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Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 17
Great chapter. Glad they've started the conversation. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Drea85 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 7
i hate rosalie and edward...ugh...but i love emmett as bella's brother, it just fits
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 18
This was a good chapter. Im so excited that they are going out on a date!!! Can't wait for the next update
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 18
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! AWESOME!!!!!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
OH, THAT IS FUNNY THAT EMMETT THINKS ROSALIE IS ANOREXIC!!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
Great chapter... Prob. my fav. so far!
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
Are you going to use the Port Angeles chapter from the book? Or at least incorporate the danger element from it? I can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 18
I am so loving this right now. :-)
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 17
Interesting, I like that they are now moving forward, I would love a chapter from Rose POV too. More please soon.
Reviewer: purplemilk27 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 17
Don't sell yourself short. I think this chapter was way more than 'meh.' It's a great little teaser of how Bella and Edward will interact in the future of the story!
Reviewer: helenleiten (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 17
It's really awsome story. I read 1-17 chapters without reviewing so I'll do it now :)
When I read that Edward and Rosalie are a couple I was like wtf?
But I'm glad that Edward found Bella and put love first than obligation.
I love the characters. They are soo like in the book. Especially I love Rosalie, you've got her character really good.
Okay will we see Emmett and Rosalie together sometimes?
Please update soon!! Can't wate...
- Helen
XOXOXOXO
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 17
I'm glad to see Edward being much less angsty, like he's resigned and accepted the fact that Bella, and probably Emmett, will be a part of his life. I can't wait for the next update!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 16
Yea! I'm glad that Rose was caught spying on Emmett...she's not perfect either, lol. And I'm super glad that Edward and Rose finally had it out. Although I'm sure it was a big deal to Rose's pride, she will be much happier with Emmett.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 15
Jasper is awesome. I love it when I get to read his POV because he gets to see and experience things that people (and vampires) lie about...their feelings. Awesome chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 14
Methinks Bella knows...Jake and the legends and Google and all. Edward is going to have an awkward conversation with her sooner or later....and it definitely sounds like Rose is falling hard for Emmett.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love me some Emmett! He's definitely just what Rosalie needs. What a funny chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 17
i do have a comment for the teaser first because it's the last thing i read. Edward is obviously not afriad of commitment.
otherwise i really do like the chapter though i'm left wanting more as ususal.
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 17
Yay!
He's single and they're talkin' Moving in the right direction now!
Loved this chapter :)
Reviewer: TRIsarahTOPS (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 17
My heart always gets cute little flutters when we get to the Bella/Edward fluff. :D
Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 17
i just read the whole thing with in 2 days maybe less! I love it! i also like the whole back story about Emmett. I just love him too! Now b/e can be together! woohoo! please continue soon!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 17
Please update soon! I'm soooo happy they broke up. On with E/B!
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 17
Hmm. Getting more and more interesting. I'm liking it.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 17
Can't wait for more. I'm really looking forward to read how Emmett and Rosalie will come together.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 17
I thought it was a good chapter. Keep the story coming. It is wonderful.
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 17
Lokking forward to more...
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