats right?
Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 10
OH WOW!! I live in Vegas and I had no idea there was a lazy river at the MGM. I did know about the one at Wet n Wild here but they closed that down like forever ago... :D
Reviewer: AngelAbrielle (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 16
UPDATE SOONER THAN 2 WEEKS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
GREAT CHAPTER
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 16
YES! FINALLY! I'm so glad they broke up. I'm glad Rose is letting Edward do what he wants too. Can't wait to read more. Looking forward to the E/B interaction. Please update soon.
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