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Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 21
nice
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 21
I'm glad you're not making this a really really chaste story where Edward keeps pushing Bella's advances away "for her own good". The kisses they share are very hot!
I really felt for Bella when she's feeling upset about her lack of sexual experience, but I'm glad that they had the conversation now rather than later. She needs to know she's the one Edward wants. Great chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 21
Sweet perfection. That was wonderful.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 21
It just keeps getting better. update soon please.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 21
Some people think Edward watching Bella sleep without her knowledge was creepy, as in stalker creepy. I never did. After all, he never touched her when he easily could have and he did tell her when the time was right. You captured that perfectly here. I don't know how accepting Rose is going to be to all of this, but things seem to be going well between Edward and Bella. I still can't get over how well you've twisted this tale. To have Emmett as Bella's brother and Rose's singer! Who'd a thunk it? I know. You did!
Reviewer: Forever (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 20
omgomgomgomg! I cant wait to see how these relationships develop. Especially how Emmett gets Rosalie to finally say yes.
On a critical note, Your story is flowing quite nicely considering how short the chapters are. Your quite a skillful writer to pull that off :]
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 8
you're right, i didn't see that coming.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 7
i like it. i'm looking forward to emmett!
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 20
Another Great Chapter!! Im just glad that they got to go on a proper date:) And Emmett at the begining just cracked me up. I swear he is one of my favorite characters. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: kristiG (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 20
really good =)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 20
That was such a great chapter. I love how Charlie caught them. You do such a great job of updating so fast ( I hate it when you have to wait 10 months for another chapter). Great writting.
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 20
Can I just say that the LACK of ANGST is REFRESHING!!!! Thank you. And I love the kiss. So adorable!
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 20
*Snicker* at them being found kissing by Charlie. I'm glad they're talking more and that Edward didn't make fun of her for buying an Anne Rice book. Good job moving them forward and for Edward realizing what Bella means to him so quickly and not having his head stuck up his butt. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 20
Oooh, I can't wait- nice chapter!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 20
I love how you have Bella and Edward connecting. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Eternal Dreamer (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 20
Update again, soon! Vastly entertaining :)
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
really edward and rosalie? omg this is going to be intense! i can't wait to see how edward and bella get together! :]
Reviewer: twilighterx33 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 20
Awww they are sooo cited! Anywhoo you are awsomee ilyyy update before I loose my mind pleaseeee
Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 20
yeah!!! cant wait for the next chapter!!! loved it!! and they both said i love you!! sigh....please update soon
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 20
oooohhhh this is another awesome chapter!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 20
Another wonderful chapter. This is one of my FAVORITE stories. Keep updating.
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 20
It's interesting. Sincerely, do not think that Bella will get too much accuracy from her research book :D.
I like happy Edward.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 20
now we're getting to the good stuff! Edward and Rosalie was just...ick!
Reviewer: izzyemme (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 20
So great!! Update soon!!!!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 20
Great chapter! Leave it Charlie to ruin the kiss.
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