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Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 19

The story is getting so much better now that Edward and Bella are starting to see each other. Great chapter!

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 20

Loved it!!

Reviewer: TheJodine (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 20

love it!

Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 20

Haha...Charlie laying down the law. I can't wait for Rosalie to finally give in to Emmett.

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 20

ooh, smoooooooooching in the car!! woohooooo!!!! :)

Reviewer: Ljchurch21 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 20

I love the previews but I get so angry I can't keep reading

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 20

Well, it looks like things are going very well between Edward and Bella... surprise, surprise!  Now, if Rosalie would just give in to poor Emmett.  This story is really interesting.  I'm enjoying every chapter.  You changing things up to make Emmett a singer for Rosalie and Bella's RL brother is unique enough to keep me anxious for what's to come.

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 20

go charlie, I love it

Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 20

I liked the date!

I'm a bit dissapointed that Charlie hadn't his gun with him when he came to the car!

I hope that Edward asnd Bella will now be offically together since they already said the three magic words !

Yours, Cathy

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 20

Nice

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 20

Soooooo cute.

Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 20

PPS!!!!!!

Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 20

Love it..

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 20

great first date....

can't wait for more

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 20

Ooo I like this playful Edward!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 20

Great chapter. I loved the date. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 20

Loved their first date, especially the scene with Charlie at the end, he must have been very focused on that kiss.

Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 20

AWESOME! It just keeps getting better and better!  More please.  hehe

Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 20

yes declarations out and returned, If Bella isn't his singer and he has experiance let the naughtiness ensue. More soon please

Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 20

Ya gotta love Charlie :D

Reviewer: breecreely (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 20

bow chika wow wow

Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 20

I really liked this chapter, I can't wait to see how it continues!

Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 20

awwwwwwwww.

Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 20

Mmm, good stuff!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 20

Loved it!!! Im happy they are together! Update soon please and thank you.

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