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Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 22
I thought the way you wrote Bella's interaction with the Cullens were perfect. It got to the point. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 22
nice
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 22
Great chapter. It's refreshing to see no angst in Bella & Edward's relationship. I don't mind the angst between Emmett and Rosalie, because of the fact that Emmett is so lighthearted. But how will you introduce the idea of changing Bella and Emmett?
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
Hey, you don't "completely fail" with the Cullens/Bella anything, truly. Why so hard on yourself? This chapter WAS really Em/R, so give yourself a break! Look at all those reviews you have - people are reading and sticking with this story! So chin up, sista. I, for one, love it! And I like the premise that he was with Rose, and had to decide to get out of the relationship. And look, goofy Emmett for some tongue action, even if it was brief and nearly cost him his life. haha! :)
I look forward to the next chappie - as MANY do, I'm sure. :)
xoxoxo
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 22
Wonderful!!! More please.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 22
i almost feel sorry for Rosalie....and i defnitely feel sorry for Emmett...he has his hands full with her...lol
can't wait for more
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 22
Good chapter. Emmett is just too funny.
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 22
Emmett is fast! :-)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 22
SINCE EDWARD IS NOT A VIRGIN IN THIS STORY, I'M ASSUMING HE AND BELLA WILL BE HAVING SEX BEFORE MARRIAGE??? AND SOONER RATHER THAN LATER?????WHICH IS JUST FINE WITH ME!! :)
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 22
hurray for rose finally giving in... should be interesting to see how she decides to handle this since we all know they end up together
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 22
Could I love your Emmett any more? *Checks* Nope!
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 22
i am really liking this story. Please update soon.
Reviewer: andreaschloe (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 22
Lookin forward to reading more!
Reviewer: deacongirl01 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 21
I can't wait to see how the visit goes. I'm really enjoying this story and hope you continue writing.
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 21
Loved Bella & Edward's little "sex talk". I like your BxE's relationship much better than SM's. Once Rosalie comes around to admitting she loves Emmett, I wonder what Edward's opinion of changing Bella will be. Surely, Rosalie will want to change Emmett, once the subject comes up. Right?
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 19
What an amusing story, really light and fun. And I love your Emmett/Rosalie. It feels like they are the actual center of the story so far, but it's fun:)
Still hope to get more of Bella/Eddie
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 21
Great chapter
Reviewer: Maria20116 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 21
You're a fantastic writer. This story grabbed me from the start. It's so enthralling. I've added this to my favorite stories list.
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
Well, Rosalie craving for Emmett's blood instead of Edward for Bella's? That's new:)
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Surprise indeed:) I keep reading
Reviewer: obsessedwithangst (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 14
I'm really enjoying your spin on this, you definitely have a great imagination and a talent for storytelling.
You're also hilarious, I love your "I own" quips at the beginning of each chapter!!!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 21
yay for edward and bella make out sessions... can't wait to see how roe handles the house visit
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 21
cute chapter!
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 21
Good chapter. Poor Bella thinking of the 70 years of experience Edward has and comparing it to her virginity. I think he handeled it very very well. I'm glad she's going over to meet Esme and Carlisle.
Reviewer: maryrose (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 21
Update soon PLIS! Great chapter:) loved the whole thing:)
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